Arhi FF: Tangent Worlds. New Ch-6 Updated, pg-16. 25/11/13. New!

srija.singh04 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Hey guys! What's up?
Now, here I present another of my Arshi or more like IPKKND Fan Fic. Unlike my earlier work, 'Chamkili', this story doesn't take off from some point on the show, but is infact entirely mine, with ofcourse the exception of borrowing the much loved characters from the Fourlions popular hit, 'Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Doon?' I have been practically living with this story for the last few days, trying to figure out how this would work, and what my characters should be like, and what turns and twists would make it more appealing. And well after a lot of thinking, I finally decided to give up thinking and just go with the flow and take the story as it comes.

Here now I have crossed my fingers, as I present to you another of my creations,

TANGENT WORLDS


Chapter I: The Scream



"Aaa!!"
Someone had screamed. There was so much that some incoherent noise could explain when one of the greatest devices of man, language, coherent language, failed.
"AAA"
There it was again, and louder than before. Desperation was blatant in it, as if someone was hanging on to the last shred of fear' and hope. And then all went quiet. Still as death and dark as the color black.

She turned around in that impenetrable darkness, trying to see through it and failing miserably. She had to locate the direction of the scream, or'
Silence surrounded her, making the darkness all the more terrifying. She scrunched her eyes close in fear, praying her constant companion, her guiding light, her Devi Maiya, to show her light, to make her hear that scream once again, just once' she knew she would be able to figure it out then' She will have to and SHE WILL. And in the very next moment, her eyes opened wide. She heard that voice again. But unlike the desperate scream that seemed so persistent on finding a way-out, she heard broken sobs. They sounded' beautiful, almost melodic, and her heart wrenched listening to that beautiful, mesmerizing music that followed Tragedy in his wake, spellbound by the magic that he created, Tragedy, her master.

Feeling something break inside her, every time she heard those sobs and then feeing the void those fractures created deep down, as she heard the silence, she began her pursuit. There was no need to hurry anymore, whatever was at stake, was lost already, she had known that when those violent screams had become gut wrenching sobs and desperation' despair. Now all she wanted was to delay the moment, just pull the reins on time, if she couldn't move it back, and suspend, even if momentarily, that which awaited her, for she knew it was there somewhere, hidden but there. Her steps were slow and seemed to follow innately the rhythm so unique, and yet one, that all knew, the rhythm of despair.

And finally she could see it. A bundle of white outlined against the surrounding darkness. She could have easily confused it with something lifeless and unnecessary hadn't she already known, but she did. She started leveling herself to come face to face with that rocking and sobbing bundle' And then she saw it, just what she didn't want to see. The tear-streaked face lifted up and looked her in the eye, and there she saw it, ugly naked despair dancing and celebrating her newest conquest. There wasn't a sight more dreadful that she had ever seen, and she knew the memory of it would haunt her for life and perhaps even after it, if there was a life after death. And then she heard that voice again, a hoarse whisper' or a sigh of resignation was it?
"Khushi!"

PS: Hope you guys like it and please do give your opinions, there is nothing more than words that can encourage a beginner like me. And yes a lot more is to come, so stay tuned. :)

Signing off for now,
Srija Singh

For Index Scroll Down😳

Edited by srija.singh04 - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

112

Views

18.1k

Users

40

Likes

335

Frequent Posters

srija.singh04 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
INDEX
Chapter 1: The Scream
{Up}

Chapter 2: Brothers and Sisters
{Pg:. 4}

Chapter 3: Family Honor
{Pg:. 6}
Chapter 4: Wrong-Right Right- Wrong
Choices
{Pg:. 9}

Chapter 4: Destined Destinations
{Pg:. 12}


Edited by srija.singh04 - 12 years ago
Viji79 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Congratulations on starting a new ff. it sounds very intriguing and I am going to wait for this storm to take me over. You write amazingly well.
ouiouith thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
congratulation for starting a new ff

keep going all the best

waiting for the parts
Shina_srkfan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
pm me wn u nxt update! great start :)
shanon thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Nice start.

You are brilliant.it's really a brilliant piece of writing..
Loved it.
Waiting for the next update. And thnx for the.pm.
srija.singh04 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Viji79

Congratulations on starting a new ff. it sounds very intriguing and I am going to wait for this storm to take me over. You write amazingly well.

Thanks a lot for your wishes dear😊
And I sincerely hope that u like this story, as a lot is going in my mind and I hope I am able to do justice with the idea😳
please6 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
love it sounds interesting plzzz update soon and thank for the pm
bea_rom thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
lovely beginning
well build up tension

angelrosey thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
good one!

u must continue ! <3

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

2 months ago

new morning, new day.

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1015 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1015 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".