The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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JeeLeZaraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Hi. Sorry I havnt been able to come on the forum for a couple of weeks because I was gone to india to be part of my close cousin brother's wedding. I have checked, but I have not gotten any email from you, but I remember sending you my email 😕 What happened? 😒

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Hey Muskaan!

Amazing update...You wrote it very beautifully...Arjun past was very saddening...only if Mr Rawte would have given a second thought before saying all that,things would have been different..

Riya's fear was very well explained and written...now, I just hope that Arjun is successful in killing Sikander and his plan doesn't backfire...

Update soon...Thanks for the PM!

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suklapanja1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

i am sukla.

hey you dont send me the blog link.

you reply my message.

now tell me how i read your ff. please reply.

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

muskaan di..hm apko bolg me reqst access kar diye h..is baar plz misplace mat kijiyega...m dyin 2 rad the chapters!!1 thnk u😛😛

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

sorrie to commnt late..
again u came up wid an amzing update…
jus lovd it..
Flashback was
beautiflyy expressd nd writen..
hatts off to u..
aww.. poor riya
she's scard of datt *beep* sik..
arjun's plan is awesome to kill sik infrnt of ri so dat she
can ovrcme her fear..
jus lovng ur evry piece of wrting ..
Continue soon

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sunshine34

@sunshine34

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Hi im Aashna. I really like ur writing. I read all parts last night and just loved it. You created a lovely story nd i wish riya was still in the show. Wen i was reading i couldnt help but giggle like a weirdo and my siblings wer like wats wrong with her. the bck stry was awesome and i really liked the fct that i knew wat was happening from the start. it was very clear except obviously it is a story so sum things wuld be revealed with time.
Chapter 1- i really like how uv shown riya to be patient and calm. She is waiting for the fruit as dey say. We noe arjun cares and this is seen through him attempting to scare her. Love the way u mke it seem real

I am sunshine 34677 on wordpress. Please accept would like to continue reading

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_Roka_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

allah mya what wrong with u !!! i can;t believe u just let him leave u r so crazy arjun

awsam update sorry 4 the late replay my net was off more than 10 days

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wondergirl1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

chapter 13...😭very very emotional update arjun bohot ziddi hai his mother is so sweet...i literally cried reading it...& riya she is so desperate but she is scared that is why she is doing it...MR Suryakant rawte sirf nam ke hi king nahi hai he said four sons aww he so sweet ...Arjun sat down and kissed her, fully on her lips. As soon as his lips touched hers, he knew what he had to do. He quickly slid his hands in her top and touched the back of her innerwear. He did that so shamelessly that every pore in her body stood up but shied away ..in lines ko padhkar i was blushing pata nahi riya kaise react kar rahi hogi...yeh arjun to pata nahi kya karnewala hai sik ke saath ...waiting for next update ...pray for me my exams are from 3 march..thanks for pm..thanks...👏ab khush .Arshi