The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 17

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devildiva21 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb fab update as usual...!!!
loved it very much...!!!
flashback scenes were portrayed very well...!!!
had tears in my eyes after reading about arjun and his mother...!!! poor arjun feeling so bad for him...!!!he saw his mother dying infront of him...!!! and the way he cried...!!! it was very emotional...!!! his emotions are beautifully portrayed...!!! it explains his behaviour why he is like that...!!!! omg his dad said so harsh words...!!!!
glad that he is now making amends and trying to patch his relationship with him...!!! the scene where arjun was crying and his father consoles him was very emotional...!!! loved his dialogue ki he has four sons and two of them are outside eavesdropping on them...!!!
arghhh that bloody sik...!!! he molested her...!!! hope arjun kills him soon...!!!
omg so riya wanted all that because she was scared that he will be back...!!! happy that arjun knew something was scaring her and he made her tell him that...!!!
arjun set that bloody sik free...!!! but his viewpoint on doing that is also justified...!!! its the only way to make riya come out of her fears...!!!
hope he kills that bloody sik very painfully...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyy already commented on wordpress

Amazing update dr

Keep up the good wrk

Waiting for the precap

Pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I didn't got the invitation yet.
Edited by Kareena1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello Muskaan😊

I just finished reading all the parts of this FF and I must say you are an awesome writer👏👏

Loved every bit of it

Keep up the good work👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
this post is 4 all d ppl who r recieving updates from muskaan di on fading butterfly...can any1 plz let me knw how i can get access 2 these chapters..actually m nt used 2 indiaforums...so mereko kch samaj nai a rha...samjhane ki zarurat h😉😉..ya i mean it..plz tell me how i cn read them...muskaan di has added me in d buddy lst n pm v kia tha..i folowd d blog link but in vain..plz tell me kaise padhu inhe...plzz😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">this post is 4 all d ppl who r recieving updates from muskaan di on fading butterfly...can any1 plz let me knw how i can get access 2 these chapters..actually m nt used 2 indiaforums...so mereko kch samaj nai a rha...samjhane ki zarurat h😉😉..ya i mean it..plz tell me how i cn read them...muskaan di has added me in d buddy lst n pm v kia tha..i folowd d blog link but in vain..plz tell me kaise padhu inhe...plzz😳😳😳</font>

dear I think tum mere notes nahi padh rahi ho,, :( Maine kaha ne...reply how you felt about all 10 parts I mean how you felt while reading it...and mention your I'd at the end...I will add you one I rec the replies of all the parts... 😃


Waise I think you replied me na...aur Maine add b Kar Lia...chk the mail dear 😳
Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Muskaan..
I did respond on your previous thread ...do let me know if you have scene it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey muskaan babes really v.sry foh the late rply i was bsy wid ma practicle xams n sme prsnal issues..

d part was awsm yaar awww arjun mom died😔 agar vo zinda hote toh thng would hav been much bttr nw...

arjun n his dad bth r ryt at some points n wrong too unke egos ne unhe kitna door kr diya yaar bt nw dey bth patched up..i love tat part arjuns break down tat was really v. emotional n d way he said he didint kill her mother n he is nt a murderer i was lyk😭

n day way arjun ne riya se savh ugalvaya i was 😲

arjun ne sikander kamine ko chod diya tats was shocking too bt i appreciate his decision n tat was ryt too i hope ki riya ka dar jaldi se khatam ho jaye or arjun sikander ko maar de..

i tohught k ispart me sikendar mar jayega pr aisa nahi hua are yaar jaldi se use maro m w8ng for tat part...

n most imp i wanna tell u tat ma xamz r starting so i wont b able to rply u to ur next part if u update it before 20th march aftr tat ill rply u bt plzz do pm me if u update next part


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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi,

I am so sorry for never commenting on your updates before. I knbow understand how painful it must be to wait for something and then not get it. Sorry for hurting you. As an apology, here is my comment on the 10 parts. Hope you like it.

1st part

It was a very good introduction to the ff. It gave an insight into how things stood. The switch between the past and the present gave an idea about the changing equations of both Riya's and Arjun's emotions. Arjun was really cruel towards Riya, but she on the other hand was sweet, caring and tolerant.

2nd part

The big boss concept was awesome. Though it gave a dominating mentality of Arjun, he really did care about Riya. How much ever he tried to show otherwise. Amit and Riya are too good together, an innocent relationship. Sikander- Uff, I just hate him.

3rd part

Loved how Rathore reacted after knowing the truth. Arjun's cruelty deserved a right answer. Riya- "I am already taken". It showed her confidence in Arjun and how she loved him. Sikander really deserves a punishment for whatever he is doning. Rathore rocked the update. And Riya in rain- I could feel the poor girl's helplessness. How could someone do something like that?

4th part

Atleast Arjun remembers that he had locked up Riya. Arjun starts claiming her as his from here onwards. Calls her- "His Wife". He is gradually giving her the rights he had denied when she was there with him. Hope he realizes that he needs her more than anything.

5th part

Arjun arrived at last. She must have lost most hope by then. How he cared for her. Any wife would have jumped up and down in joy and the mere thought of it. Poor Riya, she had to be unconscious when Arjun was giving her everything that she must have ever wanted.

6th part

The reason for Arjun's rude behavior was so sad. I had already gone through som mant theories on my own. But the real one came like a blast on the face. How cruel is that Sikander. He killed Roshni. Glad that she has a part in your ff. Arjun was just trying to keep Riya safe. But then………..

7th part

OMG. Arjun kissed Riya!!!! And that too so passionately. Arjun have to be strong for Riya.

8th part

Riya was comparing their faces. How she pictured herself as lowly and bad. She believed that she was not good for him at all. Arjun's comment was also superb. He is really concerned for Riya's safety. Amit part was also funny as well as sweet.

9th part

Arjun's anger was superb. The prince in Arjun is so powerful. His father, the king, is also like his son. Like father like son. Shree proved to be a really good friend. Sikander, "I hate you!!!!!!!!"

10th part

Arjun's desires. Oh my god! This man had so much in his mind, bu never expressed anythong. I was really blushiong reading it. Riya is too innocent and childlike. She was so scared after hearing everything.

ETF chasing sky. Wonderful update. Hope to see Riya reciprocating completely.

Please sent me the link for the update na. Please, please, pretty please!!!!

My id: twicrea@gmail.com

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Posted: 12 years ago
its really fab muskaan... sorry for the late comments i tried a lot to comment in my phone bt all the time it goes vein. thnx for the pm. 😊

its really an emotional chap i had tears in my eyes wen i was readin it.

really arjun has gone threw alot first his mothe then his friend roshni n most importantly his most precious thin in his life his love riya...

sik molest her im feeling like killing him 😡 how dare he touch her...

and she asked arjun to make love with her i cdnt stop blushing bt thn i got to knw y she is behaving like that...

i hope arjun had make a gud decision by letting sik freee... im scared plx dnt let anythin happn to riya... she has gone thrw a lot plx plx ...

continue sooon plx plx plx

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