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Hi Muskaan ,
I really entered the forum very late, thus caought with your work
Coming to your FF..
Arjun- He is the super cop but he is both aggressive & arrogant and slightly grey for me .He is completely different from the serial and her relation with Riya just walks on a thin thread . In beginng i really couldnt relate to this Arjun but as you have revealed his scars coz of roshini thats brings a very differnt shade altoghter other wise i would have really started hating him ...but i now get his behaviour.he cant tell her about his love - would be so frustating .
Arjun- He is the super cop but he is both aggressive & arrogant and slightly grey for me .He is completely different from the serial and her relation with Riya just walks on a thin thread . In beginng i really couldnt relate to this Arjun but as you have revealed his scars coz of roshini thats brings a very differnt shade altoghter other wise i would have really started hating him ...but i now get his behaviour.he cant tell her about his love - would be so frustating .
But he is too dominating for me , he will always do whatever he wants..As far his desires are concerned he is pretty vocal about them 😉not that i am complaining ..but masing everything behind his anger and indiffernece and rudeness ..is sad.I wished he could just let Riya know about the past rather than hurting her ..But i am sure you gonna make him come around prety soon
Riya - she is the epitome of innconce. I mean she really loves him so much that she would suffer any thing .her only solace being Amit ..her relation with Amit and the other ETF members definately shows her caring nature .But i wish you could show her a litlle less submissive and opening up to Arjun .She is like a damsel in distress who finds solace with the one who hurts her ..ironic ...I really thought when Arjun tried to force himself she would retaliate ( the feminist in me is talking)but i know live blind hai par let Arjun regret what he has done with her ..Coz he definately have left scars on her mind
ETF team - They are and will be best .Shree /Chotu and Rathore concern for her was well explained .Even rathore and her bonding ..there scene when she brings the food esp ,Rathore anger on Arjun after hearing her calling Arjun Sir hits the right spot.Even the support they provide to each other .
Specail comments to rathore - he is too god as a chief ...quick thinking ...
Sik - An intelligent criminal (browine points for chosing Sik) -..the mazes ,the boat secne /Coffin so well written .It does take a lot of time to think and more to write about it.
Sik - An intelligent criminal (browine points for chosing Sik) -..the mazes ,the boat secne /Coffin so well written .It does take a lot of time to think and more to write about it.
Do we see more of him in future ???
Amit - Can i take him home ...He is brilliant sketched and so are his scenes with Arjun & Riya ..he can ne Junior Arjun in anger ..and they way he takes care of Riya ❤️
Please can i request a much stronger Riya ..and not too submissive ..not crying types ..(Please bura mat maana )
I am more intrigued that how will you mould the characters going forward amd shape them up...
Email- sips_crazy@yahoo.co.in ( I msged earlier too but my email has issues )
P.S- Its just My POV on the charaters i didnt mean to offend you ...ill definately love to read how u mold them forward
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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