[OS] Six Degrees of Separation

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome bubbli,

Yeh it wasn't happy ending but the story was so beautiful...

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arnkush

@arnkush

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

oh my god that was terrific, why don't you make this ff or ss or 3 part series or something like that. Please don't leave this story like this.. It would be interesting to read more of your thoughts. Please consider it...

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was a really different, but enjoyable OS.

And hey, India and Pakistan... that was the epic-ness of it! 😆

Lovely, nice reading it from a schoolgirl's prospect... 😆

Awesome!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

beautiful... awesome story...👏

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

omggg

soo sooo cute..nyc...heart touchng
loved it a lot...
it does happen wit everyone

omggg i can totally relate to it bt d scenerios r diffrnt

yes it was gud u stopped it here..

it was awwwsum
u wrote it so welll

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Amazing os..

Thanks 4 d pm

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

This OS was a very different attempt, and many can relate to the practicality of the situation in this OS, because things like that happen in one's life, like a shared smile, a little nod, a silent communication... You get the drift... Some things in life are better left as it is. They don't have to have an ending - good or bad... Like we'll never know what the boy thought of this interaction, or if it affected him as much as it did to the girl (and I'm saying 'boy & girl', and not Arnav and Khushi, because, I feel that one can relate to this even without this being about A-K)... A nice one, Ana!

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783730

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Lovely!!!!!

Could actually feel the feelings... It was so tangible...😊

You know the feeling cuz it happens!!!

At some point, it has happened to all of us...

😊

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This is wonderful..i loved it.
Yet it really hurts me to think what could have been if it isn't for indo-pak..so i wont think.but this is reality.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

That was absolutely fantastic and one of those piece of writings which take you back to some moment, some feeling...great job! And I loved the fact that no names were used - added to the reader's scope for imagination. The ending added to the effect of melancholia over an important yet you dont really know why moment which you know you can hardly ever get back...great job! :)

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