[OS] Six Degrees of Separation | REMOVED - Page 4

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

Well i guess alot of ppl maybe able to relate to this one... the story had an essense of its own... it clearly struck a chord with me...beautiful...

Originally posted by: Manitaa

The ending was one of the finest ones ive read in a while.

I remember sitting through the parade at Wagah border. My maternal grandparents live in Amritsar, never in my wildest dreams has this ever happened though. 😊

Six degrees indeed!

Originally posted by: niharika111

That was one of the most beautiful pieces I've read in a while! It was mesmerizing! I wish that in some parallel universe they would meet in a neutral territory and give this 'moment' a chance to bloom into something more meaningful! Well...there's no harm wishing! 😊

Originally posted by: arnavbarun

awww

just loved it

wish they meet again

I remembered a quote (not sure if its relevant) but that was the first thought which came to my mind "Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing

and rightdoing, there is a field.
I will meet you there."(Rumi)

Originally posted by: arnkush

oh my god that was terrific, why don't you make this ff or ss or 3 part series or something like that. Please don't leave this story like this.. It would be interesting to read more of your thoughts. Please consider it...

Originally posted by: massu91

omggg

soo sooo cute..nyc...heart touchng
loved it a lot...
it does happen wit everyone

omggg i can totally relate to it bt d scenerios r diffrnt

yes it was gud u stopped it here..

it was awwwsum
u wrote it so welll

Originally posted by: Happy-go-lucky

This OS was a very different attempt, and many can relate to the practicality of the situation in this OS, because things like that happen in one's life, like a shared smile, a little nod, a silent communication... You get the drift... Some things in life are better left as it is. They don't have to have an ending - good or bad... Like we'll never know what the boy thought of this interaction, or if it affected him as much as it did to the girl (and I'm saying 'boy & girl', and not Arnav and Khushi, because, I feel that one can relate to this even without this being about A-K)... A nice one, Ana!

Originally posted by: winiwonka

Lovely!!!!!

Could actually feel the feelings... It was so tangible...😊

You know the feeling cuz it happens!!!

At some point, it has happened to all of us...

😊

Originally posted by: Anupama.

This is wonderful..i loved it.
Yet it really hurts me to think what could have been if it isn't for indo-pak..so i wont think.but this is reality.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

That was absolutely fantastic and one of those piece of writings which take you back to some moment, some feeling...great job! And I loved the fact that no names were used - added to the reader's scope for imagination. The ending added to the effect of melancholia over an important yet you dont really know why moment which you know you can hardly ever get back...great job! :)