[OS] Six Degrees of Separation

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

Should be updated on blog soon.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved it!!! Not a perfect ending, but perfect for this story.

It gives you the feeling that this could happen to anyone, and probably has. The way they looked at each other gave me butterflies in my tummy!

Beautifully written.

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Saima

@Diaphanous

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very nice. Good job. Loved it.

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

res..

dis was seriously amazin..:)

evn i wish 2 c once in my lyf. the ceremonies at Wagah Border...atlst once..

n wt happnd here b/w Arshi probably..happns sooo many tyms in our lyf..

bt its nt alwyz yu rememba ol d evnts..der r sum special..

juz lyk dis 1..

bt it cud hav been real 4 dem..i wish..dt wud hav been amazin..:)

uhmm kinda lov at 1st syt..a stry 2 rememba..:)

well..as alwz loved it.:)

i lov ur Os alot..bt

juz a reminder..yu hav a stry on hold..:D

lol

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

Well i guess alot of ppl maybe able to relate to this one... the story had an essense of its own... it clearly struck a chord with me...beautiful...

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

The ending was one of the finest ones ive read in a while.

I remember sitting through the parade at Wagah border. My maternal grandparents live in Amritsar, never in my wildest dreams has this ever happened though. 😊

Six degrees indeed!

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was one of the most beautiful pieces I've read in a while! It was mesmerizing! I wish that in some parallel universe they would meet in a neutral territory and give this 'moment' a chance to bloom into something more meaningful! Well...there's no harm wishing! 😊

Edited by niharika111 - 12 years ago