SwaRon OS Series: Ye Dooriyan. Scene3+4 Pg20 Apr1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I've been wanting to write this scene ever since Sharon's return. I'm loving the focus on her but it just disturbs me when her POV isn't portrayed. So here, I will be posting the scenes and the behind the scenes POV of Sharon 😃

I have 4 scenes written down so far. I will update them all one by one. Hope you will like! More than SwaRon, it's on Sharon... It's not like my other works where I'm creating my own scenes. So you won't see much creativity here. Just descriptions... emotions... and feelings.


Tanya had been bugging me a lot to write OS, SS, FF on SwaRon only. So here's that OS Tanya! SS will come later on. As for FF, it might not come in recent years. [Don't kill me!] 😆😳

Scroll on down!!

I n d e x .

Scene 1 Page 1 - The Decision
Scene 2 Page 16 - A Promise Made
Scene 3 Page 20 - The Talk
Scene 4 Page 20 - What can Never Be.
*rest undecided*


Love,
Khushi.
Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm calling this series Ye Dooriyan... I'm sure you guys will see it's justifiable :D


To get PMz on my works and updates of this OS series, please add
--silvermist--

I send pmz of FF/SS/OS updates that are related to D3 from there 😃

Scene 1 - The decision.

She took in a deep breath as if to calm herself. Today was the day. It was finally here and she could not back down now. There would be no more delay. To her, it seemed as if the real journey of life began at that moment. All that she lived through till then was merely a glimpse. Her life a prologue like the ones in stories and books!

She closed her eyes to go back to the moment that changed her life. The moment when she discovered she would unwillingly have to go away from everything and everyone she loved. Her choice didn't matter. It was only abdicate or get executed, in a way, so to say.

She gathered her composure and stepped out of the car. Upon seeing her, the smile on the girls' face brightened as they gave her a tight hug. Her eyes fell upon him. Swayam. The one she desired. She could feel him reaching out to her when he turned as if some supernatural sensation told him that she had arrived. The wind suddenly turned soft and the world seemed to stop for both of them as their eyes met. If it was up to her, she'd keep looking at him all her life. Hesitantly, she forced herself to look away. She turned her back on him. Yet, she could feel the happiness in Swayam's heart. Without even seeing him...

The winning goal was made and their whole team erupted in fits of happiness and cheers. Sharon took this opportunity to disappear before Swayam's eyes would locate her again.

[Scene of Sharon reliving memories in the auditorium, Swayam coming in and the harsh words of Sharon]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5TsZ8L8OiA[/YOUTUBE]

[Video credit to the uploader]

Upon leaving the auditorium, she ran for the college terrace. She couldn't handle all the pain. Never had she dreamed such a point will come in her life when she had started falling for Swayam. She didn't want any of this. All she wanted to do was run in Swayam's arm and spend the rest of her life with him. Oh, but the cruel destiny. Or call it fate. It just never wants her to be happy for a long period of time.

Something always has to go amiss. Hugging her legs, she cried her heart out. Did she mean any of the words she said to him? Of course not. Never in her wildest dreams either. But she had to. And she would have to continue it till she made sure Swayam hated her and not an ounce of love for her was left in his heart.

It was decided by the Gods. She would never be able to dance again. And she could not take away dance from Swayam. Other than being a lover and a friend, dance was his one identity. Due to something happening to her, she wasn't going to be the reason for him staying away from dance as well. She wouldn't be able to bear that weight on her shoulders.


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Scene 2 will be on after Sharon agrees to be the captain 😃 Depending on the response I receive, I will decide how fast or how late I will update 😳


Yes. It is short. As I said, it's just description, emotions, feelings and the hardship... as the CVs decided to skip that 🥱 Feel free to watch the video! Hopefully it'll bring forth the emotions.


Waiting for views/comments. Criticism always welcome 😃

-love, Khushi.


Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tanya- I shall PM those SwaRon fans in my PM list. But it is up to you to get the readers. Your promise. Remember? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So finally apne Swaron ka OS post karne ka kasth kar hi liya.. huh? 😆

God, the document you sent me was quiet longer then the one you have posted now! Seeing lots of changes too but yeah still the plot is same!! 😉 So basically i was the first lucky one who got her hands on this OS!! proud proud proud! 🤣

Well, the danger is on our way because our dearest Khushi has started another write up and everybody knows she is not at all lazy!! 🥱 Someone please hold me or else i will fall down.. i never laughed this much in my life! 🤣

So are you boiling just like this 😡..?? If you are then i am super happy!! 😎 Because i am like this way only who loves teasing other!!😉 Especially you sweetie! 🤪

I know.. i know i am zipping up just a few things on scene too! 😛

Well, it's will be great for me!! Remember Swaron and me, me and Swaron. Yeah exactly, i adore them no matter what but yeah still it doesn't mean i like the scene just because it was Swaron there. Nope. You wrote it beautifully!! Tere liye ek jhappi.. 🤗

I like it moreover as the song attached created a double swing mode to read!! All my idea!!😛 Oh, please don't thanks!! 🤣

So i have already been added into your misty misty account!! So.. Ermm lemme think one more time.. 🤔 yeah nothing more to shoot is left! 😃

Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ermm, Can you attach a song Yeh Dooriyan too just like in Guzarish, it will help you a lot as it gives more of a feel to reading! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^Already had planned and done 😃



Erm... I'll send pmz later on in the night 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved for now..
Unreserved

Khushi dear what was that..
Never expected this suprise from you..
Aww such a plaesent suporise..
And the Monologue of Sharon was one thing that CV's dont give their fans...
And you have done that beautifully...

Tu sare tiltes ke liye songs kahan se dhundti hai...
Great one...



Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnk u for This gift from you..
Sharon pov is what we all want..
Beautiful discriptn..
Sharon's self confessin is here thnk u for it..
Awsm write up..
Thnk u tanya for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one
Do pm wen update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi undoubtedly u r an amazing writer..:)
U portray each n every emotion just perfectly..
Once again luvd ur work!
Keep writing...:)

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