SwaRon OS Series: Ye Dooriyan. Scene3+4 Pg20 Apr1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Part 3 was nice but I loved part 4 more reason-Sharon's pov after khamkha sequence which I desperately wanted to read.
Simmi is a true friend.Erm one more thing can u add some sharon-simmi part in next scene when sharon will come out.A simple hug or maybe a lil convo?N yeah about next part u can also add India fest beach scene and store room sharon's pov.
ps. As NJ said no one can write pov better than you.
Will be waiting for next part

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

i liked all the four scene great swaron os... loved it to the fabulous os...
continue soon and pm me...

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

fabulous... loved it

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

awesome update

Originally posted by: Suni1986

The way u show Sharon POV was fab.
Sharon feeling vulnerable in front of him, she don't know what to do, she feeling helpless that moment.
Simmi really know her lot re

Originally posted by: yogini64

nycee... 😊

good to read sharon's reactions...😃

she don't think that she deserve his love...

but she wants it... she needs it 😳

still she push him away...

its soo difficult to not show him love...😭

when he's practically invoking her with all his love ... 😊

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

loved it..awesome... its hard to get sharons pov mostly...

but you are brilliant at it... loved it...
helplessness of hers and simmi's try to be with her...

sorry zayda ache se comment nahi de rahi hun...tests on my head...

update soon..

thanks fr pm...

Originally posted by: vaishu88

loved d update.. both scene 3 & 4 were great.. loved it.. it was fantastic.. scene 4 sharon's pov was great which was missed out in d show.. thanks for d pov.. loved it.. simmi s true friend n understands sharon wel next to swayam.. sharon didnt want to b harsh on simmi n said in a calm way coz she s her bestie n cant c sharon in pain.. loved d pov of sharon towards swayam.. d more she pushed him d more n stronger becomes his love n care for her.. loved it... waiitng for next scene..