My Teacher // link to new thread on page 51 - Page 24

beautiful part dear

awedome dear plz dnt plan to discontinue i loved it very much

Hope all is well at your end.

Waiting... 😳

The storyline is interesting! Geet & arjun aka maan has a relation in past..maan knew her & remember everything..and has come to fullfil his promise of taking care of her no matter what!
Where as geet didnt recognise him..as she has buried those memorise of maan in her heart..as her grandfather had told her that he will never ever come back for her!
Geets father liked maan and has chose maan for daughter..thats what it seems from part5..
and u hav mentioned some ceremony before maan left in past..what that can be? May be to seal their relationship.. Binding them together!
And its very clear that both maan & geet had feelings for eachother in the past too..
But destiny or should i say the old richanda played his tricks and created a big misunderstanding between these two!
And now..
Geet has fallen for arjun without knowing that he is her maan..or may be her heart has recoganised him, subconciusly. .. While arjun is trying to supress & hide his feelings for geet..remembering how she had hurted maan in the past..according to him!
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I am loveing It!😊
waiting eagerly for next part..
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I had read ur ILWE... And like many other readers of ur's.. I too agree that it is a "master piece"! If a bollywood movie is made on that story..it will be a Super Duper HIT! Without any doubt!
The way u hav written it..its simply amezing!
And u hav used that song "dil mera ek tara..."
that song is my fav! geets emotions complimented the song. And u hav described it so beautifully!
I want to say so many things as i didnt get the chance to comment on ILWE thread..thats why i am saying all this here.. Hope u dont mind😛
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Waiting even more egarly for u to continue ILWE...

part 5
awesome dear...
my God Maan i mean Arjun is such a determined and strong person...
very clear headed...
and Gee doesnt know anything about this...
so her dad wanted them to get together?
cont soon dear...