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Shefali16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Wow!
how did i mis ths!
its superbly written...

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Shefali16

@Shefali16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

The story is so damn gud nd intriguing...
read al parts in one go
plz update soon..

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

so it was all planned by geet's father n he had taken promise from arjun to take care of geet hmmm, now i m understanding arjun little little.
oh n update was hot in its own way.
Awesome part continue soon.

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Antares

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Sorry for the late comment... did not get a chance to read earlier due to time constraints.

Read the first 3 chapters... awesome!

I'm so glad that even though you changed Maan to Arjun, it's still the same people playing the characters of Geet and Arjun. Could not have imagined anyone else. Even the name Arjun actually goes with setting of the story.

So Geet is haughty but with a good heart. Arjun definitely knows Geet from past and loves her, it seems. Geet also feels something for her teacher. I am loving the way the story is moving forward.

Took a sneak-peek at the next 2 chapters, looks like it has things about their past... will read them and comment soon.

Thanks for the PM!

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Antares

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Read chapters 4 & 5... superb!!!

Ah, both Arjun and Geet are not able to keep away despite their best efforts. Arjun thinks Geet doesn't remember him... but Geet does! Maan does make an entry here... me likes it!

It was fun to watch jealous Arjun and Geet.

Enjoyed their little romance in his room. His care and concern and her quasi realization that there is more to them than she thinks.

Past... ok so this is what had happened. This is how Maan was born! Udai had it all planned?? About Arjun and Geet?? Quite a far-sighted person. Can't wait to know what's next and how their misconception about each other clears. Do continue soon.

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Debolina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

when wl u updt nxt??? ❓
waiting..waiting..waiting!!!

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

its one hell of an addicting story...simply awesome writing

jst luvd it 😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

missing this story...

please continue soon...

Posted my comment on last chapter as had2bu to you by PM so please check that...

Avi..

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

I really loved the whole update till now. Now I get a clear picture of Arjun and Geet's relationship, asd yet you didn't leave the name Maan.

Love the whole door scene between Geet and Arjun. Their expression and their conversation was worth reading.

And the fire scene was the highlight. It shown the affection and care between Arjun and Geet.

Geet was drawn in passion with Arjun's arm, she liked him as Arjun not as her once known Maan. That really hurts Arjun because he wants her to love him as her Maan not as Arjun.

Flashback on how Arjun and Geet meet is really good.. So this is how they both meet. Great….

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insight555

@insight555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Read all the updates. . . .Love your style of writing. . . .Extremely happy to see you back. . .Please try to update ILWE. . . .
Eagerly waiting for an update. . .