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Sehar

@-SmexySmile-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

loved the update...
eagerly waiting in the past..
as both Maan n Geet remember n miss each other..geet's grand father might b behind it..
waiting for the next part...

Edited by gcddfan - 12 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Simply awesome update again Reet...

You have a way to set the screen on fire with the portrayal of the chemistry between these two. 😆not to mention there was a real fire too..

It is almost understandable the self fight he has that she is attracted to Arjun and not Maan.

Vikas is ugh... want to bash him on the head for being underhanded. And why is he following her around.. creepoid...

Loved the story of how Arjun became Maan. It is telling of society how the people with power can hold education in their hands like that..

While everything was superb I have to be drawn again to the couple here. They are simply stunning and beautiful together. Every expression and action-reaction is captured so well here. It is as if you are watching it and giving us a one on one commentary... Very well written...

Thanks so much for updating...

Eagerly waiting for more..

Avi (had2bu)

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jazzdh

@jazzdh

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Res

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Loved it sooo much!!!
Awww poor geet got burned...
Loved the hot moments between the 2..
Why arjun dont just ask geet?! It wud finish their misunderstandings and wud also finish their pains. Stupid arjun!!
So geets father had always liked arjun aka maan...hmm

Pls update soon
Waiting for next part

Edited by jazzdh - 12 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

wow, the story is getting adorable and its getting me hooked and making me addicted to it irrevocably👏...
fabulous is an understatement...i am completely dazzled by today's update...the past and present both had been enchanting made me glued, not able to see, think of anything else, but visualise the scenes...reet u havent lost ur midas touch...
keep writing lady

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

wow.. it was simply awesome..
i loved how u described the story behind the name maan...

i think there is some gadbad like why arjun thinks that geet betrayed him???
geet didn't forget maan... her grandfather's consipiracy..

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

why isn't arjun revealing all of these to geet?who is the third one?i think it's vikas or dia.

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

superb update waiting for next

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

superb part waiting to know more abt the past update soon

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

after reading all the parts I can only remark...IT'S HEADTURNING!it's my xam in few days..in between study got bored n i jst came on IF..n in FF forum..the title of ur ff caught my eyes..n started to read...couldnt stop myself from reading all d parts at a stretch...I should read Prufrock now..instead m reading u!!see...the effect u hv on ur new reader!:)
when u'll update next..if possible plz pm me...if i coudnt read den..surely i wl after my xam.
once again..HATS OFF for bringing such a different content for ur readers..I've ever come across in maaneet ffs.