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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 17

Pori is waiting outside for Ved but he doesnt come out.. She is walking back and fourth.. pacing and then she finally sees him

Pori: Ved?

Ved: Didnt I tell you to get out of here what are you still doing here?

Pori: I was waiting for you stupid!

Ved: Look i dont have time for you i have to go home bye!!

Pori doesnt understand and she still doesnt know that he's married!

Pori: Why are you in a hurry to go home these days.. is it because Disha is back????????/

Ved: PORI???????/ 😡

Pori: why are you getting so mad?

Ved: Mind your language okay!!!

Ved leaves all mad and it ruins his day!

Dk and Ved are sitting in the car

Dk: Forget about Pori.. she is old news!!!

Ved: I want to kill her so badly!

Dk: Dont worry.. you are married now.. you have wife who loves you very much!!!

Ved: Yeah... but i never told her about Pori!

Both are quiet....

@ home... Dhruv took his 1st step!!! Disha was so happy but Khushi stands then sits back down again!!!

Disha: Dk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dhruv took his 1st step!!!

Dk: What? That's great!

Dk looks at khushi he goes by her she holds his finger and she walks w/ him...

Disha: Dk.. that doesnt count.. she has to do it by herself..

Dk: Dont worry she will!! (He makes her stand and slowly very very slowly in front of Dk she takes her 1st step too!!!!!!!)

DIsha: Oh my god!!

Dk: See i knew she had it in her... (All are enjoying)

Next day:

@ work it's lunch time and Ved is sitting by himself having lunch when all of a sudden Pori comes along!

Ved: Dont you have anything better to do?

Pori: No.. besides to follow you!!!

(Some1 is taking a picture of them...)

Ved: well just go!!!!!

Pori: Ved whats wrong with you? are you meeting somebody?

Ved: Matter of Fact no!!

He gets up starts walking and she follows him... she gives him a big hug and some guy takes a picture....

Ved: What the hell are you doing???? I told you get lost!!!!!

Pori: What did i do? I just wanted to give you a hug! 😔

Ved leaves and she has a wicked smile on her face!

The person who ever was taking the picture developes them and are printed on the 1st page of the newspaper.. Sia gets a hold of it and is shocked.........

Sia: THis cant be!!

Ved: what happened????? why are you crying??

Sia: Can you explain this to me?

Ved: (Shocked) I am going to kill her!

Sia: Who is she??

Ved: Her name is Porineeta.....

Sia: What were you doing with her?/

Ved: Its nothing what it seems like!

Sia: Oh so you werent just hugging her...

Ved: Sia, you are misunderstanding.....

Dk: What happened Ved?

VEd shows him and Dk is shocked......

Dk: Oh my God!! Sia it is nothing what it looks like.. she is a horrible past we all want to forget..........

Ved tells her everything about her on how he loved her etc......Sia is convinced!!!

Dk and Ved go to work

Dk and Ved are having lunch when Pori comes again..

Pori: Hello boys!!!!!!!

Dk: Dont you have anything else better to do than come here?

Pori: I just wanted to ask you how your morning was?

Ved: Mine was just fine how was yours?

Pori: FIne? didnt you see the newspaper? we are famous

W/o anyone knowing Dk calls Disha... he doesnt say thing but she hears everything and comes there w/ Sia!!

POri is still going on and on ..... DIsha and SIa finally arrive...

Disha: Pori, wat are you doing with my husband?

Pori: I am just talking! (Saying it w/ attitude)

Disha: Well go away from here!

Pori: Hey girl who are you? (talking to Sia)

Ved: Pori, this is Sia......... My wife

(Pori is shocked)

Pori: Wife?????????????????

Sia: Yes. wife!

Pori looks like an idiot.. and she walks away!!! All four enjoy thier lunch!!!!!



Pori comes to Jail to meet Gargi... havent talked about her yet!

Gargi: You, what brings you here?

Pori: I have some wonderful news?

Gargi: what?

Pori: Your Son Ved, is married!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gargi is shocked!!!!

Gargi: WHat?????

Pori: Yes he is married to some girl named Sia

Gargi: He got married w/o me!

Pori: OH who cares... But he got married!!

Gargi: Well as long as it wasnt you i dont care!

Pori: I will remember that Gargi!! You dont know Porineeta

Gargi: Oh get lost from here.. you talk too much!!

She leaves her and Gargi is lost in her own world thinking about Ved being married!!!!!!!!!!


Dk is on his bed @ home playing w/ his kids!!! Dhruv is just playing w/ him and Khushi gets a little mad and starts crying!! (Cuz she's daddy little girl and all)

Its late @ night and Dhruv is gone to sleep... Khushi is still by Dk she starts falling asleep next to him...

Disha: That nerve of Pori.. what does she think of herself?

Dk: I honestly dont know!!!

Disha: Poor Sia.. i wonder what she was thinking?

Dk: Oh well it doesnt matter anymore... but i tell you this if she comes back again i will not spare her!!!!!

They just continue to talk and Dk tried to put Khushi in her crib but she started crying so she slept next to Dk again!!!!!

hope you enjoyed.. will continue tomorrow....

For those who wanted to know my name.. my real name is Vanita!


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Posted: 20 years ago
#62
Its an excellent story plz continue can't wait wait to hear the next bit vanita!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#63
Why can't TD be like this....da sweet n cute romantic scenes are exactly what TD needs and what we WANT!! Keep ud da bril work!😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yes i agree with DKdish, why cant the serial be like this story, or the other storyies like rang and eran is writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

write the next part sooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#65
Part 18

Ved goes meet Gargi in jail only because he found out that Pori came to meet her

Gargi: Son... you have finally come to meet me

Ved: What did Pori say to you?

Gargi: Nothing what would she tell me?

Ved: She told you that i got married right?

Gargi: Yes she did.. but why are you so worried?

Ved: I am not worried!!

Gargi: I wanted to hear it from you.. Son why didnt you tell me you got married

Ved: WHen do i tell you everything...?

Gargi is sad..

Gargi: look i know i havent been the great mother to you but at least give me once more chance......

Ved: After everything you have done... i dont even know

Gargi: But can i meet my daughter-in-law once?

Ved: i'll see..

Ved leaves and comes home and goes to his room

Sia: Ved.. you looked tense what happened?

Ved: nothing..i went to go meet mom today!

Sia: How did that go?

Ved: Like it always does nothing

Sia: If you dont mind.. can i meet mom one of these days?

Ved: Do you really want to meet her?

Sia: well yes, she is my mother in law...

Ved: When i go i will let you know!!

Inside Dk and DIsha's room

Disha is folding clothes most of them they are all Dk's clothes... she puts one of his shirts on...

Disha: Hmm.. not bad!!

Dk walks in and is looking at her and laughing

Disha: (see's dk).. Dk i was just....

Dk: Wearing my clothes!!!!!!!!

She takes it off ... but Dk stops her from taking it off....

Dk: No leave it..

Disha: Why?

Dk: Because you look very cute when you wear my clothes!!!!!

Disha: (Blushes 😳)

Dk goes out because Ved is calling him and Disha puts Dk's clothes away and when she opens the drawer a book falls out... it is Dk's diary...

Disha watches out in case Dk walks in and is debating whether she should read it or not... but then she decides to read it....

It is from the beginning when they were married... (When they hated each other)

She reads on and on about what DK was feeling all this time and comes across a page on just Disha.....

Today is the day that i have decided that Disha is the one who i want to spend the rest of my life with. She means the world to me........

IN there he wrote a poem about them: which is reads:

A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.


DIsha is like crying and thinking oh my god...

She hears DK and coming and puts the book back

Dk: What are you doing my love?

Disha: NOthing thinking about you!!!!!1

Dk: Me too!!

Disha: Liar!

Dk: No i am not... i never lie to you!!

Disha: Okay... so if ask you something will you give me an honest answer??

DK: Of course Disha..

Disha: What do you love about me?

Dk: Thats easy, (puts in a poem like)

I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.
I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.

Just by listening to that Disha gets all chilled....

Disha: I love you Dk!!!!!!!!!

(They both hug)

Next day:

Sia goes to meet Gargi in Jail Ved didnt wanna go so she came by herself./

Officer: Hey lady come girl has come to meet you!!

Gargi gets up... and she see's Sia....

Gargi: Do I know you?

Sia: I am Sia, Ved's wife

Gargi: Oh Hi... where is Ved?

Sia: Oh he didnt come...

Gargi: (sad) Oh i see!

They talk and talk and Sia is about to leave....

Gargi: Please take care of Ved.... I am relying on you to do that!

Sia: I will! I will take your leave.. By mom

Gargi: Bye.. (Surprised cuz she called her mom)

Gargi is just thinking about why she did what she did... and how she could've been at home... well i guess she deserved it!!!!!!!!!

Sia comes home

Ved: So how was it?

Sia: We had a long convo.

Ved: She didnt say anything bad to you

Sia: Oh no! She was nice

Ved: (thinking to himself) She better have!!!!

Sia: How long are you going to be mad at your mom?

Ved: Not until i get over everything!!

Sia: But how long? You cant be mad at her forever!

Ved: Yes, i know but you dont know how mad i am at her...


Later on they both go to sleep,, next morning Dk is sleeping when Disha comes and wakes him up....

Disha: Good Morning Dk.. (Kisses him on his cheeks) Dk get up!!!

Dk: (Doesnt respond)

Disha: Dk!!!!! Get up!

She grabs a pillow and is about to him when he grabs her and ends up on top of her.... 😛

Disha: Dk... let go!!!!!!!!

Dk: No..you woke me up now i am not gonna let go of you!

Disha: Please! Some1 might see..

Dk: let them! (He starts kissing her)

Disha has no control and she starts kissing him too.. but then all of a sudden Khushi starts crying and he stops.........

Disha: Go Dk.. its for you! (She laughs) ....

Dk: Bring her over here!!!!!!!!

Disha picks her up and she calms down and puts her next to Dk... Khushi grabs Dk's shirt and wont let go!!!!!!!

Disha lets the two be and go gives Dhruv a bath..........


Well i have to go dance and class and pick up my sister from school i will cont. 2nite!!!!


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Posted: 20 years ago
#66
nice really good

Good job
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Posted: 20 years ago
#67

nice one i am expecting these scene to be shown in the serial

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Posted: 20 years ago
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well disha is giving dhrv a bath.............................................
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey vanita

nice name😳

u r doing a marvelous job👏

cant wait 4 the next part😃

love KP😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 19

3 months later:

Dhruv and Khushi finally turn one!!! Dk and Disha are having a big party for them. Everyone comes...Meanwhile @ the Bhonsale house it aint a pretty sight Gautum wants to get married to a girl that he likes but Sukanya says no.

Gautam: Whats wrong with her?

Sukanya: I will choose the daughter in law for his house you understand me!!

G: I will not marry anyone else.. i said it before and i will say it again.. and if you dont like her then tough because i am getting married to her!

Sukanya: She doesnt have class nor status...

G: So, i dont care...

Sukanya: You will see me dead if you marry this girl...

G: You've said once theres nothing stopping you this time!!! (👏 👏 👏)

Sukanya: What are you going to do? Elope?

G: No something better i am going to make Aai get us married...

Gautam goes to the bday party with this girl her name is Priya.....

Disha: Gautam.... How are you?

G: How's my little sister?

Disha: Happy!!!!!

Aai: Gautum you came and who is this beatiful young girl...

G: Her name is Priya...

Priya: Namaste Aunty

Aai: Namaste

Disha: Oh so my brother has fallen in love!!!!!

Gautam convinces Aai to get them married... and she agreed that she would... Meanwhile back @ home Sukanya is complaining how one listens to her and blah blah blah.......Disha announces at the party about his brother's engagement and everyone is happy.... The wedding day will take place in a week...

One week later:

Disha: Are G, you arent ready yet.. hurry up!!!

G: I am coming Disha whats your rush?

Disha: I want to bring my new bhabhi home!!

Dk: DIsha.. you are such a rush bug!! Men need to take their time!!

G: Exactly Dk!

Meanwhile Priya is getting ready @ home... when her dad comes in..

Priya's dad: Well my little girl is not little no more 😭

Priya: Dont worry dad i will come everyday to visit you!!!

Dad: I have always been proud of you now this time i hope you wont let me down!!

Priya: Dont worry... i will take care of his house and i will not let anything happen to it!!!

She doesnt know that Sukanya is gonna make her life a living hell poor gal!! just wait!

Everyone comes from Gautam's side... He sits and Priya comes out.. G cant stop looking at her... everyone is smiling... so is DK! The wedding is going on... Sukanya isnt to happy about it and pretends she's happy! after all its her son's wedding she has to come!!!!!!!!!

The wedding is done.... and Priya cries and cries and hugs her dad.. she finally lets go of him and they all go.... 😭!!

Priya is welcomed in the house by everyone... They all have their laughs... Disha and DK go home!

Priya went inside her room and is waiting for G, he comes in!

G: Are you happy?

Priya: (Nods her head yes)

G: I am finally happy because i got you!! I promise you that you will get treated right here and nothing is going to happen to you! I love you Priya...i really love you!

Priya: I know you wont let anything happen to me... I promise that i will take care of this house!!!

They both hug each other... and she says I love you..... and then you know!!!

Next Morning:

Priya: (Is cooking in the kitchen.) Aai and Sukanya are up and Priya gives them food.... Aai is thrilled and compliments her Sukanya just smiles... afterwards Aai leaves and Sukanya starts 😡

Sukanya: Hey girl... dont try to act to innocent it will work with her but it wont work with me

Priya: excuse me?

S: I know all you girls trying to marry rich guys and impressing thier families... You listen to me.. what ever happens i will not except you as my bahu.. Understand?

She walks off Priya is sad 😭!! Meanwhile... 5 months past and Sukanya has always insulted Priya but she never said nothing she kept everything to herself......



Meanwhile... It is Disha's and Dk's 3 year anniversery... (just go along) and Disha is dying to kno what Dk has planned.....

Disha: Dk... she comes up and hugs him...

Dk: What happened DIsha... you are in a romantic mood!!!

Disha: Just because!!!

Dk: Oh.. i know why! Happy Anniversery!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: YOu remembered!!!!

Dk: Of course!! How can i forget that today i married the most prettiest girl!!

She blushes 😳

Disha: So wat are we going to do today?

Dk: I dont know i really dont want to go anywhere! you know cuz of the kids and stuff!!

Disha: Your lying...what are we doing?

Dk: Nothing!! (he walks off and disha says to herself... I kno he does have something planned but he's not telling me.. i have to find out!!!

SHe comes out and everyone's just talking Dk however is not at home!!!

Ved: Happy Anniversery Dish.

Disha: Thanx!

Sia: Hey Bhabhi.. Happy Anniversery!!

DIsha: Smiles.... Hey Ved what does Dk have planned for today?

Ved: How should i know? he never tells me anything!!!

Disha: OH come on what was he saying??

Sia: Oh just tell her Ved!!

Ved: Tell her what?

Disha: Ved.. you know something i dont tell me...

Ved: Okay.. Dk doesnt want to go out anywhere today.. he said that its to rough with the kids so he decided he wanted to stay home today!!!!

Disha: WHat (Shocked)

Sia: Yes Bhabhi.. i heard it when they were talking.....

Ved: Brother said... its only 3 years nothing else!! so why go out? so he just wants to stay home today!!!!

DIsha: ONly three years.. i will show him three years!!!!!!!!!

Dk comes home and he is talking to Ved and DIsha is listening....

Ved: Hey brother.. i want to take Sia out on somewhere romantic... what would you do if you were going out today.??

Dk: Well we have always gone out.. maybe you too can enjoy a nice candlelight dinner and watch the stars at night!!!!

Ved: WOw.. thats really good! You still got it brother!!

Dk: Yeah i know!!! We are getting old.. whats left? thats why i didnt want go out .... we always do that!!

Disha heard everything and she is sad!!!!!! 😆

@ Bhonsale house:

Sukanya is still @ it again!! she wont shut up.. No one knows about this cuz priya hasnt told no one! Sukanya just keeps insulting her everyday about any little stupid thing!


Back @ Dk's house


DIsha is on the couch and is flipping through Magazine pages and is all mad 😡 Dhruv(dad) and SUm are talking about back in the day and how romantic everything was... and Disha overhears and is sad 😭😭

Sia and Ved come back from their little dinner... Dk comes out....

Dk: So ved how was your night?

Ved: It was great!!!

Dk: Thats good!!!

Disha is mummbling things to herself.......

Dk: Disha, did you say something??

Disha: No i didnt say anything (all mad)

Dk: You seem to be mad all day.. is everything okay?

Disha: Yes everything is fine... just fine!!

Ved: Hey Dish.. whats the matter?

Dk: Ved you know what i think she needs.. i think she needs some fresh air...

Disha: I dont want any fresh air....

Ved: Oh yes you do...

Evryone convinces Disha she needs fresh air and grabs her outside... and When disha comes outside she is shocked too see that DK had a surprise for her...

Dk: I was thinking that this year why not you and me Travel around the world.. in thisi hot air balloon!!!!!!

Yes Hot Air Balloon!!!!!

Ved: Dish, me and brother planned this a long time ago!! we knew you were listening today to our convo.. we just wanted to make you even more mad!!!!!

Disha is really happy and hugs DK and cries.......

They both hop on and enjoy their little Journey.....

Disha: YOu still are Mr. Romance!!!

Dk: I love you very much Disha.... there is no way that My wife is going to stay home on her anniversery......

They just enjoy themselves.. and Dk has arms around her and in heaven!!!!!!!!


Nite nite!! Write Back tomorrow!!!!


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