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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
Part 14

Disha is like in a total shock of her life......

Disha: Daddyji???

Dhruv: I dont know what you are talking about!

Disha: Daddyji...you are dk's...........

Dhruv: dont say anything please

Sia: Bhabhi you know this man?

Disha: Sia, He is Ved and Dk's father

They both take his blessing

Sia is shocked too because Remember Ved told her that Gargi killed him...

Disha: I thought you.......

Dhruv: Died right??

Disha: Yes

Dhruv: Thats why Sumitra thought too but the one that Gargi killed was not me it was someone else!!!!

Disha: Come on.. we are going to take you home!!!!!!

Dhruv: No you guys must be living in peace and i dont want to disturb that!

Disha: I called you daddyji right.... i am not going to leave you until you come with us!

Sia: Daddy, she is right you have to come home with us... where are you going to stay? you cant be in this condition

Dhruv: I can see that my sons are very lucky to have to good wives like you!

Both of them smile but before they take him home they get him ready like cleaning him up etc.....

Finally they open the door.... and dhruv comes in he is behind Disha and Sia Sum cant see him

Sum: You guys are back so soon!! How was your shopping? (Holding a plate in her hand)

Disha: It was good... We bumped into someone while shopping!

Sum: Who????

Disha and Sia both move and Sum sees Dhruv and is shocked and she drops the plate on the ground.. and walks very very very slowly towards him......... and finally she reaches to him... she made it!!!

Dhruv: Sumitra????

Sum (crying) 😭 Dhurv??????????

Disha and Sia are crying!

Dhruv: How have you been? (She is like speechless) I am sorry that i never came back to you!!!!!!!!

Sum: Bbbbbuuuuttttttt thaaaaaat Dddddaaaaaaaayyy (stuttering But that day) Gargi....

Dhruv: That wasnt me who she shot... that was another man who was standing behind me.... When you turned around the other way you heard four gunshots... I moved before the bullet hit me and i ran off but when you saw the dead body you thought it was me and thought i was......

Sum puts her hand over his mouth....

Sum: Now i dont want anything else except you! You have finally come back to me after so many years..... i dont want to lose you again..........

Disha goes by the mandir and takes the sindoor

Disha: daddyji take it.....

Dhruv fills her maang and Sum is crying like hardcore and they both hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So everyone is crying....

Disha: Daddyji, your grandchildren.......... Dhruv and Khushi..... (Dhruv is touched)

Dhurv: Now i know who they are going to look like when they grow up!!!

Dhruv: By the way where is Dk and Ved??

Disha: They have gone to Goa to finalize a deal for their buisness.... they will be back tomorrow in the afternoon

Dhruv: what will they think after seeing me again???

Disha: They will be happy! Trust me!

Sia brings food out and everyone eats....

Dhruv: Disha... if you talk to Dk please dont tell him i am here let him find out tomorrow!

Disha: OKay! I wont!

Dhruv: I always told Dk that one day he will fall in love with a girl... and marry her one day.... But i didnt know he would marry such a beautiful girl like you! and Ved...

Disha: daddyji, Ved is such a little boy!!!! That is why Sia is going to set him straight!

Dhruv: That's my girl!!!

All laugh and stay up talking..... Disha and Sia go put the kids to sleep and they both go to sleep.... Dhruv and Sum are in the room and are just talking because neither of them can sleep!!!!!!!!!

Sum: W/o you my life is nothing!!!!!!!

Dhruv: what you mean? You have two good daughter in law's to take very good care of you!!!

Sum: Yes.. but when my husband isnt here our family is not complete!!!!

Dhruv: I am back now... now there is nothing to worry about

Both hug and go to sleep!!

Disha and Sia are singing aarti when Dhruv and Sum come out ready... and are joining them!!

Dhruv: How did my sons find these two cultured girls?

Disha: Why??

Dhruv: Because my son is very lucky to have you as his wife!!

The day passes by and Suddenly Dk and Ved come Dhruv is nervous like crazy and he goes into his room...

Dk: Disha!!!!

Disha: I am coming!! Why are you yelling?

Dk: Cuz i missed you!!!!!!! (he says it softly.)

Ved: Sia!!!!!!!

Sia: Are baba!! why are you yelling also??

Ved: Just because!!!

Sum: Oh so no body misses their mom everyone only cares about their wives not their moms! i see!!!!

Dk: No Ma i missed you more than Ved.. Ved didnt even think of you once....

Ved: Mom, he's lying!!!!!

All are laughing!!!

Dk: Ma, why do you have.... (He sees the Sindoor)

Disha: Uhh.. Dk..

Dk: Just a minute Disha... Ma......

Dhruv comes out of his

Dhruv: Dk???????????

Dk feels as if this some illusion..........


Okay i will cont.. later!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#52

wow. execllcent story. i can'y hold my breath. plz continue.

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
Part 15

Dk is totally shocked and Ved and Dk look at each other like what??

Dhruv: Dk, why arent you saying?

Dk doesnt say anything and leaves

Disha: Dk?

(They both go inside)

Disha: Dk., what happened to you how come you didnt say anything??

Dk: Who is that man??

Disha: Dk?? That's your dad!

Dk: No he cant be!!!

Disha: What are you saying?

Dk: If he was my dad then where was he all these years if Gargi didnt kill him? Where was he when i needed him all these years? and Ma's condition.. didnt he care what she had gone through all these years!

Dhruv is listening and heard what everything Dk said....... and he comes in.....

Dhruv: Dk???

Dk: (his eyes pop out) Please dont say anything

Dhruv: I know you are very mad at me!!!

Dk is having his back turned to him...

Disha: Please say something Dk....

Dhruv: Disha.. i know my son very well... he cant be mad at his dad for a long time! You want to know what happened all these years..... (He tells the whole story... Ved also comes in and hears it too....) And i tried coming back but when i came back to our old house no one was there.. i looked and looked but it was no hope.. until yesterday when Disha brought me here!!

Disha: If mummyji can except him why cant you?

Dk: Because i cant!!!!!!1

disha: why??

Dk: (Tears start rolling down his eyes)

Disha: Dk....

Dhruv: It's okay Disha, I told you it wasnt a good idea to come here... i guess the only way to solve this problem is leaving it again!

Dk: (Shocked) Dad???????

Turns around and gives him a hug... Father Son moment 👏

Dhruv: Ved?? What do you say?

Ved also gives him a hug.. and everyone is happy!!!!!!!

Dk & Disha stay in their rooms and every1 else leaves

Disha: What happened?

Dk: I cant believe it dad is alive......

Disha: I Couldnt believe it either when i saw him

Dk: Thank you Disha!!

Disha: Thanks for what?

Dk: For bringing dad back!!!

Disha: It was my duty!!!!! 😳 You know i will do anything for you!!!11

Dk: Anything? 😆😳

Disha: Dk.. what are you doing?

Dk: Disha come here...

Disha: No!!!

(Disha Runs and Dk grabs her arm and he hugs her........ )

Ahhh... i have to go bye!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

hey gulli444

u r doing an awesome job here

giving me something to look forward to everyday

''DK:Anything?"😆😆👏

wow i can imagine dk's axpression

thanks a lot for making me laugh

keep up the good work

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
Part 16

Dk is outside and is sitting on a bench and thinking about his past w/ his parents and how he used to play with his dad, etc....

Dhruv: what happened son? what are you thinking of?

Dk: Nothing Dad! I am just thinking of us from back in the day!

Dhruv: Look, Son..

Dk: Dad, Why didnt you ever come back? Did you ever think about what was happening to us?

Dhruv: Son, that was on my mind every single day!

Dk: Yea, but you do you know what happened to Ma?

Dhruv: Yes i did!

Dk: But why dad? why did you escape?

Dhruv: I had no choice!!

Dk: You kno the biggest mistake of your life was Gargi! And poor Ved has to pay the price for it!

Dhruv: Dont mention that woman's name again....

Ved walks in....

Ved: Dad?

Dhruv: Ved, (Shocked) look i am sorry... but

Ved: It's okay!! i agree with you 100% i never like my mom either... that is why I was never on her side...

(They talk and talk and finally everyone goes to sleep)

Sia: Arent you happy your dad is back?

Ved: very much! The only person that was behind it all was my mother I hate her sia i hate her so much that i never want to see her face again!!!!

Sia: Hey now, calm down! its okay i know you are upset..

Ved: No sia i am not upset... i am angry and frustrated!! The things that my mother did to this family i will never forget it!!

Sia: We all will live as one big happy family!! Dont worry!!

Ved rests on her shoulder and she comforts him!

Disha: (to dk): Whats wrong?

Dk: Nothing, i have a really bad headache!

Disha: here let me message it for you😳

(She massages his head while his head is on her thigh)

Dk: I am happy that dad's back.. but poor Ved.. he didnt even do anything and look at what he has to go through..

Disha: Yeah, but he will get over it!!

Disha just talks to Dk and doesnt realize he fell asleep

Disha: Dk... Dk???

She just laughs...

Disha: Goodnight and she kisses him on the forehead!

Dk: Smiles!!!!

I have class now.. so i have to go.. i will cont.. 2nite my time!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
wow last scene was so sweet please add some scene of dk and disha playing with their kids as a happy family 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
👏👏👏, i agree with lucky-moon. write some disha dk and their kids, together. or the whole family going on a picnic.😆😃
Edited by Jaslove - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
Part 16:

6 months later... (The kids are 9 months old and can almost walk)

Khushi is crying and Dk is with her... dk picks her up and she stopped crying

Khushi has a big smile on her face when she see's dk....Dk puts her down on the bed and sleeps next to her....

Disha comes....

Disha: Dk... what do you want to do today??

Dk: Sleep!

Disha: Dk???

Dk: Sleep!!!

Disha: Dk lets go somewhere with the kids... we havent gone anywhere with them!

Dk: Okay where do you want to go?

Disha: Lets go to the park...

Dk: No there are too many people and they might catch the other children's germs!

Disha: Oh please Dk lets go.. we will take everyone lets go...

Dk: disha. i dont want people to touch or go near my kids..

Disha: Dk you sound like they are only your kids.. they are mine too!!

Dk: well cant we do something else..

Disha: No.. we are going to the park and thats final!!!

Dk: Disha!!!!!!

Disha walks out and tells everyone that they are all going to the park... and they are all going for a picnic... (For people who wanted them to have a picnic 😃) Sia packs a big lunch and everyone goes...

Everyone is sitting on the floor talking about the old days.. when Ved and DK were little....

Dk is making Khushi stand and she does...

Disha: Be careful.. Dk...

Dk: I know how to handle kids...

Sum: Since When??

Ved: Yeah brother since when...

Dk: I always have...

Sum: Sunny.. do you remember that little girl... her name was Pooja...

Dk: Um... No

Sum: Of course you do she was a little chubby... and you use make fun of her..

Dk: Oh yeah i called her Moti!!! 😕

Sum: Disha... this bad boy used to hide all her dolls and bury them in the ground....and one day she got so mad that she took sunny's favorite toy and threw it in the garbage...

Dk: Yeah i remember that day.. i was crying so much!!! 😆

Ved: Brother, why did you take her dolls for... did you want them for yourself? I didnt know you liked dolls so well....

All laugh!!!!!

Sum: Ved, you were as just bad as Dk...infact you were worst

Ved: really what did i do?

Sum: In school, you use to break all the lights by throwing rocks at it.. i am telling you i have really bad sons!!

Ved: Oh come on you know you love us!!!

Sum: Yeah thats the bad part!

So everyone enjoys themselves and they go home!


The next day @ work

Well well well Pori comes to Ved's office.. his chair is turned around

Pori: My My Ved........ what did you think that you can get rid of me so easily? I am not going to leave so easily!! Just because you kicked me out that doesnt mean i am going to stay away...

She just keeps blabbing on and on.. when suddenly Ved comes in from the door
and Pori looks at him in total shock..

Pori: wait if thats you.. then who's

DK turns around and he was sitting in that chair

Ved: How dare you come in here?? Get out! Get out now!!!!!!!!!!

Pori: But....

Dk: why are you so surprised? didnt you hear what he said.. get out... and dont ever show your face again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori: You can say waht ever you want...

Ved: Oh shut up Porineeta!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori leaves in a huff.....

Pori: Ved you didnt do such a wise thing... i will be back!!!!!


Cont.. 2nite!!! after watching my soaps!!!
keshp15 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59

hey gulli444

nice job again👏

now lets see what this pori does now

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
good job keep up the good work 😛

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