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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 21

Sukanya comes and complains to Suhas on how her son is leaving her blah blah

Sukanya: Well i hope you are happy! Your wish has finally come true!

Suhas: What did i do?

Sukanya: Dont act to innocent ! you think your all innocent but i know its your scheme to separate me from my son

Suhas: Look i had nothing to do with this, if you want why dont you stop him from going? but dont you dare blame me!

Sukanya: (rolls her eyes) You know its people like you who only know how to break relationship...

Suhas: Sukanya!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sukanya: Dont yell at me!

Suhas: God, if only i could leave this house!!

Sukanya: Then why dont you? no one is stopping you!!!

Suhas thinks about it and tells G that she is also leaving the house with them. They are wondering where they could go!

Dk's house:

Dk and Disha are inside their rooms sitting on their bed and Dk is just acting all romantic and kissing Disha on her neck!

Disha: DK.. what are you doing?

Dk: Nothing romancing with my wife!

Disha: Dk.. dont you have anything to do!

Dk: No!

The phone rings and Disha picks up the phone and DK is still kissing her

DIsha: Hello

Suhas: Hello Disha!!

Disha: Aai how are you??? telling DK: STop it!!!

Suhas: Disha the reason why i called you was because i just wanted to tell you i am leaving this house w/ Gautham and Priya

Disha: What????? (dk stops and gets worried) What happened? where will you go?

Suhas: Dont worry we will stay here but i dont know where we will move!

Disha: But why??

Suhas: look i cant explain right now... but later i will!! okay i will talk to you later!

Disha: Hello Aai but listen.. Aai......

Disha gets all tensed!!

Dk: Disha what happened?

Disha: Dk......... (Cries)

Dk: Disha why are you crying? what happened?

Disha: (She tells him)

Dk: Where will they go?

Disha: Thats what i am scared of.. where will they go?

Dk: Dont worry i will do something.. dont you worry and Disha please dont cry...

Dk talks to Dhruv and Sum about the situation and Dhruv suggests that why dont they stay with them for a little while until they get settled...

Dk: I was wondering the same thing but i just wanted to ask you for your permissions

Dhruv: Its fine with us

Sum: Yes it will be okay!

Dk tells Disha but Disha doesnt like the idea because she said it would be a inconvience for everyone but Sum insists and Disha agrees!!

Dk sends a big car for them and their stuff.. now you have Dk, Disha, 2 kids, Dhruv, sum, ved, sia, priya, gautham, and Suhas all under one roof!!! wow 11 people in one house!!!!!!!

G: Look we will leave ASAP from here and i will look for another place

Dk: It's okay dont worry about anything!

G: I dont know how to pay you back.. but i know if you ever need anything i will be there for you!!

Dk: Thanx.. and they both hug and disha smiles!

DIsha room:

She is happy and she is crying @ the same time...

Dk: DIsha.. why are you crying?

Disha: Becuase i am thinking about that i am the luckiest person today to have such a wonderful husband like you...

Dk: THen why are you crying? isnt that good news...

Disha: Very good news....

Dk: Okay now dont cry.. i dont want my wife to cry!! you look bad when you cry...

Disha: But why did you decide that everyone will stay here?

Dk: Theres only one reason behind that... i knew that if they stay here... you will be really happy so to see that glow on your face i can do anything for you!!!!!!

Disha hugs Dk tightly and cries even more...

Dk: Hey.. everything will be fine.. dont worry now!!

He wipes her tears off.... Suhas was looking at that the whole time and is thinking how much DK has changed over the past few years and is happy that her daughter has such a good home and family and she wishes that she always stays happy!!

Dk and Disha are laughing with each other and SUhas just goes smiling!!!!!

The end i will cont. 2nite!


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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
good one wow this is amazing can't wait to see wht coming up next 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83
Part 22

All three bahus get up early in the morning (Priya, Disha, and Sia) and are all singing Aarti!! Everyone hears it and they all get up w/o taking a shower.... anyways... they are all singing all have beautiful voices and they get up and turn around and see everyone there even Dk in is Pj's 😉

Disha: You guys woke up?

Sum: Waking up like this feels like i am in heaven!

Suhas: Yes i wish i can wake up like this every morning!!

Disha gives Parsad (cant spell if thats wrong) and everyone takes it.. Dk doesnt take it but makes Disha feed it to him 😳

So everyone goes back to their rooms and get ready... how ever Dk goes back to sleep because he wants Disha to wake him up...

Disha: Dk you went back to sleep wake up and get ready...

Dk: Disha you woke me up now give me another half hour.. and i will wake up!

Disha: NO!!!! What will Ved say? come on get up! please!!!!

Dk: Disha... you cant do this to me everyday!! A man needs his sleep!!

Disha: You can get it when you dont work... Come on!!

Dk: Fine.. (Gets up) Happy!

Disha: Yes!!

Dk gets ready w/ Ved G went somewhere but Dk tells Disha that when he comes home send him to the office!!

G comes home:

Disha: Gautam, Dk said to go to his office...

G: Dk? Why wat's the problem?

Disha: I dont think there is a problem but he just said to go to his office

G: Okay then i will get ready and go!

He arrives there

G: You wanted to see me whats the problem?

Dk: There is no problem, the reason why i called you in was because Me and Ved are doing a new project and we want you to join us!!

G: Me? really?

Dk: Yes!!! Will you join us?

G: Of course i will Thank you!!!!!!!

(They both hug)

Dk: Now dont be in a hurry to move out!! take as much as time as you need!

Bhonsale house:

Sukanya has a bad dream about everyone laughing at her.... and she gets up and feels miserable because there is no one in the house and since Suhas doesnt live there all the workers are gone so Sukanya has to do everything herself!! (She derserves it dont ya think?) 😡


Ved is inside his bedroom changing his shirt when Sia comes and hugs him from behind!!

Ved: Whats that for? 😳

Sia: Just because i love you!

Ved: Oh well then i should be getting those everyday!!!!!

Sia: (laughs) yes!!

Ved: What did you do today?

Sia: I went to go visit mom today!! ( i didnt write about it)

Ved: (Shocked) Why??

Sia: Just because!!

Ved: She didnt say anything mean to you?

Sia: Oh no!! we were doing just fine til Pori came along!

Ved: Pori?? why was she there?

Sia: I dont know and i dont care!!! My goal was just to see mom and i left!!

Ved keeps thinking that are they against her! (But Gargi isnt she hates Pori and she loves Sia)

Ved: You just better watch out for mom because she maybe acting nice but you dont know her true colors!

Sia: Mom has changed... or else she wouldve told me something long time back... but i dont know why Pori comes there... but whatever it is.. Mom doesnt like it!

Ved: I hope so!! You didnt tell her about dad did you?

Sia: No i didnt!! Anyways dont worry i know wat am i doing you trust me right?

Ved: More than myself!!!!

Sia's feeling dizzy but Ved doesnt see it.. she sits down for a while and maybe just thinks she needs rest.....

Ved: what happened are you okay?

Sia: Yeah just a little tired i guess!!

Ved: If you need anything let me know!!

Sia gets up and puts her hands on his cheeks


Sia: I will dont worry and (she screams and Ved holds her)

Ved: Sia!!??????? what happened? Sia..... Sia......

Next scene she's in the hospital and Ved is still calling her...

Ved: Sia?? Sia?? Sia???

Sia is holding her head...

Ved: Sia, you are pregnant!!!!!!!!

Sia: What???????

Ved: Yes, we are going to become parents!!!!!

Everyone comes in and they congraulate them!! Happy lil bunch!!! Everyone except for Dk isnt there because he was going to come home late..

Dk comes inside his house but no one is there!!!

Dk: Where is everyone?? Disha?? VEd? Aai?? (sees the servant) Where is everyone??

Servant: They all went to the hospital?

Dk: Why what happened?

Servant: I dont know..

Dk rushes towards the hospital and is all panicky!

Dk: Ma, what happened? why are you all here?

Everyone pretends its something serious

Sum: Well.... its awful news..

Dk: What happened? Disha... what happened tell me?

Disha: 😃 She's in there!!!!!! (Fake cries)

Dk: Who's in there??? Can someone please tell me whats going on???

Everyone busts out laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Why are you all laughing?

Disha: We are all here because Sia is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: What????

Disha: Yes (laughs)

Dk: Dont you guys ever scare me like that ever again!!!! i thought something happened to one of you!!!

Dk goes inside the room..

Dk: Ved....

Ved: Brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: COngratulations!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved: Thanx brother!!

Dk: Sia, now please teach this person some responsibilty now!! he's going to become a father now!!

All three laugh and he jokes around for a little while!! Sia is later discharged and everyone comes home and goes to thier bedroom!!

Ved: Now i want you take complete rest now and dont work to hard!!!

Sia: Dont worry i wont!!!!!

Ved: I want you to be very careful!!! and if you ever need anything let me know!!!

Sia: Okay!!

Dk's room:

Dk: Disha, what are you thinking about? ME??

DIsha: NO!!

Dk: NO?? and why not?

Disha: Because i am always doing that!!😳😆😉 i was thinking about the happiness of this family!!! I have never been this much happy before in my life!!!!!! seeing everyone together like this... its what i always wanted!!

Dk: See, that glow in your face.... That is what i like about you!! Just to see that makes my heart melt!!!

Disha: 😳(blushes) Oh Dk stop it!!!

Dk: what? i am serious!!!! Okay fine.. if you dont want me to then i will talk about my kids!!!!! I love my kids so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both kids start to cry and they both put them to sleep!!! after a little while Dhruv (junior) wakes up and just cries and cries and Disha doesnt know wat to dO!!

Disha: Stop crying!!!

She feels his head and he has a bad fever and has an ear infection and everything and tells Dk and they both take Dhruv to the hospital

Doctors tell him he is very sick and that he's going to have to stay over because hes serious!!

Doctor: He is really unwell there's nothing to worry about once i give me medicine he will be fine..its common for kids his age to get sick.. just make sure Khushi is not sick either!!

Disha and Dk is sad Disha is crying and Dk consoles her

Dk: Everything will be fine!!!

Disha: Dhruv has always slept at home! this is the first time he wont be w/ us!!

Dk: Now, now everything will be fine the doctors are here right?

Disha: I want to stay here w/ Dhruv you go home i will be fine!!

Dk: Disha you know the rules we cannot be here... lets go home... everything will be fine...

They start going home and Disha is crying they enter and Sum is standing there

Dk: Ma, what are you doing up?

SUm: where were you??

Dk explains everything to Sum and Disha is still crying...

Sum: Disha, everything will be fine.. nothing will happen to Dhruv!! Just have faith in God!!! Go to sleep you need rest!!

Dk and Disha go inside their bedroom, Dk is sitting up and Disha comes over and gets comfy and graudually she falls asleep!! Thats all Dk wanted was her to fall asleep!!!! 😛

Night Night you guys i will write tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Guli444,

You are doing a great job in writing.

Maybe you should consider joining the writers of TD. Then the watching rates would be sky high.

Every morning I read your story. Please don't stop writing! Beginning the day with your story starts my day with a smile.

I love the children in the story, really nice names.

I hope you have a nice day as well.

Take care,

Kiran

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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesome!!!! keep writing!!!! ur story rocks!!!😉
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😆 that was awesome 😆

Keep on writing👏

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Part 23

Next Morning, Dk wakes up and doesnt find Disha there... she has gone to the hospital Dk realizes this and he also goes he sees Disha there sitting next to Dhruv...

Dk: What is this Disha? Couldnt you have wait for me!

Disha: I didnt want to wake you, you were fast asleep...

Dk: Nothings important than my kids or my wife😳

Disha: I am so worried for him

Dk: What did the doctors say?

Disha: he is fine but he will have to stay here for 1-2 days...

Dk: Its only a matter of 2 days.. he will come home with us before you know it

Disha: I hope so!

Dk: I Know so!

They both leave and go home...

Suhas: How's Dhruv?

Dk: He's better he will stay there for another 1-2 days... theres nothing wrong with him!

Sum: Disha, dont take too much stress nothing will happen!

Disha gives a fake smile and goes to her room Dk sees this and follows

Dk: Whats the matter Disha?

Disha: Our family is incomplete once again!

Dk: hey... why do you think like that?

Disha: Because its the truth... theres a person missing Dk!!

Dk: You think i dont notice either!!!!! Come on cheer up.. we will go tonight and see him again!!

Disha: Really?????

Dk: Yes!!!!!!

She hugs him and she cheers up!! Meanwhile Sia comes to visit Gargi in jail

Gargi: Sia, you? how are you?

Sia: I am fine! how are you?

Gargi: How else can i be?😕

They chit chat for a while and Ms. Pori comes once again and spoils everything!!!

Pori: Well well well what a scene this is! Daughter-in-law and mother in law how nice!

Sia: Shut up Pori dont you have a life?

Pori: Of course i do...

Gargi: Why are you here??

Pori: Why can "I" meet my future mother in law!! you know Gargi Aunty i am going to marry Ved really soon!!!

Gargi: Over my dead body you will if you do anything.. i wont/

Pori: My My temper temper!!! Theres nothing you or Sia can do!!

Sia: Oh i am pretty sure i can do anything because i know that Ved will never come back to you nor marry you because there is something i have that you dont!!!

Pori: What?? i have everything you dont have anything!!

Sia: Oh yes there is!!

Pori: If you talking about just because you have sindoor and Mangasultra that means nothing to me!! Now what else do you have?

Sia: (In a loud and echo sound) I am going to be the mother of his child!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Pori and Gargi are shocked and Gargi is happy while Pori is 😕😡!!!!!

Pori: What???????

Gargi: WHat?? i am a grandmother!! (she's all happy)

Pori is all mad and walks away!!!! Sia continues talking to Gargi and she leaves.. Sia is walking down and there is a guy just sitting there on the floor Sia seems freaked out about the guy and when the guy looks up it is none other than "Vijendra (Suhas's Husband) Of course Sia doesnt know him but she looks at him very carefully and she justs walks away!!

Sia is all happy and is smiling and goes to her room, Ved sees this and follows her!!

Ved: What happened Sia?? YOu seem very happy today!!

Sia: I am indeed happy today!!!

Ved: May i ask why?

Sia: I went to go to talk mom today!! and Ms. Pori came along today!!

Ved: And that's good news because...

Sia: Oh Ved, let me finish

Ved: Ok i am sorry continue

Sia: Well Pori came along and was talking how she is going to steal you away from me and mom wasnt happy one bit and once i told them that i am pregnant you should have seen Pori's face it was unbelieveable!!


Sia just keeps going on and on and Ved just keeps staring at her!

Sia: Why are you looking at me like that?

Ved: Just seeing you smile like that!!

Sia: (She smiles even more)

Ved: Well as long as i get you see you laughing and smiling i dont have to worry about anything!!

Ved is just thinking about Gargi etc....

Priya is cooking for everyone... and Disha comes along!

Disha: Bhabhi, why didnt you call me? i was sitting right there!!

Priya: It's okay DIsha... I am happy doing it!

Disha: You must be really happy right?

Priya: You know Disha.. i wont keep anything from you because you G's sister...

Just then G is walking by and listening to their convo.... w/o them knowing

Priya: Disha.. i tried really hard to make mom (Sukanya) understand about our relationship but she never excepted me as her daughter-in-law.. i tolerated her being rude to me and she said the most horrible things to me but i didnt let that get to me! i was hoping one day that she would wake up and realize that theres nothing that she can do to change this...

Disha: Why didnt you tell G?

Priya: I didnt want to start problems between G and Mom and then they would fight for no reason and i would be the blame on it.. I am happy yet i am not!

Disha: Why?

Priya: Well i got so much love here that i couldnt get from my mother-in-law! But there is one person who i treat as my mother-in-law!

Disha: Who?

Priya: Aai!!! Even with her i didnt complain! but life has to move on!

Disha: Everything will be okay!

Priya: I just hope so!

G is happy yet frustrated @ his mom!!! and he goes inside his room and just starts doing paperwork after that he lies down closes his eyes and Priya comes along!

Priya comes along and she sleeps on top of him!

G: What happened?

Priya: Nothing.. you looked so comfortable that i wanted to join you!! what happened? you seem all down!

G: Yes i am!

Priya: Why? Is it something i did?

G: No, it is something i did!

Priya: What?

G: I couldnt keep the person i love happy in my own house!!

Priya is shocked and sad 😕😭

Priya: what are you talking about?

G: I heard you talking to Disha today in the kitchen

Priya: you did?

G: Why didnt you tell me that ma was misbehabing with you?

Priya: I didnt want to complain to you! Anyways dont think about it anymore!!! I am happy and you should be to! Thanks to Dk!

G: Yeah but the times when i thought you were happy you werent!!

Priya: As long as you are happy i dont care about anything else!!

They talk for a while and then come out!!

Everyone is having dinner all 10-11 of them and after dinner they are just sitting around talking to one another!! Dk turns on the TV and there is some guy talking about how you should stay fit and exercise and DIsha mentions this to Dhruv (Senior)

Disha: Daddyji, i think you should start taking morning walks now!!

Dhruv: Why? i am healthy!!

Sum: Healthy!! You eat too much oily foods!!

Dhruv: If there are three beautiful women in this house that cook so well i cant resist!!!

Sum: Disha is right.. you need to start exercising!!

Dk: Yes dad mom is right!

Dhruv: what is this? no one is on my side!!

Everyone is talking at the same time and laughing and DK is just enjoying every min. of it!!

Dhruv: Okay okay.. but Sum you will have to join with me.. your no less either!!

Sum: No!!

Dhruv: Fine then if you dont go i wont either!!

Disha: What is this?? Mummyji come on say yes!!!!!

Sum agrees

Next morning:

Sum and Dhruv go for their walk.. they walk for about 5 miles and that's going to be their routine!

Meanwhile, Dk and Disha go to the hosptial and Dhruv (junior) is ready to go home Disha is really happy so is Dk is Disha is more!!! ( I guess its momma's boy and daddy's little girl😛)

They both come home and Priya is playing with Khushi... khushi sees Dk holding Dhruv and walks slowly trying to keep her balance and walks to Dk and crying cuz she's jealous!!! Dk gives Dhruv to Disha and Dk picks her up and she just hugs him!

(I would love to see that some day👏)

Suhas comes over and holds Dhruv...

Sia comes over w/ Ved and Ved and Dk are waiting for G so they could go to work and Dhruv and Sum come back from their walk!!

Priya: how was your walk daddyji?

Dhruv: It was great!!

Disha: See daddy i told you it would be good!!

Everyone is laughing around and messing with each other... G comes and Sia is walking and accidentally knocks down Disha purse that was on the table...

Sia: I am so sorry Bhabhi....

Disha: its okay you leave it..

Sia: No its okay i got it...

Sia picks up everything and there is a pix upside down Sia picks it up and turns it around and its a picture of Vijendra and Disha and Sia looks at this.. and is shocked!!!

Disha: What happened Sia?

Sia: I have seen him somewhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

Disha: You couldnt have.. he passed away in a car accident... couple of years ago!!!!

Sia: No i have seen him somewhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have seen him........ (thinks and thinks) I know i saw him jail!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EVERYONE IS SHOCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE END.. NIGHT NIGHT.... I WILL CONT.. TOMORROW AGAIN!!! MEANWHILE... REPLY AND TELL ME WAT YOU GUYS THINK SO FAR!! TOOTLES!!!!!!



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Posted: 20 years ago
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good one pal plz post the next scene when ever u are free
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ITS A GREAT STORY PLZ CONTINUE!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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OMG!!!!! IT AWESOME!!!!!! ALL THE DEAD PPL R COMIN BACK!!!! IS IT GOIN TO BE 12 PPL IN THE HOUSE NOW? KEEP GOIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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