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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: star303

Poor khushi just days before realized her first love and now comes to know what Arnav's thoughts are about love, togetherness and marriage. On top of that soon he will leave for US. Now that the school is over all her friends are leaving town and with arnav gone too she will be so lonely.
Arnav so young and so full of bitterness... But somewhere deep down he likes her too.
Great update.
Sorry for the late comment and thanks for the pm.


Did you see the pics of Landour( on the same page as chapter 4)...there is a surprise for you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007



Did you see the pics of Landour( on the same page as chapter 4)...there is a surprise for you😊




😃 I am really very humbled with that dedication. I simply do not know what to say. Thank you thank you very much.
I loved the pictures specially the one of the school though how did I miss them before I have no idea. You said that your grandma was from Landor so did you spend time there??? It looks like a very beautiful place.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm so loving the pace of your story, the budding romance between Arnav & Khushi and of course your superb writing style. It was a great update again. I think apart from loving your story, I'm also falling for 'landour', the magical place I hope to visit sometime in near future.
Good going dear, keep it up. Thanks for the pm & also congrats for the new thread.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is starting to develop feelings for Arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update Jenny !!! Thanks a ton for the PM :) Loved way he tried to pacify Khushi when he scared her out of her wits ... But Khushi has discovered that she may love him but it is futile as he does not believe in happily ever after and also he is going to UFM for future studies ... Let's see how things turn out :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 5

a 17 yr with such opinion abt love n marriage it made me think tht is he damaged beyond repair. ahhh the lyrics of free bird especially the last line sits so accurately to the situation.

my baby khushi exhibiting something yet feeling something else all together.
young love nothing can describe those non jaded feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...love how they are getting closer and underneath all the bitterness, he too is a young kid who is alone and lonely. Love how these two young people have forged this friendship.

Young love is awakening within Khushi and it is so beautiful to watch. Her sadness as the prospect of him leaving is heartbreaking.

Loved theFree Bird poem.
Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good it ws...
Feeling bad fr khushi...
Luvd d update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SuperstarSanaya

Res

Edited..
I am ressing on first spot & then I never come back to comment.
Sorry Jenny. got busy
Update was sweet, cute as well as sad. Arnav's mischevious ways to tease her & then terrify her in the process. I loved his joke though it made Khushi cry. I know she cried for him, coz he is going away.
what irony, previous day she realized she loves him & other day only she comes to know, he will not be with her. His thoughts on relationships made it even harder for her to hope anything. She indeed had fallen in Love with beast. 😊
as always, you rocked. The depiction of Khushi's emotions was beautiful. 😃

Jenny, sorry for being late. updated my comment here.😊
Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luvd the Sorry part...so cute it ws:D
nd the red riding hood:D
luv it

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