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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

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@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

Dear Jenny,

Congratulations!!!

What an awesome story you are writing...

Just read first 2 chapters...they were splendid...loved them...

Keep the good work up...

Keep going.....

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

That was a really sweet update. Arnav finally told her how he feels. And that Dawn will always be a friend only. So he lied. Because now she is his fiancee!! I need to be in the present already. And she, she has a boy aged 4 and they meet after 6 yrs so that means she got married to somebody else? Just desperately waiting for the present!

Your stories are amazing. Every one of them has had me gripped! Thank-you, you are an awesome writer! Please, never stop writing!

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

i just read five chapters bck to bck nd its too good 👏👏

Thanks for the PM...Firstly a really nice name to the chapter...i love it

nd then i love their High school Part...the place tht u hav chosen as their background is beautiful...in chapter three the jalebi part was nice 😊
in chapter four...u hav posted the pictures...imaginin tht with the story is amazing

nd i love this Arnav he is isn tht arrogant towards Khushi...he apologized too...Khushi is sweet carin nd more over she is her age...i lik tht...why does she not lik her mom so much???

over all lovin the story so far...their relation is really nice till now...i wish i shared somethin lik tht whn i was in high school...

Superb FF ⭐️

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

Why do you write such an emotional stories? You made me cry! I ws litrly crying lyk a dumb!

Amazingly written one
luvd it

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

i am sorry i am late...
but i am gonna make it up...
i am gonna comment individually for each single part...

prologue:

i was waiting and waiting...
then there they come...one married...and other with fiance..!!
i was like "What the.."
anyways hoping for the best..!!

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1037

chapter:1

I am sure Arnav doesn't like people around him just becoz they pity him...
or else he would have been nice with them..
loved their 1st convo..
very much like our Arshi...
always starts with a fight...

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1038

chapter:2

this Arnav is really mysterious...
i am loving him...
and Khushi is being Khushi...
but I guess Arnav likes her...thats why he is teasing her all the time...
the scene in the garden where Arnav looks at her from his room...awesome...
and the last dialog by him...i loved them...

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1039

i read the prologue again!!
i noticed that DAWN is his fiance..
i totally forget about her..
OMG!! now am really worried how would their story progress now..
hey devi maiyya

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1040

chapter:3

when you mentioned about the pictures on Khushi's table i doubted about the same fact...that her mother is married...
Arnav is so lonely to handle his pain...and i guessed before...he prefers hatred over mercy..
and their is a longing between them...
loved it..

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