ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey there... this was jst awesome... cant believe they could have shown all this in the show instead of jst messing the track... u did total justice to arnan and khushi... beautiful story... vry much realistic... u jst made me miss them all over again...

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

That was beautiful!!!
This is life...full of ups and downs...
You are a great writer...and this was a beauty...
Looking forward to read more of your works
Cheers!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Wow this was an amazing story, I just read all the chapters. The concept of the story was brilliant and from start to finish each update was written exceptionally well. You had written down both Arnav and khushi's emotions and feelings beautifully, I just loved the way they would communicate and sort out there problems so well and the understanding between them was fantastic. You are an amazing writer, do u have an index for your other stories? xx

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wow ..it was lovely to read in one go...wish they could show this in ipkknd ...beautiful

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

lazyleaves recommended this ff...i am grateful to her to have done it otherwise i would have missed on something very realistic and interesting...
i loved the way you portrayed arnav and khushis emotions...anger,pain,disapointment,happiness,content...
i loved anjalis and payals role in this
aweosme...i loved it :D

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

There's just something about the way you write. Its clean, crisp and utterly compelling. Its such a mature version of these characters. I love the interaction...how it shows their development. Its an aspect we never get to see on these shows. A real grown-up's story. I absolutely loved reading this story...even though i'm not a grown up!! 😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

What a beautiful & unique FF. I have to thank Zehra (lazyleaves) for the recommendation.

I just loved the way you dealt with the emotional state of Arnav & Khushi at different moments in their lives... You showed the depth of their emotions & feelings that was so sadly missing in the show. I wish they had dealt with even a tenth of the emotions... Your FF truly touched my heart, it was very poignant. My heart clenched & throat choked up frequently as I read it, but it also brought with it a sense of serenity to see a couple grow & learn together. It is never happily ever after is it?? It is the mere beginning of life's many discoveries & the lessons that your teachers never taught you in school...

And the best part was I read it all in one go, so I didn't have to wait to find out what would happen next. I almost didn't realize that I had held my breath till I reached the end, only then did I heave a sigh of relief. I would have surely died if I had to wait for updates...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Wow,, what a fabulous story you have written!!

Marriage and its ups and downs ... the way you have expressed Khushi's thoughts was amazing.

Every mistake you make you gain an experience which when reflected upon can resolve all the hidden issues.

Khushi's hesitation and feeling of inferiority (in comparisn to sheetal) was written so well only if this was a part of the actual show the show would not have ended on such a sour note.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

👏👏👏

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Beautiful work...portrait of real married life...for its not always happily ever after they are bonded by marriage.

Arnav and Kushis feelings in each moments were well laid down in wonderful words. Wish CVs could have played this onscreen.

Talented writer and loved the way u brought out each emotions playing with words.

Really amazed how this wonderful work missed reader. Thanks to LL (Zehra) for referring this story.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

What can I say ...you ROCK! This has been one of the most unbiased look into Arnav and kushi's mind their unspoken words to each other. You have brought out the simple complexities of everyday married life and provided a way to unravel the knots. Very maturely handled.