ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Read it all in one sitting. No fair warning the story ended. I just wanted it to go on it was so good.

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Just read the whole story. Very well written. You've described emotions really well along with small details. Wonderful story.

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

thx to kalyani for recomending it..

very very credible..very realistic..I wish this was the direction the makers had taken in the serial.
this sort of pathos was to be expected,given that they had such a nontraditional rough rode getting to where the did..

very very nice

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

I crazily searched for this story earlier as it was recommended and very frustrated as whenever I clicked the link it would load IF main page!!
I think you had earlier posted it under different id.
Thank you very much for posting it again! I reaaly really enjoyed (and cried a lot) reading it . You have made it so realistic.
I always found Khushi's trauma, Arnav's mistreatment towards her was too trivialized and we never got true redemption. You have portrayed Khushi's pain quite realistically.

Sheetal's track was one which i totally avoided. I could tolerate that in your FF.
Thanks for such a realistic and sensitive portrayal of our fav characters. I wish the CVs would read this and get some clue ..

Edited by shree10 - 12 years ago

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Beautiful ...

I stumbled upon Gravity and stalked my way to this...

It was a wonderful read...Realistic and Believable

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

That was one the most poignant description of Happily Ever After. What is it ...other than stolen moments of love & joy.

Absolutely loved this story and a realistic glimpse into their ever after...

Thank you for sharing this with me. It reconfirmed my belief that you are an incredibly good writer.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awesome story

thanks zehra for suggesting this one

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QueenB-09

@QueenB-09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

This is a beautiful story. It dealt with a more realistic aspect of the khushi-arnav relationship in such a simple way. Very well-written!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

It was intense, and full of strong emotions.

You have a way with the words.

Beautifully written.

Keep it up!

Love
J

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hello!

I have rarely come across stories which are costructed with this much ease ans simplicity. I am a huge fan of how well you taken a simple concept of a woman and man trying to find a balance, and have blown into proportions so phenomenal.

It is what I have always endorsed as a reader and a (try-hard) writer - how well can you present the your story, so we see that while the fruit (ie - the concept) is relatively simple and locally available; but the juice you created can only be compared to the drink of the gods.

I hope my weak comparision has made sense.

However, and I say this only because I have something to say - I felt that the ending of the story was too abrupt. I apologise if I am overstepping my boundaries here. This is just my opinion, and may not necessarily match with what you may have thought for this story. If that is the case, I apologise. Whole-heartedly :)

With hope I stumble across another story of yours,

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago