ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

A very realistic story...loved it

penned well

Thanks to lazyleaves for suggesting this

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hello, I came across your story last week and finished reading it in one go. This track was one of the worst on the show and I loved how you turned it into a wonderfull tale by exploring the emotions of the leads so maturely and aesthetically. This is what i would have loved to seen in the show but oh well.

Very well written & you certainly did a great job. What I liked the most was the simplicity & practicality of the story, nothing over the top & yet a delight to read. *Thumbs up* I look forward to reading more lovely stories from you. Btw could I request for an pm for your future works? Thanks in advance. :)

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

reading now.. thanks for pm

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

i just read the entire thing in one go!...what surprises me the most is how you turned the most boring track of ipk history into such a beautifull story!

Kalyaani recommended this ff...and i am not disappointed!

brilliant work!

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

i have read it second time in one go...i think if ipkknd continued may be these issues which you tackled they could also shown us...because up until ipkknd ended it was khushi who was giver and arnav was taker...in the end in mrs india track we felt that khushi was not that happy...it is beautiful how you handled these issues...every marriage has to go through this even it is a eternal love of arshi as we believe ...thank you again for making it short yet most powerful piece of writing

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

That was an awesome FF loved how realistic it was and how they worked through their problems.

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

This was a story recommended by one of my fav storywriter Kalyaani... Thus, had full faith in it being a very good read... And I wasn't disappointed... Far from it... Very very impressive indeed...

U have used the original IPK show, the scenarios in it... And weaved ur tale within them so fascinatingly... But with finesse, highlighting all the intricate ways a relationship needs to be threaded in to lay down the soundest of foundation stones for an ever lasting love... and happily ever afters...

Loved it...

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hey, i loved your take on IPK and i wish their writers had used common sense like yourself presenting some of the scenes. at first your story seemed very simple and lucid, but no, it was intense and sweet at the same time. really enjoyed it and read it on kalyaani's recommendation:) please PM if you have more stories.

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A_BA

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

This was so beautifully written. There were so many emotions portrayed and you showed it so nicely!

Thanks for sharing this story!

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esmeralda111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Kalyaani
A stark contrast to "We the people", I am not going to compare the two but coming from the same author, I must say this is impressive. Relationships are never easy and need constant effort and work, beautifully written, then again you are good at it; just mentioning it again.

Thank U Kalyani for referring this story in your previous mail...this is such a lovely narrative of their one phase...I didnt watch Sheetal episodes...so couldn't say it is better ...but I wiish it would have been this way...

Thanks for recommending :)