ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

BRILLIANT... read all the chapters in one go n i was truly amazed to read the perfect blend ov maturity, reality, love, passion, fears n disappointment in a single piece ov writing...u jxt left me speechless with this enthralling writing ov urs...
Awsm work dear...
n plxxx continue writing...esp. on arhi...

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

A really beautiful story, exploring all aspects of marriage, happiness, trust, insecurities, fights and making up - the best part of any marriage !!!

Both Anjali and Payal were portrayed as good supporting characters, but I really loved how Payal made Khushi realize that she would encounter many more cancelled dates and broken promises, but it did not mean the world had ended...Very well written and loved the title...

Edited by srat - 12 years ago

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jojo21
This was so very good, I couldn't help but read it all in one sitting. You made me well up with tears and then smile. Just all in all a great read!

Glad you liked it. Thank you.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Brilliant and emotional story, weaving some of the plot from the show.

Re-read it and it's still amazing! Definitely one of my favourites.

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Thxs for posting such a beautiful story. So true simple yet complicated this is life and you wrote all these feelings and emotions a couple faces and resolves so beautifully. Totally awesome 👏

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I am in love with ur story n yesss i m going to read it again n again...soo realistic yet soo romantic...i loved this romance without any intimacy...small gestures playing roles in progression of relationship...n then in last realisation of khushi...that was soo well writen..i must say u r awesome writer...ur writing is so gripping that i could not stop myself from reading this story in one go...have u written other stories also...?

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

All my comments on your 'gummi' thread lost? 😭 *heartbreak* 💔

Anyway, I couldn't help myself and I ended up reading the whole story again, and now I'm your fangirl :D Shockingly different from We, The People, I loved this SS for many reasons. Most importantly for the respect you gave to Khushi and her concerns, not trivializing her concerns, looking into her overcompensating tendencies owing to her past objectively. Khushi is not talkative numbskull, unlike what the show made her look like towards the end.

And Arnav is witty! And the Raizada women discuss their sex life in the kitchen :D Thanks for posting this again :)

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: suma.2911
this was a beautiful read :) thank you.. the best part was being able to read everything in one go. Loved the way you have described their emotions. So real and so expressive in your style.

Nice :))

Thank you.. :-)

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome story.. Loved it...

Very well written...
Loved how arnav and khushi have insecurities...
get mad at each other but understand and communicate
Looking forward to reading more of ur stories...

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sherin1689
The best ...most realistic stories i have ever read...

plain truth ...plain facts...life is nt just all about happily ever afters...bt one has to go through trouble n fights just to relive the beauty of making up and feeling loved again!!!

Wonderful!! Good job buddy...

looking forward n hopping tht u will write something new which is as wonderful as this one or maybe even better!!

:D

Thanks...I am already writing another one but that FF is about politics- we, the people. :=)