ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed] - Page 4

BRILLIANT... read all the chapters in one go n i was truly amazed to read the perfect blend ov maturity, reality, love, passion, fears n disappointment in a single piece ov writing...u jxt left me speechless with this enthralling writing ov urs...
Awsm work dear...
n plxxx continue writing...esp. on arhi...

A really beautiful story, exploring all aspects of marriage, happiness, trust, insecurities, fights and making up - the best part of any marriage !!!

Both Anjali and Payal were portrayed as good supporting characters, but I really loved how Payal made Khushi realize that she would encounter many more cancelled dates and broken promises, but it did not mean the world had ended...Very well written and loved the title...

Originally posted by: jojo21

This was so very good, I couldn't help but read it all in one sitting. You made me well up with tears and then smile. Just all in all a great read!

Glad you liked it. Thank you.

Brilliant and emotional story, weaving some of the plot from the show.

Thxs for posting such a beautiful story. So true simple yet complicated this is life and you wrote all these feelings and emotions a couple faces and resolves so beautifully. Totally awesome 👏

I am in love with ur story n yesss i m going to read it again n again...soo realistic yet soo romantic...i loved this romance without any intimacy...small gestures playing roles in progression of relationship...n then in last realisation of khushi...that was soo well writen..i must say u r awesome writer...ur writing is so gripping that i could not stop myself from reading this story in one go...have u written other stories also...?

Originally posted by: suma.2911

this was a beautiful read :) thank you.. the best part was being able to read everything in one go. Loved the way you have described their emotions. So real and so expressive in your style.

Nice :))

Thank you.. :-)

Awesome story.. Loved it...

Very well written...
Loved how arnav and khushi have insecurities...
get mad at each other but understand and communicate
Looking forward to reading more of ur stories...

Originally posted by: sherin1689

The best ...most realistic stories i have ever read...

plain truth ...plain facts...life is nt just all about happily ever afters...bt one has to go through trouble n fights just to relive the beauty of making up and feeling loved again!!!

Wonderful!! Good job buddy...

looking forward n hopping tht u will write something new which is as wonderful as this one or maybe even better!!

:D

Thanks...I am already writing another one but that FF is about politics- we, the people. :=)