ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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sheen_jyoti

@sheen_jyoti

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

After completing the show.. i was really looking for some good FFs with Arnav Khushi and must say tht this is an awesome read. Truthfully and beautifully portrayed emotions common in the real world... keeping the "forever"ness alive in the background.

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

its awesome! am still reading! :)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Really enjoyed this.
A very real feeling when you read it...

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

I completed reading this a week ago but was lazy to comment then.

I loved reading this Fic. There have been many stories on IF on 'sheetal track' but this one has been the best so far. While reading this I realized, that you understood their character too well. As their dilemma has been expressed perfectly. And I also loved the way that track has been dealt with here, keeping them very true to their characters.

Loved reading this. Thank you Eccentrica for linking RB's index to me. I hope to read other stories too very soon.😊

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

beautifullly written FF...love the entire story!!😊😊😊😊

You have portrayed their emotions beautifully, the relation they share, the realization that they are miles apart yet the love that binds them together...

Taking small steps towards each other..!! awessommee 👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

WOW you were better than the writers on the show, its a shame that the relationship didnt grow like yours did after the 'get rid of shyam plot'. I loved the way that theyboth irritated each other yet both apologised just like a good marriage, two people at different ends of the spectrum making sure that their love lasts. Amazing writing so glad I found your index. So far the stories are so good. Please promise to finish them all!.

but I am definitely a BIG fan of your works muwh. 👏

Edited by addicted25 - 11 years ago

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supriyakhu

@supriyakhu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

I don't know if you still follow the comments you receive for your stories written way long back. But i would like to commend you for this. Its absolutely very well crafted and conceived. :)

Kudos to you :)