ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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jeetega

@jeetega

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

I really wish this was how they tackled the story from the Sheetal track rather than all that stupidity that was shown. This would have shown the nezt stage of life which people can relate to. You tackled the insecurities, disappointments and related problems which any married couple will find in the normalcy of life. Just like you showed, some situations have solutions and some don't, there you have to compromise.

Beautifully written and conveyed!

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ammullu1

@ammullu1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Read it in one go.it didn't feel like fiction but more close to reality

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Incredibly beautiful story. Love the direction your story took and the way in which you explore the nuances of two people coming closer, getting to know each other and respect each other. This is a story that celebrates the building of a firm foundation for a lifelong commitment between two individuals. Loved it!

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Phoenixrises

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Oh my god! I absolutely loved this story! I have read your 'The Sum of All Parts' before this. Found your index, then this story and finished reading it all in one go. I must say you've transformed their emotions perfectly into a words. A rare gift indeed. Absolutely brilliant story.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Beautiful story loved it so much...

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xBabyAngelx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

That was beautiful story

Very well written

Loved it very much

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Zeehana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Read it once again

Yet this story has it own charm ...

It just felt like I am reading it the First time

I had same curiosity and same interest

This story contains some sort of reality rather than fairytale

That one of the thing i liked about this story

Really Great work!!

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

I lov noje simplicity and realness about this story. No high end drama. Just normal problems a couple faces post marriage. Sure Arnav and Khushi's back story isn't normal at all but this story made them more real. It was beautifully explored. Loved it.

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Just loved the way u dealt with the issues with so much understanding, insightn simplicity... Specially liked the thought of happily ever after being an abstract concept...

Beautifully written... Fabulous work!!!

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aditi aher

@aditiraher

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

No words to decsribe how beautifully u write.. Its magic.. I really love ur work.. Keep writing.. Its very hard to find such depth in writing ... U have that skill... U encourage me a lot to write my own story... Thanks