ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Absolutely loved this story. Wish they would have shown this on the show.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

A very beautifully worded concept. It came across as realistically it could, and explained mundane things with such keenness that you could relate to it as much possible.

I enjoyed Arnav and Khushi in the story. They are two individuals who were brought together in highly unfavorable circumstances, poised with complications, trust issues, and much more than anyone could absorb. Their inner fights were exhibited with such maturity that it really seems the characters have come alive.

Wonderful exhibit. And I am very much glad I made a read at this. Its truly, in all sense, worth all the appreciation.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

If I may ask. Due to a lack of an index, the 2nd page had the last part right?

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: conundrum.
If I may ask. Due to a lack of an index, the 2nd page had the last part right?

Yes. The story is completed.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

WOW... such a lovely story... this is one of those after reading which every readers are bound to say, kaash humara IPK aisa hota... it makes me feel what not could have happened in ArShi life after Shyam ji was out... so much possibilities were there... kaash our CVs thought like this... kaash... but at least we have amazing shots like this... isse humare afsos thode kaam toh hotey hai... THANK YOU sooo much for this amazing work dear... love ya...

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

lovely story ...worth reading :D

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Wow...your stories are amazing...been reading from the afternoon and can't seem to stop!!

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Maria Adam

@whatasurpise

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Such a good story, it highlights how Arnav and Khushi moves forward from their past.

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

HI

This was an outstanding romantic story with stark reality of life. I do wonder how young authors are highly creative enough to produce such quality stuff. Amazing.👏

Love
Anna