ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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Scarboroughfair

@Scarboroughfair

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

This is the most beautiful short-story I have ever read. You have a knack of ending with impactful lines that leaves the reader breathless. You have taken such a refreshing and realistic take on married life that I am simply in awe. This is what romance is. I loved the scene where she is dancing in that white sari and he watches. In that understated moment you made my stomach fill with butterflies without as much as a touch. Stunning vocabulary. Excellent story-wroting skills. I would have easily paid to have read this!

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srishti9015

@srishti9015

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

*speechless* the sheer simplicity of the storyline yet the way in which you wrote it...my mouth is literally wide-open-KKG-style...i've never read anything that captures the true essence of arhi's relationship the way you have and to say it was brilliant would not do justice the thought and effort u've put into this..the way both their attributes have been manipulated yet their originality retained is definitely applaud worthy. i swear, i know i dont have any right to say this, but often people misconceive "happy endings" for an eternally sacrificing nature and inability to express one's own needs for the sake of the ones they love but the way the ongoing struggle was depicted in a positive light by showing that there was always something to gain by sharing your thoughts rather than keeping them caged up was wonderful...thats not to say i dont love happy endings but occassionally its proves to be utterly refreshing when you can look forward to a happy ending which is a result of some uncommon realism and practicality.

ok dont hit me but...😆 what ive rlly wanted to say all along is good job! 👏 *runs to read everything else in your index*

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome 👏

This was the simplest romantic story. I enjoyed reading it. 😳

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

I have recently started stalking ur work and am speechless...each story is so unique..simply awesome.

The crux of every/ any relationship...'meeting half way'...and then yes...it's happily ever after n forever...

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Mesmerizing. ...thats what feel every time I read this

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

ever two or three month i have to read it ...every time i find it beautiful , complex yet satisfying

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

A beautiful story...
Read in a go... And what makes it unique is its simple story line...
Even without any twists and turns, this story of yours stands out... One of the most realistic stories I've ever read... We all know that Khushi and Arnav are as different as cheese and chalk... And this story clearly depicted their inner conflicts and insecurities... And happily ever after is always a choice...
Loved it extremely :))))))

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Aryancha

@Aryancha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

just came across this..this seems to be such a simple and common story but dealt with so much sincerity..what happens in everyday life and how couples deal with it..awesome storyline.. 😊