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@.Boss.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Wow this was fabulous! Very insightful! Loved it!

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

I read your story...that was brillant .. Khushi portrayal was awesome... Even arnav too... U showed her insecurity brilliantly dear... Arnav dealing with dis... How der life be after marriage was awesome...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Your sheer depth of understanding of their psyche continues to astound me.

Marriage is made up of a lifetime of compromise and adjustment interspersed with euphoric moments - so beautifully brought out in your story.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

whenever i feel i want to read something worthwhile i read this story it always bring tears in my eyes and smile on my lips...wonderful insight in to married life of head strong beautiful couple

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1DAlice

@1DAlice

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Loved it!!

Beautifully written!!😊

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

I just re read this in a moment of desperation in my personal life.. this really brings it home so thank you... Each chapter helped me to think clearly and while it may not solve everything ..your story makes me realize the universe si unfolding as it should !!

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: LadyR
I just re read this in a moment of desperation in my personal life.. this really brings it home so thank you... Each chapter helped me to think clearly and while it may not solve everything ..your story makes me realize the universe si unfolding as it should !!

Thank you! It makes the entire writing effort worth when the story manages to give comfort when needed. :=) Thank you for telling me this.
I am glad you have found footing with the issue :-)

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

loved it..

p.s. Hope you plan to complete Adaptation 😊

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Beautiful way you portrayed the insecurities in their marriage & how they tried to overcome it. Subtle, sensitive, you made us relive those moments in a more satisfying manner, providing closure to those unresolved questions the serial left hanging.

Marriage is indeed not a continuous happily ever after, but those moments of happiness amongst those of unhappiness also. It is how we ride over all this together & emerge more loving.