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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow just wow ... Very beautifully written ... Loved it ... Loved the last chap the most
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Posted: 11 years ago
RB it's so good to read what u write...loved the story to bits...simple things between a couple that comes in way throughout the journey of togetherness...u just nailed it Lady...Thank u so much for this fiction...
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Posted: 11 years ago
enjoyed reading this story once again RB
missing u and ur writings dear
have u been writing these days
the last update which I read, of urs, was the one which u had DEDICATED to me -wow I felt so honored - it was a nice feeling - did u write anything after that RB - how is ur hand now - hope u are getting better dear
my mom always says that u will not know the importance of somebody or something until u loose them/it - its so true - I truly realize the value of ur pms now - I never knew I will miss them so much RB - previously, when u used to update regularly, every alternate days, and used to pm us for every update, I never realised the true value of it, but at heart I used to always thank u and appreciate u for ur extra efforts. but when I stopped getting them and when I had to hunt for the links and updates, I realized what effortless comfort I was enjoying before.
anyways, just wanted to say that I miss ur writings - will wait for u to come back soon -
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful and simple story...
Very rarerly we come across with these kind of thinking and writing style...

Absolutely loved it...

Do write more...will love to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful story, just read it in one go. Understanding the dynamics of a relationship is hard and one can easily fall into a rut. A lot of introspection in this story by the main characters and how a couple irons out the kinks on a day to day basis - realistic and beautifully written. Great work and hope to read more of your stories! (thx for reposting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
reading for the 8th time and that in one go!


how to describe my crazines abt the story in words is out of matter!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wooow what story loved everything about it love how your showed two broken souls looking for love and helping each other out
Edited by hiuytlm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis is awesome. D way you portrayed der emotions.. Fabulous.. Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
beyond words that was. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
a very beautiful story...i dont know what else to say...i really should start trying to be more eloquent..not today though..:-D

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