ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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Zoah

@xbeyondwordsx

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

I read this story a while back actually and instantly fell in love with it! This is exactly what I would have wanted to see in the show. The way you have portrayed the character of Khushi is so true to her attribute - a strong headed girl who aches for nothing more than just love :') Such a beautiful story and so so well written <3

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Firstly, for this superbly written FF I salute u.
I have read so many ff's...some being amazing themselves...yet I have never read a work like this one.
this has been the Distinct-est of all. And blv me..I m not saying so jst bcz I had to write smthng here...but bcz I genuinely felt so.
I say so bcz of the very idea of writing this ff. Usually ff's are about an intricate and to-the-last-detail planned stories. but this one did a magic wihout any actual story to be followed. here the idea of a story appeared totally laid bk to me...while the ff shined only bcz of its theme- the shades of their relationship.
I really did love the way u hv presented the various angles and dimensions in the relationship of Arnav nd Khushi.
The insecurities, jealousy, anxiety, care, love, realisations and most of all, trying to know each other even more to understand the opposite prson...everyone of those charcterstics hv been very well presented..and re-,defined. And a feeling I got most whie reading ws this is a perfect description of various dimensions tht every coupke must be experencing in their lives sometime...no matter how much dep they r in love.
in short, u hv totally rocked! very very well done! keep up!

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Devilways

@Devilways

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Wow! I had not expected this when I first began reading this story. Truly brilliant.

The way their relation has been explained is perfect! Their hot- cold nature but still an undersatnding off sorts. The fact that they reach out to one another and try to make it work. Thats great. Probably the true dynamics of a perfect relationship. Hats off to you.

Apart from the mathematics... I dislike all thereoms as a general rule and calculus apart from derivatives.

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Congratulations 😃

When I first started reading this FF, I was a little apprehensive to continue it because it was on the Sheetal track. But I couldn't stop myself from reading further because of the way the author had penned down this story.

I have come across many stories on this particular track but none deals with it as well as it has been done here. The author has handled the feelings of Arnav and Khushi with so much maturity that you would actually want Sheetal back on the show for this track to play out (if only the show had shown an execution anywhere close to this...)

The pain, the doubts, the emotions, the inner turmoil, the misunderstanding, the understanding, the silent exchanges between the couple is so vivid that you would feel what Arnav and Khushi are going through.

An artistically written story.

Thank you :)

ArHilicious Droolers #3: Zindagi Kaisi Yeh Paheli

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myriads

@myriads

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

loved this FF.

loved the way u have highlighted the subtle nuances in their relationship ,the way they have grown in their relationship.

This was awesome.

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

really nice.. but why always khushi have to adjust???

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

I keep coming back to read this story, its one of the most beautiful exploration of a phase in the life of Arnav and Khushi, poignant and heartbreaking, yet filling you with hope and love. Hope you continue writing Arshi tales.

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

this is how the show should have been.
read it in one go...AMAZING!!!😃

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Absolutely loved this story...it was interesting to see your version of what happens after the real marriage and when Sheetal pops up. Many thanks

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

i just started reading this and omg this is just so beautiful... reading some of ur chapters really makes my throat, heart hurt... the emotions portrayed in this fiction are just perfect... lovely... will catch up th erest of the chapters..