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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks All for the support !!
I definately continue the story but will be sending it as a PM.
Firstly because the people who actually read and manage to comment or like should have access to it .
There still are 10-15 chapters to go and once completed ill update the whole story on my blog..
Meanwhile you guys can comment here only ...😃
This Saves me of getting hurt beacuse honestly after 10 hrs in office this is the last thing i want to read !!!!
Luv
Sia
P.S- in case you arnt in my buddy list please add me ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh pls dear don't do this pls I beg u don't. Just bc some one didn't like this story u can't stop this ff. There are many fans who love this.
Actually I like this story bc Arjun is like that. It felt realistic. In real life people r not perfect or completely good. Every one has some faults. I love this grey shedded Arjun.Riya is not character less here she is just confuse between love and friendship. She is thosand times better than all those sati savitri heroines.
The girl who don't like this story should ignore it.Usse kisne kaha ye story parne ko.Agar har story mei Arjun or Riya ka character ek tarah ka hoga toh sab stories ek jese ho jayenge. There should be some difference. What would she tell about the world famous series TWILIGHT.and. VAMPIRE DIARIES. Ur Arjun reminded me of Damon. I just love this Arjun.Pls don't stop this ff. Continue it on if.Ab har koi apni story if se blog me transfer kar dega toh Arjun forum me toh story hi nahi bachega. Pls continue it on if pls.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Oh pls dear don't do this pls I beg u don't. Just bc some one didn't like this story u can't stop this ff. There are many fans who love this.
Actually I like this story bc Arjun is like that. It felt realistic. In real life people r not perfect or completely good. Every one has some faults. I love this grey shedded Arjun.Riya is not character less here she is just confuse between love and friendship. She is thosand times better than all those sati savitri heroines.
The girl who don't like this story should ignore it.Usse kisne kaha ye story parne ko.Agar har story mei Arjun or Riya ka character ek tarah ka hoga toh sab stories ek jese ho jayenge. There should be some difference. What would she tell about the world famous series TWILIGHT.and. VAMPIRE DIARIES. Ur Arjun reminded me of Damon. I just love this Arjun.Pls don't stop this ff. Continue it on if.Ab har koi apni story if se blog me transfer kar dega toh Arjun forum me toh story hi nahi bachega. Pls continue it on if pls.

Dont worry !!
I am not stopping the story but i will be PM it to everyone
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Everyone ,
Thanks you all for your support reagarding this FF .
I really thought about it and yes there isnt any need to PM everyone or to move story to the blog ..ill be continuing iit over here only ..
The ones who dont like it I care a damn but guys sorry for all teh triuble i gave you for last two days ..i am an impulsive person ...😆😆😆
I will be drowned in work for next 2 months so i wont be able to reply to all the comments individually but illl be posting the Chapters in middle ...but please do keep commenting guys they are great motivations .
Also ill upload the previous chapters once i get time but i am posting a short summary for all the readers
Thanks Again guys
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Posted: 12 years ago

The story begins with Arjun & Riya celebrating their 1st marriage anniversary but we see that there is a underlying tension between them .

Abhi was Riya childhood friend and also her boyfriend .they both were in love and Arjun entered the picture.
Arjun had fell in love with Riya and as he came to know that Riya had a boyfriend he was ready to test thier love and see if Riya actullay deserves to be with Abhi .While Riya had joined ETF he realationship with Arjun also improved from being mere friends to something else .Slowly but steadily Arjun had managed to penetrate the walls around Riya and also .Riya was also geeting attracted to Arjun meanwhile and she also realizes the fact .
Meanwhile Arjun had seen the changes in Riya and was happy
Its still not revealed what had happened in the past but in present Riya masks all her love by anger and hate for him
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 14- And the hell Broke Loose

PAST

It was week back from Shimla but Riya still hadn't met with Abhi .She wanted to ask him that why did he had to cancel his plans to pick her up but he was unreachable on his cell phone. She even had visited his home but he wasn't there too. The unsetting felling in her stomach rose again as something very major had to happen .Abhi on the other hand was in Shimla trying to figure out the mess his life had been .He was always compared with his dad in his profession and still wasn't been able to make him proud and the one person who stood by him was also slipping away .After an week he finally decided to go the Mumbai and talk with Riya as an mature individual without judging anyone of them and thus he packed his bags and left for home.

PRESENT

How much had Arjun tried he couldn't let Riya listen to him. Yes he was the one to put the final nail in her relationship with Abhi but it was already broken because of his insecurities and she wasn't ready to listen to him. It was 6 months now and Riya still wasn't ready to listen.

"Sir, Justice Choudhary has come to see you "

"Send Him in"

"Mr Rawte , hope you are fine "He asked while shaking hands with Arjun

"What brings you here Mr. Choudhury "

"Still the same Arjun, I thought living with Riya would make you well mannered"

"Come to the point"

"I just came to see, how are you. "

"Then I think you had enough time gazing me and you can leave"

"Tch- so much Anger, if only you would have not taken any action against me your life would have been much easier na. I told you not to mess with me but you didn't and see the result now .Your wife only knows half the truth and she trusts me more than you"

Arjun eyes were seething with anger but he controlled as it was his office and he couldn't do anything. Sameer had already seen Justice Choudhury moving out and rushed in his cabin to calm his friend.

"What was he doing here Arjun"

"Trying to remind me of my Failure Sam"

"Riya, still doesn't listen, do you want me to talk "

"No Sam, she won't listen to anyone .I have been patient with her but i think its high time now "

"What I did, and how it was manipulated all has to come out in open and then it would be her decision completely. She can stay or she can leave "

Sameer stood there watching his friend finally making the most important and painful decision of his life. He was ready to let Riya go and he cursed the day when they had found about the true face of Justice Chaudhary and had brought it out in the open but as fate would have it the proofs were lost and he was out in the open and Abhi &Riya had separated for ever because of him .He wished that Arjun hadn't listened to him and would have agreed to sponsor Abhi US trip just to get him out of the picture

PAST

There were celebrating the success of ETF and everyone was in a good mood .Abhi thought that it would be the best time to meet Riya, also he wanted to surprise her .But when he entered the venue she was missing and so was Arjun.

Riya wasn't feeling well that day thanks to all the stress in her life and was about to leave when she fainted .Arjun eyes were following her and he knew that she was stressed because of Abhi .He had seen them both in Shimla and hadn't come to pick her up .A part of him rejoiced at the fact that he would be spending more time with her but then there was another part which felt guilty too. Riya throughout the journey was quite and had kept her distance from him. She was all the time with Shree & Chotu.

Arjun had scanned the whole party area but she had been missing for a while now and he was getting worried .He saw her lying on the floor of the empty corridor and hurriedly picked her up and took her to a room .Riya was coming back to her senses and she saw that she was yet again in his arms .

"Arjun, I am fine "

"No you aren't, you are burning with fever .Anyways let me take you the room and then you can rest meanwhile I call the doctor"

"You are stubborn aren't you "She smiled at him and let him take the charge

Both were unaware of the fact that there were 3 people who were watching them closely each having their own motive ' A newspaper Journalist, Justice Choudhury & Abhi. None could hear the conversation but it was enough that Arjun was taking a smiling Riya to a hotel room.

Riya had her head down in shame as she stood in front of her parents. She didn't know how to explain what had happened because in reality she had done no wrong. Yet she felt guilt in putting her parents in such a situation.

Every leading newspaper had pictures of Arjun carrying her and she smiling at him and the articles went on describing the blooming love story of ETF

"I am sorry." she whispered to her parents. "I don't know how this happened."

"Did'.do you like Arjun?" Riya's father asked cautiously. "

"NO!" she quickly refuted the claim. "You know I love Abhi

Riya was apprehensive as she met up with Abhi. She knew that their relationship was strong enough to withstand many obstacles but she wondered whether this would put them over the edge.

"I had fainted and he took me to the hotel room to rest and had even called the doctor." Riya explained, hoping that he would understand.

"I believe you." Abhi said without any hesitation but then he continued on. "It's not that Riya, I just want to know whether you have any feelings for him. Please be honest."

"No! I don't have feelings for him. It's only a case of admiration, nothing more. We are just friends Abhi."

"Really only friends then what were you doing wrapped with him in his shirt in Shimla Riya "

"Abhi you were there."

"Yes I was there and saw everything with my eyes Riya, that why I am asking you if you like him and then just let us end it over here only" Abhi added having no idea from where this sudden anger had come

Riya stood in silence for a minute trying to sink on the words thrown at her from someone who knew her since her childhood.

"No one can come between us Abhi if we trust each other "And with this she ran back to her car the tears now falling freely

Arjun on the other hand didn't not pay heed to any of the articles nor didn't he clarify on anything .He had managed to convince everyone to just ignore this news as it will die down soon. But he had a ulterior motive .He wanted no one to know the truth. Abhi had to go out if the picture if Riya had to become his and he knew that Abhi wouldn't be able to handle it .They made sure that Riya & Arjun should be spotted together or with the team and would act indifferent to it .With time the news would die down the first seeds would be laid

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 15- Away

PRESENT

The drive back to home had silence in it .As they were about to go the bed Arjun moved to the study. She waited for him to come and had no idea when she fell asleep .The morning also he had left her without any word. She couldn't figure out the reason for change in him .Everything was same but yet there was difference. She hardly saw Arjun at home and in the office also he wasn't present for most of the time. She thought of asking Sameer the reason but just couldn't bring herself .It was only after few days that she came to know that he had to go undercover.

"Arjun, where are you going "

"He didn't reply to her to kept on looking to the file "

She threw the file away and asked again, "where are you going "

"Ms Riya, firstly i am your boss so don't forget that and secondly where am i going should not be your concern"

"I am your wife Arjun and i have full right to know where are you going "

He just looked at her for a minute, she looked adorable when angry but it was after 6 months that she had accepted their relationships.

I will be away for at least two months, the details of which are only with Sameer. No one knows about it and I don't think would be correct for you to know .Anyways Riya , wont it be good for you not seeing me for two months alteast you don't have to bear the pain .And yes once I am back ill release you from this pain completely .

Riya just stood there listening to his words, he was away on a mission which she had no idea about .She should have been happy the only thing she wanted was happening but she wasn't .It scared her and with a heavy heart she turned around to be in the confines of her cabin the second.

Arjun just stood there watching her, at that moment gone was the strong Riya but it was her Riya who looked so vulnerable and fragile .All he wanted to gather her in his arms and let her know that al will be well but alas, that wasn't the case .He knew that this mission was difficult but he had to come back for her for them. Yet again there was silence but today there was no anger in it but something else .That day he held her close to himself as they slept but sleep away from their eyes .Every time Arjun used to go undercover there would be someone accompanying him but this time he was all alone and it sacred her .She didn't think of anything that her actions might look across but she turned and kissed him pouring all her fear , anger and her love on that one kiss .Arjun was shocked at first but then he kissed her back as it was after a long time that Riya had taken initiate in their relationship. He didn't stop her but also couldn't let go of this moment .He swiftly undressed and himself and looked into her eyes. For once after all those months he saw love in them and nothing else just their love and bent down to kiss her once again .He left her lips and trailed kisses on her jaw line not wanting to leave an inch of her skin .

"It hurts Arjun"

"I know and I promise ill make it go away "

"You gave me this hurt how you can make it go away "

He looked back into her eyes her constant struggle with herself evident with them.

'I know I gave you pain, But I did what I had to do to make you mine. I tried and I succeeded but I never knew that it would come down to hurt you in such a way that you won't be able to forgive me. I manipulated situations according to me but you still don't know the real truth Riya which lead to your downfall .Yes I sponsored Abhi US trip but he was giving you pain and that pain wasn't letting you to move forward .I did what I think was write and I would never change my decisions then because if that would mean that you would have been of someone else and i couldn't never live with that .I have loved you and will keep on loving you.

"Arjun, I have always love you too" She finally confessed her feelings in the darkness of the night where

Even her soul wouldn't be there to judge her. The time she knew that he was going away the ache in her heart had increased and the only thing that mattered at that moment was their love.

Arjun finally heard what he had wanted to listen for long and bent down to love her trying to soothe away every pain that he had given her.

Riya woke late in the morning and turned to see but there was no Arjun. She was about to curse herself for losing to him but she saw the letter placed next to her

Riya,

Don't curse yourself, you didn't loose it to me but to our love .No matter how you hate me but at least try to find out the truth yourself and not to listen to others .They say karma is a bitch and it would come back to haunt you and make you pay for your sins .I think i have done my share of because staying away from you kills me and i can't handle this pain anymore, neither can i see you in pain .You wanted freedom thus I'll give you one. If I don't come back you will be free and even if i come back ill release you from the shackles of our relationship.

But for my sake and for our sake try to forgive me .Whatever happened is past is not something that iI can change but both of us can try and move forward but then it will be your decision .

Love

Your's Arjun

She didn't stop the tears in her eyes and let them fall freely. No matter how much she tried she couldn't hate Arjun and neither could she love him fully .There was something that was always stopping her for letting go of the past .For once she would listen to him and try to find out the other half of the truth which was hidden from her as he said

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Sia HUGS for u

thank u for continuing t here

dis is one of my fav stories

now coming to chapter

Amazing , awesum chapter

Arjun going on for d mission

n ria finally poured her heart out

she finally confessed her actual feelings

She loved him always but d anger for him never allowed her to accept t

That letter was ...amazing

he will free her for her sake...1ce he returns

.dis s wat is true luv ...

Dis was d bestest update...for d story till now...

Continue soon

n me first yippee
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally the mystery is being cleared, about what happened between Arjun, Riya and Abhi😭
And that jugde😡, he used everything ti his advantage and created so many troubles for Arjun😭
but finally this case, where Arjun will be out for 2 months, only then Riya will be able to understand and really decided whether she can forgive him or not😭
and finally Arjun has decided to let Riya go, good choice, because Riya isnt even willing to hear him after 6 months😭
Please continue soon😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...please continue soon...i am eager to know the full truth

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