Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

fantastic update :) loved it

love how she knows that she is his greatest weakness

so even dadi knows about the differences between them

feeling bad for arjun first he lost his parents and then his grandfather :(

so even riya has an idea that arjun loves her more than anything

loved trio's POV very well written

all 3 of them are right in their positons

feeling so bad for all three of them 😭

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

u removed it !!

by any chance ll u re-post it ???

Interesting intro & part 1

Felt like they are not happy in their marriage life.

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Hi All

I just received this PM yesterday and it actually hurt me a lot thats why i removed it from IF .I really need time to write again ..beacuse the person has actually raised questions on me

Sorry Guys but ill move to a blog that way i can atleast restrict the readers

Hi Sia ,

I dont know if thats your real name ..i just went through If only today and there were few things i wanted to tell you about it .

Why the hell are ruining characters of both Arjun & Riya.

Arjun is a nice guys but you are showing him as a person who will steal someone else love by manipulating the person through his body .Is that what teh show is all about .if you have to show why dont you tell about the cases.

Riya she is in love with Abhi but is she of such a bad character that she would love over arjun ...You think that girls are so cheap and of weak character.

Anyhow Riya & Arjun have to be together but show are hell bent on showing that they came toghter because of Arjun manipulations and Riya weal control over her desires ...I am not sure if this is what you have seen in the serial .

The FF is read by many people and you are trying to spoil the image of Arjun and Riya .being a women how can you show that she lusts over arjun while being in love with Abhi .Are you like that urself ..

There are few more people who agree to me but obviously they will not speak up .I spend teh whole day reading fictions regarding Arjun and yours is the worst i have come across atleast the other stories give out a good message whereas your purely will spoil the people who will read it ..

Humble request to you please dont spoil the charcters we love and espically dont make Riya a women who is high on her hormones ...hope u can correct yourself through this message

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

i for one loved your story, and if someone isnt understanding it well, then let me tell you it's only a FAN FICTION😡

i want you to also continue it there, you arent even going against any IF rules, and as for you are destroying Arjun and Riya's characters, then i dont agree, for god's sake it's just a writer's imagination, and she can well write what she wants, if someone doesnt wanna read, then she just has not to read it😕, why read and then make such complaints😡

and now about your character, noone has the right to judge someone's character based on a story😡

if we go by her, then most writers here, including me, must be characterless persons😡

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

OMG.. who send this pm??

its only an ff... how can one ruin image of characters through it... there are other ff's which is much different from onscreen characters... if u dont like one ff.. skip it.. shouldn't bash like this..

anyway i dont care to talk about this pm..

I LOVE ur story.. n i dont find ur charecters n storyline ruining the show for me... i hope u wont take this pm seriously n will continue ur work... i really like ur concepts...i was sad about u removing ur other ff.. now this.. please dont take it ur heart..

if love can only happen once.. we cant expect arjun to fall for riya or any other girl after roshini...

hope u will continue both ur ffs... n please give me link..

i am ready to read ariya ffs.. even if its not in if

Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

after reading this pm i feel like punching this person on the face 😡

i mean how could she say all this stuff to you

and she has no right to judge your character based on a story

for god sake this girl needs to understand that its just a fan fiction not a real life story 😡

god knows whats wrong with such people if they don't like something just keep it to themselves don't just insult and hurt the writer like that

they don't understand how much efforts and hard work writers put into write something

honestly speaking i love this SS its different from other stories on arjun forum and it's on the list of my favorite fan fictions on arjun forum

my request to you is that continue it here on if to show her that you don't care what she thinks about this story and you will continue writing it no matter what happens

i can totally understand how upset you are but don't worry all your readers are with you 🤗

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

hi sia🤗... whoever send u this pm it is her/his pov ...no one has right to put a quetion mark ...not even on the basis of anything...the person has problem may stop reading this let it be but we want to read it...plz continue...its ur imagination n ur story...so dont worry continue it...

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Whoever sent this pm is very weird. No offense but honestly if you don't like a FF don't read it

you don't need to criticize it so harshly. 😡

And I don't really care what she thinks. I love your ff Sia!!!!! So please don't feel bad.

And is she thinks that ruining Arjun and Riya's image well she is wrong!!! Because you are not. It's just fiction. Agar aisa hai toh phir addle log IF main characterless huin including me.

I know you must be feeling really sad, but don't worry I am with you and i AM sure many others as well.

So...meri traf se ek Biiiggg cuddly HUG!!!! 🤗🤗

Now give me a BIG SMILE!!!!!! 😃

please?!!

😊

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Is that the PM?
Who sent it?
Its a FF n just a writer's imagination..
About ruining characters image..thats not true.
The story may be much different from the show..the writers should be encouraged to write more not bashed in such a way...
Sia..well I guess thats ur name, I love ur writings.
Please don't stop writing.
Hope you'll continue soon.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#390

dont know who send this pm but its completly useless... plz dont think much about it...
its just a FF dont understand in what way the characters are being ruined... ff's are there so that one can write what he/she loves...
if one doesnt like any ff just skip it dont know why people start to bash or post negative comments about it... and accusing the writer's character is just not done... plz dont pay any attention to that pm... she has no right to say all these things to you...
and i just absolutely adore(in love with ) your writings and stories... plz plz continue with your stories and not pay heed to that pm or person...

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