Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
hello deary di *sry i dont noe ur name may i noe d name of d luvly lady;)*!!! read all the 3 parts at a go...nyc concept and story...seems got a nice plot in future ahead:)...d convo was lil confusing between riya shree...but it was gd...took a lil tym 2 understand it is an intresting stry till now luving reading it...do continue...:)*happy kissy day*:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awesome...

waiting to know what led to ariya marriage n i hope riya has some feelings for arjun n vise versa!!

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...
loved shree and riya's bonding...
riya chotu shree and neha convo was nice...
cant wait to know arjun's pov and what led to ariya marriage...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice..
loved the bonding b\w Riya & Shree
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
amazing update
loved riya shree chotu nd neha's bonding
can't wait to read arjun's pvo nd how ariya got married
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
great update :) loved it
loved riya's conversation with shree and chotu :)
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eagerly waiting to know arjun's pov
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

v Chapter 4

PRESENT

She walked to him and as if right on cue everyone started asking her about Abhi. Only Mrs. Sharma prodded further "You two certainly looked at ease on the dance floor. She was hardly flustered by the comment instead she gave a small smile, Well we should, we have known each other our whole lives. He is a very dear childhood friend stressing on each syllable. There was hidden meaning behind her every word and it was directed towards to him. His mere presence always brought out a different side to her, which no one else could witness .She could recognize him amongst the crowd, being in the same place as him would set her heart racing and even with closed eyes she could identify his touch. Such was the power her had on her it. Since childhood she was known as the clam person his presence made her darker and more complex. She wanted to hurt him and remind him of his actions.

Alas, there was no way she could end this bitterness. ?

"And how does Arjun feel about it? She gazed up at him, trying to gauge his reaction but it was more of a challenge and his next set of words reinstalled that Arjun Rawte never fails.

"Why would I mind?" He responded to her challenge by putting his hand around her shoulder, to mark her as his own. To the rest of the crowd they would look like the perfect couple but he could feel holding her breath "After all she is my wife and that's all that matters."

She is mine; and it was decided the day we met. And no other man could change that or ever can

PAST

FLASHBACK: ETF OFFICE MUMBAI

While sitting at the bar he couldn't help but think of his morning discussion with conversation with Sameer.

Arjun, Chotu called and informed that there are some illegal drug dealings going on in Devils Den. It's the Disco, I know Sam, and I also stay in Mumbai and if I think about it I do have a much social and active life as compared to you he replied with a chuckle. Whatever, Arjun, it's a well known place so we need to be extra careful so I expect no theatrics from your end and don't you dare defy my orders. As his best friend was still looking more interested in solving the crossword than listening to him the ETF had to finally raise his voice - Anyways Mr. Arjun Suryakant Rawte there isn't any rule which you haven't broken and it's me who is answerable to the department , So don't you even think to mess around this time .Have I made myself clear? Sure, Sameer Sir, I follow you orders he replied with the smirk which Sameer knew meant trouble either for the criminals or for him

And now after 3 hrs of alcohol tasting he wasn't sure that why the case was given to ETF. Even the local police would have tackled the case after all just few broken teeth and bones and the man had started to speak out the truth .Now pondering over it Sameer would be livid tomorrow and he would be really hard to pacify him. He knew, they both knew that he was rather bored by the lack of challenge. It was becoming too easy to watch them break down until they had no option but to give into him. And then he would do as he wished. His patience was wearing out and that would often lead him to unleash his worst on the criminals tough it was correct but against the protocol of being a cop. Even his team members could sense the change in him

He was the Super Cop as he was named by his fellow colleagues and indeed one the strongest one. No one had the audacity to stand up against him for his one look could send shivers down the enemy's spine. Nowadays it was almost becoming like a child's game which was repeated every other day. But despite all that it his obsession and the only aim to cleanse the society as much as possible were still there. Power & adulation were never his aim but his aim was itself the reward.

Now that he was on an introspection mode for which he knew he has to thank the bar tender. He realized that he was alone, yes professionally he was flourishing , Personally he had a friend in Sameer and family in ETF team and not to forget his Dadi .But still there was a emptiness which was yet to filled and that's when a soft feminine body bumped against him spilling his drink .


PRESENT

As she felt her husband's arm around her, she just stood there silently.

"Isn't that right, Riya?" Arjun asked even as he held her. "Nothing else matters, except that we are married." His words weren't a warning but rather a reminder of their relationship.

The relationship which defined her whole existence

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
intresting part... Riya still hv feelings for Abhi den why did she marry Arjun??? nd de way Arjun speaks... well i'm confused... sumthn s amiss... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
great update :)
flashback was nice :)
does riya still love abhi?
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#40
That was simply but beautifully portrayed...loved the update

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