Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Thanks for liking,
I need to figure out how do we send PM''s

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Great start

plz PM me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: devildiva21

amazing update...!!

riya and abhi best friends...!!!
continue soon...!!!

Thanks ,
Yes they were best friends but i gues you missed out on the lovers part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: tani23

Awesum start


a very different n a very interesting story

loved reading both d parts

continue soon

n please i request a bit longer updates

Thanks Tani ...
Ill try and do longer updates ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu91

lovely start...

its arjun rawte anniversary...
wt's his wife name...
waiting...
cont soon...
while updating next part do PM me...

Thanks Anu !!,
The Wife name is revealed but i still need to figure out how to send PM's
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Thanks for the response guys !!
I am still writing the next part but just like to clarify few things ...
-It would not be a normal love story between Arjun & Riya as you would have found out via the update..
-The story will alternate between Past & Present - I would colour code them . Also i don't proof read much as i update while in office (My brain works best there 😆)
- I dont know how to send PM ...😳 i am not familiar with the whole process of it ...
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But here a teaser of the next part

He saw her walking towards him and he could make out the cracks on other wise her calm exterior. If anyone would see her they couldn't see the storm brewing within her, but he was ACP Arjun Rawte and he could always look through people and this was HIS RIYA and even if she didn't like it he could always read through her every gesture and unspoken words. He knew meeting the other man would leave its effect; yes he would always be the other man – His wife's first Love.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

v Chapter 3

He saw her walking towards him and he could make out the cracks on other wise her calm exterior. If anyone would see her they couldn't see the storm brewing within her, but he was ACP Arjun Rawte and he could always look through people and this was HIS RIYA and even if she didn't like it he could always read through her every gesture and unspoken word. He knew meeting the other man would leave its effect; yes he would always be the other man His wife's first Love.

So Mrs. Rawte would you shed some light on the hottie you were dancing with?

Wow!! My finance calls another man hottie should I be worried? Of Course you should Shree!!! After all you left me alone just to pressurize Sameer Sir to buy the latest software for ETF so I need to look around and probably .and she winked at him.

"Stop it you guys, Neha that Abhinav Choudhury my childhood friend, and Shree you better not bore Neha and no office talks in the party, Waise if your craziness with gadgets goes on like this I am wondering your children will be called Mega & Tetra bytes "

, Na re Ri , I am sure he would call them Version 1 & Version 2" Chotu added much to the amusement of the ladies .

"Oho Chotu Ji , I think you are missing your 11:30 wali what was her name tell me .Nah!! I forgot our body builder can't ask name of a girl.

"Chotu I think Shree is just jealous why don't you and met hit the dance floor.

Neha you came with me yaar !!!!!arre!!!!! listen!!!!!!!!!!! accha baba sorry.

"Riyaaa I thought you were my team"

"Sorry Shree but you seriously need to spend more time with Neha otherwise –"

" Oho!! Romance Tips from Mrs. Rawte ,he added cutting her short"

"Lagta hai Kaafi acche se samjhaya hai aapko aapke Arjun Sir oops Arjun Ne. "

Uff !! tum ladkiyan okies baba I promise nothing about him he added seeing the same stern look on her face which mirrored her husband

."Riya, Hmm I mean are you ok? I know what you mean Shree but don't worry all is well.

She turned and poked him and said Mr should try and get you girlfriend back from your best friend before the dance the night away.

Oh Yes!! Thanks for the reminder enough of their dancing; now it's my time to tango and he headed towards them not before giving her a flying kiss.

She could only thank god for Shree, behind the geeky Techwiz was the man who just knew how to spread love and happiness. Whenever she needed him he was there and not to forget he was her support system when she had joined ETF. Now that he had Neha with him she was sure that he would have his happily after. At least someone would, she could never let him know about anything as for him Arjun was like brother and she knew his secret -he wanted to become just like him "Perfect"

She was suddenly aware of eyes glancing at her intently and she looked up she meet the eyes of her husband .As usual his face had no emotion but he was gazing at her as if he could read all her thoughts and at times she was sure he could but she never wanted to admit that to herself.

Arjun Suryakant Rawte -her lawfully wedded husband.

it mattered was him, she knew that he knew all about Abhi because if Arjun has set his eye on something he would make sure to know anything and everything about it.

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awesome start
different and unique..loved the different story line
waiting to know more about Arjun's POV and also what had caused Riya to marry him leaving her first love!
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Am curious to know the rest of the story. Great update. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

love the way story s progressing... update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
NICE PART... waiting for more!!

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