Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Awesome part... FB ws good... So Abhi s having doubts abt Arjun's behaviour n liked hw Arjun recognised it nd smartly behaved without giving any doubt to Riya... Arjun Sam convo ws good... update soon

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Sia

@satanslove

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: nabeela99
yes yes yes

you should continue soon!!!!

Waise bhi mein romance ki bhook mujhe mardeke gi!!!

help me!!!

Mujhe bacha looo!!! please!!

*cough, cough*

help!!! (update soon!!!!)

kar diya behena !!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Beautifully written...
All their feelings were penned beautifully...
Arjun wanting to make Riya his..
Abhi feeling insecure...
then the undercover mission...as husband n wife..
Arjun's dialouge...loved it..
Awesome update..

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

nice update
past was nice
abhi feels insecure, arjun on a mission to get riya & riya is so confused abt her feelings
ariya on undercover mission as a couple😳 good
hope ariya ll patch up again soon
i think riya needs a shock treatment for that to move further in her life😆
nice cont soon

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

fab update

last line was a a killer line

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Awesome...

loved it

Arjun na devilish hai...but i love the way he behaves and flirts with her...soo cool and casual

loved the night scene and then the morning

feel a bit sad for Abhi...could feel his helplessness!

usske naak ke neeche se Arjun usske GF ko udhaa raha hai!

The last scene was funny...Arjun bhi na

cont soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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liquidfantasy

@liquidfantasy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

amazing update. Loved it!

Its arjun-riya there will be sparks. i love how arjun is so strongly in love with her. the moments between past and present are very well written.

i wonder what happnd between them that riya turned so cold.no doubt she loves him but...sigh!

update soon 😊

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

seriously a mindblowing update...!

only one request plz cont soon...!

u write very beautifully...the way u show past and present smoothly is just wow!!!!!!!!

kewl!!!!!!!!

want to know more about the three love birds...!arjun passion to make riya his,abhi scared,riya's confusion...!!!

riay loves arjun but y is not giving in...*sigh*

waiting for ur next update!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

sia dear 🤗
Thank u fr a long update 🥳
Arjun bro ki personality 🤣
Riya se meri izzat baksh dena omg!!
dream home sweet name
present was gud
bt
loved d past...
abhi aww jealous or insecure...
sam bro fab!!!
case super interesting...
claps!!
Arjun bhaiya i whistle fr ur super cool attitude..!!
hats off
brilliant dear..!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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jumbo_dumbo

@jumbo_dumbo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

yes yes !! story wala Arjun is all urs

thanks for liking it😃

Hahaha.. Thank u.. So i m planning to take him away under the nose of Riya.. I will use the same tactics wic Arjun will use to take Riya away from Abhi.. So plan and write the tactics accordingly.. Chalo me off to read ur new update.. Will comment once i m done reading it..

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