Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

That was a really cool update!

Arjun is jealous of Abhi.

Riya is in a confuzzling state of her feelings towards Arjun.

You know whenever I read this story I feel like every things is happening for real.

This story has a very unique reality to it.

OMG!!!

Arjun shirtless!!!!!!!!😳

HAYEEE I just died!!!!!!

Update soon!!!!

Please please

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jumbo_dumbo

@jumbo_dumbo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Hey..

Jus finished reading the update...

Fab update...!!!!

I could visualize each and every scene happening rite in front of my eyes..

Awww.. Abhi is feeling insecured..

N riya, poor girl, she is confused abt her feelings..

And Arjun!!! What do i say abt him??? Girl, u r making me fall for him harder...

Hayye he was Shirtless!!!!!

Me in dreamworld..☺️

Thank u...😃🤗

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

WOW!!

That was a big update...

But awesome...!!!!

I loved it...!!!

Continue soon!!

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

awesome update
loved the past scenes
abhi feels insecure
arjun on a mission to get riya
ariya as couple on a undercover mission...amazing
loved the last scenes
plse pm me the next part
cont soon

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

This story definitely has a reality touch in it.After reading this i can only conclude is that riya being closed to Abhi since childhood has some what mistaken it as love only because she knows him in & out.But after arjun's entry in her life she is getting closed to him conciously or unconciously .Coming to arjun,i like his viewpoint as to make riya realise if she actually loves abhi or not.His saying that he'll atleast try making her fall in love with him.Abhi ,on the other hand,is somehow justified to being an overprotective BF,reason being we as human's.No one in this world will like their loved ones to be closed to someone else,but on the other hand if he actually trust Riya then he should let her be the same & accept her the way she is without manipulating her.For now eagerly waiting to know how their life's changed.Also it is definitely is a very lonnng update. 😉

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

great update dear

the past n present were in great balance...

the last lines from Arjun cracked me up.. waiting for nxt part

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

waooo dear wht an updtt..

its wndrfulll...da greyness of mr. angry sexi rawte md it yumlicious

lv da present part u give bt da past stl my alll concentrsn n hear tooo

da moments of dis chrctrs n der acts a soo real to me

i dnt feel dat im rdng a stry...cause i watchng it mrvlous dear

at 1st arjun way 2 mk riya aggrd 2 keep da gift 2 hrself...surpb acp

den da birth day party n arjuns atty waooo...compettrs mate

...bt da male gt da andr male

abhi gt arjun's behv...while riya dnt...

well how cn she mr.dynamic persona's shade made hr blind too

riya feel his presenc widout noticng him ..n he gt it

he ask hr hand 4 danc 4m her bf😆 poor abhi ..

why wldnt he b jls of him ...

bt at da present riya s bcm as arjun😕

now ihv gt a lil idea wht wll happn in past

bt lv da way he sleeps ..n only dis moment she relish lookng at him

now abhi tried 2 mnplt her...bt ots quti realistic cause human nature justifs it

watng 4 more scns in simla case

bt most fav dio is--""Also Riya I hate wearing shirts while I sleep and please senior hun tumhara and friend bhi isliye meri izzat baksh dena ""he dnt leave a chnc 2 ts her...extrmlyy lv dis arjun dr...extrmlyyy

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Hey Siya..

I've finally had the time and brains to read this one.. And have to tell you, Behna, this one is absolutely brilliantly written.. 👏 👏

Honestly, I'm in love with your characters; be it Riya, Abhi and of course my Arjun Ji..

And you my behna, have managed to describe this mushkil prem kahani in two words..

I'm soo looking forward to you unraveling their past.. As to what led Riya to end up getting married to Arjun.. And how exactly was Arjun responsible for the rift between Abhi and Riya..

Brilliant concept and very well written.. Loved it! 👍🏼

Please PM me whenever you update this one..

❤️

P.S.: First Vidzi, B1, Tina and now you.. Hadh hai yaar.. Mere Arjun Prem ko exponentially badhate hi jaa rahe ho..
Why does your Arjun have to be soo hawt, mean, yet desirable all at once!! 😉 😆