Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 8

awesome update dear
ammoni so sweet of uday
inspite of all this he wants to marry her
waiting for the future update
thanks for the pm dear

payel superb update..

loved the update keep it up!

Superb Update Dii... u rock 👏👏👏👏

Just finished reading
Its so awesome that i am speechless
Manyata is a prostitute ghough she is do pure
Udayveer is the show stealer here
The senapati sucksss
Thanks for the pms
Whole story is smazing
The sex looks divine like gods making out and not mortsls
It is so descriptive
Best part is thats its written in English
Please update soon
Loved this story
I want happy ending or will write your and majnu Os
Amd ipdate soon
Love u muah
And it has yo be duper long

awsssmmm payall plzzz give it a happyy endiinggg

Sorry 4 the late cmment
Read part 2 and 3 in one go
It was just awesome

PArt 2: Manyata's past is revealed..
Poor girl undergoes a lot of suffering
and I hate Aryan 😡whom she had considered as her own brother
How low can anyone stoop???

Part 3: I just loved these lines

"I will better die than living without you!" His voice sounded same intense.

She covered his lips with her palm, "Don't you ever dare to utter those words again".

It just reflects the pure love Manveer share...

And yeah Aryan got what he deserved

Update soon...and thnxs 4 the pm

I want this OS to have a Happy ending...

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Just finished reading
Its so awesome that i am speechless
Manyata is a prostitute ghough she is do pure
Udayveer is the show stealer here
The senapati sucksss
Thanks for the pms
Whole story is smazing
The sex looks divine like gods making out and not mortsls
It is so descriptive
Best part is thats its written in English
Please update soon
Loved this story
I want happy ending or will write your and majnu Os
Amd ipdate soon
Love u muah
And it has yo be duper long

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

reswa...i noe its gonna be rocking.now i'll read.
unres...
woah!!!
wat an update jiji!!! muah... loved it to the core. finally the love is struck. n i luv mrinaliniji. she is the bestest dadi any1 can ever get. the best part was wen uday proposed manyata, n wen he pinned her to the wall. sorry$ cannot giv a beautiful as m frm my cell. dare u giva late update jiji. dont pay any head to the unworthy followres. update abinashwar, library princess n break of dawn ASAP... DONT BEHAVE LIKE A CHILD.