Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Maxine, you are the maximum!!!!! I had fun reading your chapter, dialogues interchanged or caracter interchanged that Convo between Akash and his inner soul, what say!! What say!!! So glad that few of my favorite authors are going to continue. Kisses to all the knuckles that type for this Collab ff.

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Updated comment on Page 75.

Still laughing, BTW.😆

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

that was awesome... hum aapke hai kon?? hahah 🤣

just too gud... amazing chap..

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Taking a bow! 👍🏼

OMG it was H.I.L.L.A.R.I.O.U.S...

Be it Mami's eye shadow, Akash's Mathee, Payal realisation of no pheras, Akash's taunt to Anji abt Dadi... many many more... oh how can i forget the famous Daiyya Ho...

SLB & Kumud - do u even want me to start off with that...

Salute girl... outstanding...👏

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Taht was hillarious!!!!! Totally fun update... loved every biittt off ittt..

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Everything in this update was perfect...
Akash scared abt mami's shadow...his inner voice...😆
Khushi teasing arnav and he returning with lagi sharth...
Great one...

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Update your reses or face Maxine's wrath frndzzz! 😊

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

So Khushi knows Kumud too ... Lovely ! I love it that all beautiful girls are so friendly and in touch .😆

But abt Ratnagiri and how it ended up slap bang in the middle of Delhi ...I was as puzzled as Khushi initially but you answered all my questions ...satisfactorily ! 🤣

Not to take anything away from the other writers and I have enjoyed everyone's slant ...but this had your particular style and stamp and I liked it immensely !

Thnx for the pm in advance ...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

well lets see how this is gonna turn out to be
especially after the shocking finale there with payash getting married like that
man it seems that payal is just getting used to his extremely over the top make up mother
really the romance is already died down well that was quick wasnt it
seriously anji this is what you are worried about not the fact that they have gotten married secretly and without informing either of the family
well she sure has her prioritises set out right hai na anji
omg thats what arnie said in the serial and here we see akash saying it
we must be in parallel universe for sure
kya yaar yahan apne arhi havent gotten past making out and there akash is all set on his SR
chalo koi nahin at least one of the brothers is gonna get their SR soon
i cant believe i just said that sounds funny that to tell you the truth
so who told you to get married in such hurry mate
ab bhuagto iska parinaam
wasie apne arhi kahan hain ji
cant believe anji said that yaar who says that he has done his bit really
is that all that there is to it anji
what the hell was that man this family is just so weird i tell ya
even more than they usually are but who cares as they make us all laugh right
really we are getting off the point dear worrying about your friends full name
more things to focus on like getting yourself and buaji to Delhi sweetie
wait wont it all go down the drain when the news of payash wedding reach the gupta house
guess we shall now soon enough huh
okay back to khushi plan to escape to Delhi
are we really havuing this convo of how bad his flirting is
well that was bit well not ASRish if you think of it come on dude you are ASR and not some normal romeo yaar kuch hatke kehne ki jarurat thi aapko
but i guess that can be addressed once she come to Delhi if she ever does
see told ya dear all plans of going to delhi have gone down the drain am afraid
and there arnie wont get the chance to have their games on at least for the time being

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Wonderful chapter!! It was hilarious that Khushi was teasing Arnav about not being able to flirt. Wonder who the girl was though. Loved how Akash and Payal don't get a suhaag raat! Superb chapter!

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