Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

loved the update that was so cute and sweet loved anjlai lan to break payal rista awesome update and khushi and asr she tossed him into the pool and he pulled her in loved the update beautifully done thanks for the pm

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Vee, you know you are completely utterly crazy! I was laughing like a maniac...let me catch my breath and come back to comment more!!

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

that was completely mad chapter
I just loved it
you guys rock

😉

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Loved the update V !!!😃

It was awesome all the references were bang on like Buaji and her plait, Eeks Khushi munching on furniture seriously,koki and ahem ji ,awesome imagination 😊

I absolutely adore this Payal seriously what contrast to her original character !!

Then of course Arnav and Khushi in the pool i have always wanted to see that in the original series !!😉

All in all a Fab Update !!!👏

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Wow just read both chapters 13 and 14 and both parts were amazing additions to the outstanding collaboration. The updates were awesome and so funny to read, I'm loving Anjali's meddling in both there relationships. The part where Payal and Akash were kissing in front of the family was so hilarious and payal's dramatic rant in the bathroom describing the Raizada family was so funny. I cant believe Khushi had the courage to push Arnav in the pool, was fantastic. I cant wait to read the next addition to see what happens at the party. Thanks for the PM xx

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Awee... loved the impromptu events in this update! We have Payal complaining about Aakash's family, then Khushi jumping in water with Arnav... then Arnav giggling! And he mastermind to all this is, non other than Anjali! Loved the update! :)

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Ahh...that was a superb part...so damn hilarious

Loved it :D

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

amazing!! gigling khushi and arnav @ d poolside😆 payal & her worry abt having goat in the house😆 loved it!!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

two chappys together n i enjoyd readg it well and the scene of 5 at the lawn . . N arshis convo was nice 2 imagine. . Nd tey two into pool i expected lil more. . Waiting fo nxt update. .