Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 11

And an adorable ending of the update just made go all awww..

Cute. VERY cute.

Now when will Arnav and Khushi finally admit?

Guess its not far away! :)

Awesome update!

A party sharty to look forward to hai Devi Maiya Gupta's are in for a shock lol...

I loved the little play if intensity between Arnav and Khushi lol perfectly put in there

Can not wait for what the next writer brings its me soon ahhh the pressure!

PART 13 -- a hilarious update! it was sheer fun to see a speechless khushi, and then a militant one ready to rescue payal from akash... akash being his usual bleating stuttering self just added to the fun... arnav's questions to khushi, "So you mean to say all those times we 'canoodled' it was forced on you?" cracked me up, especially as khushi had no reply! but loved anjali best: her screams, then her admonition to her brothers to stop their amorous advances to khushi and payal so she could be saved from nightmares, culminating in the joy of having a brother in a relationship reminded me of one of those madcap adventures where the fun goes on nonstop... to top it all, khushi reminds payal that she's engaged, a fact that had totally slipped the latter's mind! can't wait to read what crazy idea anjali has come up with to stop that particular fiasco! these three women are soulmates, I believe, because no one can keep up with their crazy antics!

PART 14 -- another great update... anjali sure is sneaky! getting khushi to assist on the pretext of helping the payal-akash relationship, when all this was also to facilitate the khushi-arnav one! payal's curses were sheer poetry! buaji's plait seems to be a living breathing thing... poor lady never knows whether she's coming or going whenever khushi's around!

nice to see that the acidity is back... some lines that cracked me up but also show that arnav and khushi are falling in love: Silence. More Silence. No replies. Prolonged stares. Rustling desires. Veiled moonlight. Beautiful hearts. khushi thinks on her feet, so wouldn't have expected her to do anything other than to push arnav into the pool... the image of the two of them sitting on opposite edges of the pool giggling was adorable! They ignored the tightening in their stomachs, the flutter of their hearts. how long can they ignore this attraction?

the confused and almost hysteric payal was so funny! how can she be sacred of laxmi ji!

woah in the pool together! just hoping it was a full moon night! that would have been so romantic!

really wondering wats anjali's plan! im a bit confused about it! wasnt she supposed to show ahem and his mom that payal and khushi are already taken?

anyway looking forward for the next update:)