Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Awesome update! Every chapter is written so well! I like how Anjali is so good at planning everything lol. The dialogues were hilarious and I loved how Arnav and Khushi fell in the pool. I wish that actually happened in the show! Keep up the good work everyone! This story is awesome!

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Viji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Ah...loved it...😃

Payal's threat to khushi was...😆😆

Arnav and khushi jumping into pool and then giggling...wat a sight it would have been...😳😳

What's next?????😉😉

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rizib

@rizib

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

love the update! the way u have played with words.. like acid and base..lol! also the previous update.. it was so funny! and rom-com type... keep writing guys.. waiting to know how the plan works!!

thanks for the PM too..

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Hey!

Hope you are doing well ... 😊

Once again, another well-written chapter.

Intense at times.

Hilarious and amusing other times.

Descriptive.

Buaji is one unique character! 😆 She makes me smile at times. Other times, I just think that she is being too dominant and wayyy over the top about small matters.

Arnav and Khushi. What beautiful individuals ... What strong characters. They sure add a lot of spice to this story. Unpredictable. Even better for us as readers of this. I'm glad that they seemed to be relaxed and just had fun nearer to the end of the update.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

yeh buaji bhi naaa saare plan ka satyanash karengi
kya hai kyun peeche padd jaati hain aap inke ji
jaane dijiye naa warns plan chopat ho jayega
really that plait of hers has been a constant source of amusement for me
they way she would wrap it around herself you cant help but laugh no matter what
wow khushi now thats just great the excuses you come up with dear
and people always believe you dont they
by the way you are pagal even without any reason dear but then you already know that
waah kya imagination hai buaji ki must say she comes up with the wierdest thing to imagine for sure
chotte ke liye jyada pareshaan hain aap anji than the part
though you can hardly be blamed that chotte of yours is enough to worry anyone for sure
okay JayPee this is a good one for sure
man its gonna be even more hilarious than one thought before
why is payal locked in a bathroom and what happened to panic her like that
wow no wonder the poor thing is in full blown panic mode anyone would be for sure
uff so sharmas are here and being total pain as usual
and of course arnie is sulking hello khushi jo nahin hain
unki pataka ko aane dijiye phir dekhiyega kaise apne aap normal ho jayenge yeh
khushi of course he is your arnavji kissi aur ke kaise ho sakte hain woh
whats with people and threatening to stop khushi from having jalebis wow they sure know how to get to her right
and really did she really say about payal taking sanyas for a month to her buaji good one sweetie
what was the plan though and yes can ya hurry and get to raizada house please
quit trying to swear payal or just swear dear it will calm ya down for sure
arrey aa rahi hai woh hold your horses girl
what did you really say that mate i'll try jumping later are ya kidding me mate
what the hell is going on here and what happened to arnie man
really did that happen or have i started to hallucinate nope not hallucinating
and he is actually giggling pee rakhi hai kya dono ne
why no earth did khushi do that man oh who cares right as it lead to more moments for arhi
wow now that would be so cool if that happens what khushi wanted
and dont you dare say you wont do a collab again hey no fair we shall miss you
well anji one of the couple seem to have had their moment now for payash

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

That was awesome! Loved it!

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

awesome ArHi in the pool haha

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-Emma.K-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Comment updated on pg 15 😃

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sakhter90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Great update! I love this bold straight to the point Payal! Khushi being her crazy self and Arnav is smitten by khushi. Looks like Anjali is matchmaking!