Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

this was a great update

arshi parts were fab and funny, she pushed him into the pool and she followed suit

i love that payal isnt the traditional boring one, that was proven with the kiss and 'fu...Devi Maiyya'

haha classic buaji and her plait, had to make an entrance and how she was imagining khushi eating furniture..too funny

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

You totally rocked this episode!! I loved it..it was hilarious! I love Buaji's plait and Khushi pushing Arnav in the pool. Something I always wanted to see. Awesome job! 👏👏

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Fabulous updates... loved both the chapters...!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

You gave me awesome Buaji dialogues and mannerisms, you gave me more scope to mock Ahemji, you gave me Jab We Met, you gave me ArHi in his bedroom, looking all wet and desirable, and you tell me that you won't do collab again?

This was SO good.

I read and enjoyed every word from first to last. You should do such light hearted comedies more often...

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

part 13
awesome part...
wow this is so interesting...
the track is awesome...
cont soon dear...

PS - edit the title, part 13 and also the index...

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ducky_anne

@ducky_anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

This was great! :D Thanks!

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Love your Jaypee andhis dress sense. The line about Buaji's plait was a gem. This ffis such a stress buster. The humour quotient remains high whoever is updating and the story goes forward . I don'tknow what I have written but I just want to say that I loved the update.