SwaRon FF : The Undesired Love. Chapter 14 Updated.

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

swayam annoying sharon.. kitna tang karega ye ladka use

who's this new girl?

sharon is going to lonavala to spent some time with children

swayam bhi ane wala hai kya waha?

excited to read further..

update soon..

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

amazing update dear.. 😊

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Read all 4 chapters just now and i am loving this FF till now! Surely, Swayam and Sharon's equation is very interesting to read and who is Amy and Ally? OMG, Swayam is sort of kamina here and i am loving it. Loved Sharon's nature!

Please update soon and PM me.

PS: I dunno if i will be able to comment from next time or not but if i will read then i will surely hit the like.

-Marium

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: -Marium-
Read all 4 chapters just now and i am loving this FF till now! Surely, Swayam and Sharon's equation is very interesting to read and who is Amy and Ally? OMG, Swayam is sort of kamina here and i am loving it. Loved Sharon's nature!

Please update soon and PM me.

PS: I dunno if i will be able to comment from next time or not but if i will read then i will surely hit the like.

-Marium

finally apne socha idhar nazar ghumane ka 😆

thank you for taking out time from ure busy schedule and commenting on my work. i really appreciate it 😆

and ab jo apne comment kardiya , im thinking of unreserving my comment on ure work 😆

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Swayam's becoming obsessed with Sharon😆😉
Poor girl has become his fav target!
It was nice to see Swayam's equation with the new girl,I have a feeling that she's going to play a imp role in this story.
Sharon wanting to spend time at the orphanage was sweet.

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

chappy 3 and 4 both were superb
fantastic

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VickyLover

@VickyLover

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

LOVED the updates and its cute how swaron gt on each others nerves...
I hope to see more of swaron ahead...
thnxx for the pms and do pm me bout the future chapter and updates as well...well written 😉

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Hey Aisha, um sorry for not commenting before.
I read all the four updates and its amazing how you have turned this FF.
I like the title too, the undesired love! Niccee!
You explained swayam and sharon lives pretty well from the start! And then their fights, lol simmi is mad about swayam and sharon don't even care 😆
Who is this ammy? and what health she was talking about?
Sharon going lonavala! 😃

Really looking forward for the next one!
Great and amazing flow. 👏
Keep it up!
Update soon!

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Nikiee

@Nikiee

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Updatee !
Its been more than 30 likes ;)

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: ..Aishaa..

finally apne socha idhar nazar ghumane ka 😆
thank you for taking out time from ure busy schedule and commenting on my work. i really appreciate it 😆
and ab jo apne comment kardiya , im thinking of unreserving my comment on ure work 😆

Itna sarai taunts! 😛 LOL! 😆

Wesai na bhi karegi tu kya ho jayega coz none of my friends comment on my work.. i am used to of it from past few months..