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iwkknd12

@iwkknd12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

And slowly the iceberg is showing signs of melting...one step at a time. I love the pace, the imagery, and the gradual change in Arnav's character. He's finally learning to see things outside of his perspective.

Glad to see the update.

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shai95

@shai95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

So finally after such a long time , realisation dawned upon him ! I loved the way u described the sea . Beautiful ! Mr. Raizada , u want to apologize but don't know how to do it ? Don't worry , u have already won half the battle ! Lets see what u do to gain forgiveness !
Another lovely update Krani !
Hope to see the next one soon !

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

great update krani

cant wait to see how arnav tries to earn khushi's forgiveness and forgiveness

hope khushi doesn't give in easily

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

amazing...fabulouse writing, totally loved it...keep it up...

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Mariam

@--Amy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Congrats on the new thread :D

amazing chapter...I loved the entire thought process of Arnav...It was beautifully written!!

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DISHA

@shinaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

I dont know whether u knew or not about me.well i am following it from thread 5.and oh god what a writer u are.ur writing style there is sumthing fascinating about the way u write.the past and present merged in such a way that one time i got confused which was present and which one is arnies flashback.also that scene where u described arnies posture and finally khushis posture was mindblowing.

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

i do not know how to put into words. but your story is one of the gretest ones i have read. I am an avid reader. I have read a lot of books, but I do not know why your story touched my heart.

I am not a good writer, so i am not able to explain it.

Please please waiting for the next update.

Love you

Sri

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kunav

@kunav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Congratulations for ur new thread and a very amazing update..i loved the way Arnav is realising certain things but i think his ego will never let him bow down..hope the next update is fast too

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Thank you for another great update !! Arnav finally stopped himself from running to Aman for solutions and allowed a thought process to take place.. Her words are haunting him and he still doubts her, look forward to more..