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sslmay11

@sslmay11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Krani, I read ur last three updates in one go. I liked the way u told abt NK and Arnav's relation, they had a subtle understanding between them. How Arnav thought that Nk might 've found out strained relation with Khushi.

Also , liked the way Khushi told him to earn her forgiveness. She's very strong. Loved her here for what he is.

The last chapter was very beautiful. No conversations between characters, yet Arnav's emotions evolved slowly and he realised and also started to think how to earn her forgiveness?

Loved all three updates dear!!! Good going!!!! Eagerly waiting for next...

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san123456

@san123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Congratulations on the new thread, and you updated a new chapter on my birthday! It's one of the best presents I got this year along with my provisional liscence that arrived yesterday. Cheers, not that you knew it was my birthday. I'll read the update now.It took me three days to read this update. I started on the 25th and finished just now. It was nice to see NK in your story and I think it brought out a little green monster. Arnav seemed a bit jelous to me but I'm glad he's finally thinking about how he acts and that we got another chapter in his perspective. It really helped me understand how he thinks.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

First off before I forget Congratulations :)) I think this has to be favorite chapter yet because the readers got a glimpse of Arnav and what he is thinking and I'm not going to lie I thoroughly enjoyed each and every sentence of this update it was absolutely wonderful. Now all I want to see is how he earns her forgiveness. Coming to this honeymoon will have to bring them on more cordial terms ! Thanks for the quick update

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

hw did arnav become this businessman...hes so slow! khushi at the beach..in the water .. and he is doing what?clearing his throat! 😉😆

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

superb update i loved it sooo much

specilly the way u express every single emotion u r really the best writer i love ur work sooo much :D

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesome update..love the dialogues continue soon

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Love this story.

Thanks for updating :)

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

I had just caught hold of ur FF... It is amazing I must say.Just read all the chapters in one go...The pace with which their relationship is going on is very realistic...I love the character sketching of Arnav and Khusi...They r very much realistic characters... Waiting for ur next update...

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Just read the last 3 chapters and i'm so happy!!!!!!

I love how NK has made it his life's mission to irritate Arnav and yet they still have bond of sorts.

Arnav on the beach was so beautifully written (It was so visual) and his emotions are all over the place, loved the flashbacks to his childhood and then his argument with Khushi.

Krani you have a gift!!!!!!