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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Cngratz on strtng a new FF...
Suprb strt nd intrstng cncpt...
Cntinue soon

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Boxing, thats where men look utterly drool worthy! :D

Awesome.

Khushi's nature I love! NK , Arnav & Akash as usual Head over heels!

Beautiful work!

And if you could please decribe their muscles when they are working! :P

And ONE more thing I would like to say Is Zara you are one of the very few writers that give importance to all characters! Loved how in such a short update 😆 you bought in Aman, NK, Payal even though it was just a couple of lines! That is a true author who gives importance to all her characters! :D

Wells done looking forward to see PaYash as I've missed on the show! Love Deepali & Akshay! Mwuahh! 😳

Thanks love!

XOXOXO

Edited by -NishaSobti- - 12 years ago

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wooow very different concept...

superb writing...

awesome start...

loved all the young characters...

Hope you update it soon...

Thanks for PM..

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Looking forward to read this story of yours ...

The prologue and the first chapter are really interesting ...

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

d stry seems interestin wid intrstin charactrzatn...wil lyk to read more...update soon...

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Wow an awesome 1st chap. Loved the concept. Waiting 4 more...! Love anju.

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Congrats Zara on the new FF . Great concept by the way . A story with Boxing as the background is unique . The 1st chapter was awesome ... Arnav's childhood , his dream to become as his idol , his drunkard father was so realistic ... Hahhha looks Arnav is gonna be in hot water for pissing off khushi😆 Great start !!!!!!!!!!

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awww...its interesting... Different take in all the way...all r here already to unfold the story...and Khushi,loved this new Khushi...can i expect a pm for this ff.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

good start Zara! arnav hasn't managed to get rid of his foot in mouth disease whichever story he's in... loved the friendly chatter among all and the confidence and humor displayed by khushi... about the names, I don't believe a male would have 'kumari' as a middle name... I believe it should be 'kumar', but you could check up with someone in the know

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

wow...sexy ff...loved it ..please continue sooon?>>>>>>>>>>.

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