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@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

sounds interesting FF !!! will be looking forward to it.. something different... hope to receive pm from you.. do continue.. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

o la la i like this Arnav as Rockey The boxer

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Noni

@sweetnoni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey just read ure first part n have 2 say interesting concept:D
Its really a hatke topic 2 be honest;)

Looking 4ward 4 more!!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome start loved their first meet awesome loving the story line thanks for the pm can't wait to read more

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow u started it already amazing start love the relationship between akash n arnav always up for bromance arnav a boxer n khushi a aerobic teacher cant wait to read more loved it already thanks for the pm

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smarty94

@smarty94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

ayeeeiinnn haayyeeiinnn naye FF pe ab stalking kareingay humm😆

res.

*EDIT*

THAT WAS WOoW!!!!! usually i am left confused when writers put up the first chapter, but this has left me with a pretty clear idea of the story, although I am pretty sure, mera idea ghalat hoga, 'cause you are the writerjee here😆

while reading, i did know ke KHUSHI will be introduced as SHASHI's daughter but i totally forgot it while reading it, and i kinda felt lost that errr... don't they already know about her. But then that's the way things are when you have a veeerrryyy active imagination😆

so he has already come to her notice, having such thoughts about women, hmmm good! acha hai pehle hi notice karlia, ab mehnat karni toh paregi but ziada nahi 😆 although, as a girl i did feel a bit ajeeb, as any girl would, when you know being "spoken" about like this, but felt really good when KHUSHI gave him an even karara jawab😆

take care and oyee YOU HAVE TO HAVE TO (like ASR would say) continue this 😃

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: smarty94
ayeeeiinnn haayyeeiinnn naye FF pe ab stalking kareingay humm😆 yep back into employment you😆

res.

*EDIT*

THAT WAS WOoW!!!!! usually i am left confused when writers put up the first chapter, but this has left me with a pretty clear idea of the story, although I am pretty sure, mera idea ghalat hoga, 'cause you are the writerjee here😆 Never know...

while reading, i did know ke KHUSHI will be introduced as SHASHI's daughter but i totally forgot it while reading it, and i kinda felt lost that errr... don't they already know about her. But then that's the way things are when you have a veeerrryyy active imagination😆 LOL

so he has already come to her notice, having such thoughts about women, hmmm good! acha hai pehle hi notice karlia, ab mehnat karni toh paregi but ziada nahi 😆 although, as a girl i did feel a bit ajeeb, as any girl would, when you know being "spoken" about like this, but felt really good when KHUSHI gave him an even karara jawab😆 yep. some of men are like that. Not all, some😆

take care and oyee YOU HAVE TO HAVE TO (like ASR would say) continue this 😃 wish me luck😆

gift

xxx

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

new ff wow
interesting concept
liked it
contintue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

That was one interesting chapter and start. Khushi and arnav as usual didn't hit off well. That's the beauty of their relationship though.I can't belive Vines With Thorns is going to end. I hate it when you stories end. Atleast lucky for me u start a new one.

Liked the update

waiting to read more

continue soon

thanx for the pm

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sias2

@sias2

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

congratulation on your new FF,
the start was brilliant, i am glad that Khushi is strong woman in this one, it would treat to watch Arnav and her encounter!
looking forward to the story!!