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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

gr88888888888 concept dear...
lovd it...
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thnxxx 4 da pm...

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

OMD loved it this is a whole new concept i just cant wait to read more please pm me

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

nice start... looking forward for it

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow..am loving it👏 update the next one soon dear😃

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

WOW,Brilliant start to the FF.loved the chapter and the plot.I was surprised to see the story based on boxing.I love the sport.Thanks to CWG and Olympics in beijing and latest in London,that got me acquaintd to ths sport.Wherever Indians represented I watched it,and grasp,understand the game.Same happened with boxing,at first I was SO clueless..than I got it,it was fun to watch.Though,I and my bro had done lot of boxing..🤣U knw..the kind...mum used to blast us!😆Sigh,those childhood days..Sorry,for going tangent..😆

Anyways,the beginning gave me feeling of 70s bolly movies--where in the Hero gets motivated from hs idol to achieve hs goal..

It also gave us glimpse of how troublesome was Arnav childhood.Akash being hs cousin,So i gues Avani took him under her wings?I am just assuming.Will wait to knw more.

I LOVED Arnav & Khushi first meeting.Khushi is saucy and sexily wicked..hahaha..tough time boxer😉

Akash & NK sweet!Aman flirt😲well,thats a change nw!😳
I liked how u have introduced Shashi--honest,humble and successful person.:D

Thanks for PM.

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

W0nderful c0ncept...Arnav will really be very well suited as a b0xer. Quick questi0n, why are the guys als0 kumari here?? Arent they supp0sed t0 be kumar?? C0nfused!!