ARHI FF~Hierarchy~Th#1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-

Boxing, thats where men look utterly drool worthy! :D

Awesome.

Khushi's nature I love! NK , Arnav & Akash as usual Head over heels! LOL

Beautiful work!

And if you could please decribe their muscles when they are working! :P LOL if necassary😆

And ONE more thing I would like to say Is Zara you are one of the very few writers that give importance to all characters! Loved how in such a short update 😆 you bought in Aman, NK, Payal even though it was just a couple of lines! That is a true author who gives importance to all her characters! :D Thanks very much.I try my best.😳

Wells done looking forward to see PaYash as I've missed on the show! Love Deepali & Akshay! Mwuahh! 😳

Thanks love!

XOXOXO

Originally posted by: GrumpyBee

WOW,Brilliant start to the FF.loved the chapter and the plot.I was surprised to see the story based on boxing.I love the sport.Thanks to CWG and Olympics in beijing and latest in London,that got me acquaintd to ths sport.Wherever Indians represented I watched it,and grasp,understand the game.Same happened with boxing,at first I was SO clueless..than I got it,it was fun to watch.Though,I and my bro had done lot of boxing..🤣U knw..the kind...mum used to blast us!😆Sigh,those childhood days..Sorry,for going tangent..😆 lol. it's fine. glad you liked it.😊


Anyways,the beginning gave me feeling of 70s bolly movies--where in the Hero gets motivated from hs idol to achieve hs goal.. lol.

It also gave us glimpse of how troublesome was Arnav childhood.Akash being hs cousin,So i gues Avani took him under her wings?I am just assuming.Will wait to knw more. Akash isn't actually related to Arnav, and neither is Avni.

I LOVED Arnav & Khushi first meeting.Khushi is saucy and sexily wicked..hahaha..tough time boxer😉
Akash & NK sweet!Aman flirt😲well,thats a change nw!😳
I liked how u have introduced Shashi--honest,humble and successful person.:D thanks. Hope you enjoy the story as it goes on too.

Thanks for PM.