Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: soaps_01

Just caught up on the last some parts and they were all great!!!

Plz cont soon!



thanks 😛

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

fab parts
cont soon
laksh's family looks weird to me
wen angad hears simone's name he's face wen blank (hmm)
something happened between sameer and kripa and it seems she doesnt lyk him
and laksh is evil
luks lyk an evil family
cont soon
cant wait 4 the next part



well to find out keep reading 😉

Originally posted by: me_iq

that was an amazing part



thanks😊



thanks 😛

Originally posted by: del_geo

just read the last two parts! wonderful parts. very much suspense though, simone & sameer . neways. continue soon



thanks 😊



not fair yaaranywes it was a nice part!! cont soon


thanks 😃

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

wow memze!!!!!!! amazing story and i loved all of the parts!!!!!! laksh, sameer and simone all seen evil in a way!!!

thanks 😛



Edited by memze - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Part 8


They both lock eyes,angad moves his hand upto her face,
he didn't know what he was doing but whatever it was it felt right.he brought his face closer and now they had a 2cm distance in between them,angad was just about to kiss her when Kripa grabbed the nearest pillow and hit it on Angads face,she then ran into the bathroom blushing leaving a confused but smiling angad.he goes down to wait for her at the breakfast table.at the breakfast table angad and Kripa are both very quiet,anum notices this.

Anum-kya hua Kripa,angad aj tum dono bahut chup ho,kya hua

Angad-nahin bhabhi kuch nahin

Kripa-ha di ap kamakan pareshan horahi ho

Angad smiles at Kripa who lowers her eyes with a small smile on her face

,they both head for academy,at the academy a girl comes up to angad and Kripa,angad is shocked to see her.

Angad-simone tum

We see simone

Simone-ha angad,itni jaldi mughe boolgaye

Angad looks at simone with a look saying"tumhe kaise bhoolsakta hoon,tumne jo prithvi ke sath kiya,god I hate you"

Kripa-angad introduce nahin karvaoge

Angad-oh haan Kripa yeh simone meri friend aur simone yeh hai Kripa meri fr.. girl friend

Simone-what I mean hi,well guys I haft to go I just came to say hello to some old friends,bye angad bye Kripa(gives her a dirty look)

Simone goes from there

Kripa-pata nahin kyun angad lekin I don't think she likes me

Angad-no Kripa its nothing like that,how can anyone not like you,I mean youre sweet, caring,friendly,gourgeous and

Kripa-angad u can stop now

Angad-oh yeah

Kripa-vaise thanks for complementing me so much

Angad-your welcome sweety

Kripa-ab chale

Angad-chalo

They both go hand in hand when simone comes out with tears in her eyes,simone angrily grabs her phone and dials a number. A guy picks up from the other side

Guy-hello

Sim-bhai

Guy-ha bolo simone

Sim-bhai angad yaha tha aur bhai koi aur uske saat thi,jo hum jaante hai

Guy-kaun

Sim-kripa

Guy-wow excellent news,ab kaha bagagee

Sim-nahin bhai angad aur Kripa saat hai

Guy-matlab

Sim-theyre going out

Guy-WHAT!!

Sim-ha bhai mughe angad chahiye

Guy-okay stop worrying tumhe tumhara angad miljayega aur mughe meri Kripa.

Sim-promise

Guy-promise

Sim-thanks sameer bhai

In America

We see a strong muscular figure,he starts to laugh

Sameer-maine theen saal bhi kahi tha aura b bhi kehraha hoon ke tum sirf meri ho Kripa sirf sameer virani ki.

We now see his evil face:


preview-sameer comes to india
-a/k go to see a tarrot reader

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
awesome!!!!!!!!! evil family!!!!!!!!!!! 🤢 i was rigth... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Nice part!!!

Plz cont very soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
hey roking prtzzz...man all 3 sibling turned out 2 b devils 🤢 lekin abb ayga mazaa 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part memze 😃 awsome but there is a big big big problem!!! sameer is so ugly for kripa 🤢 😆 cont soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part memze! how did the competion go? sorry havent commented in a long time have been busy! but great parts and cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey that was a fab part memze

Iqra
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
thanks everyone for your wonderful comments
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 9

Angad and Kripa go to music academy,after there first lesson they have two free lessons so they meet up at the canteen.they both decide to go out.they hit the town centre.kripa looks around and then says

Kripa-angad lets go there

Angad looks at where kripas pointing and sees a future teller shop.

Angad-u mad Kripa,im not going there

Kripa-comeon angad

Angad-no thanks,I don't want to go to some freak shop

Kripa-ure just scared

Angad-angad khannah is not scared of anything

Kripa-is that so,then prove it

Angad-ure just doing this on purpose

Kripa-ure coming or not

Angad-chalo

They enter the shop,angad looks around the dark room filled with candles and weird smells.he looks at the cue and his eyes open wider

Angad-kripa look at the cue

Kripa-well wait comeon angad pls

Angad-but

Kripa-pls

Angad-fine,god I hate you

Kripa-I love you too(thinks)oh crap what did I say

Angad -kya kaha

Kripa-kuch nahin

Angad-u sure

Kripa-yeah

They wait in the cue

30 mins later

finally its there turn,Kripa goes in first,she sees an old lady dressed in black,Kripa sits down the old lady holds kripas hand out.

lady-beti,tum kya jaana chahati ho

Kripa-erm I don't really know,any advice about the future

Lady-advice,hmm whatever u feel,whatever u do do it fast before its too late

Kripa-main kuch samji nahin

Lady-express urself to him b4 its too late

Kripa-him(confused)who??

The bell rings,its angad turn he comes in

Lady-beti whatever I said makesure u keep it in mind

Kripa goes out confused and waits for angad,angad sits by the lady.

Angad-hiya so tell me when am I gonna die

Lady-beta we don't answer stupid questions like that

Angad-oh okay,fine tell me how many kids am I gonna have

Lady-(nods her head)

Angad-voh bhi nahin,okay kuch to batao

Lady-tell her b4 its too late

Angad-tell who

Lady-beta dekho usse batado varna ek toofan ajayega aur phir tum kabhi nahin kehpaoge

The bell rings,angad goes outside confused,he goes up to Kripa.

Angad-kripa that lady was sweet but she freaked me out

Kripa-same here,I didn't understand what she meant

Angad-nor me

Kripa-chale

Angad-ek minute

Kripa-kya

Angad takes out a present and gives it to Kripa

Angad-here

Kripa-mere liye

Angad-ha I though youll like it

Kripa opens it and finds an autograph with a pic of iqbal khan

Kripa-omg iqbal khans autograph

Angad-u like it

Kripa-yeah I love it thank you

She puts the autograph in her purse and hugs angad

Suddenly it starts to rain,Kripa gets excited and starts spinning and twirling in the rain,angad is just staring at her,her innocence,her simplicity,its just too perfect for him to believe,he starts walking towards Kripa,Kripa now sees angad coming towards her with those passionate eyes of his,angad is really close now,Kripa can hear his heartbeat rhythm,angad gives her a killer grin,Kripa gets shy and lowers her eyes,he lifts her chin up with the support of his finger and puts his arms around her waist and pushes her even more closer,angad brings his lips closer to hers and he kissed her,Kripa couldn't help but return the kiss.after 5 mins of kissing Kripa runs from there to the car blushing leaving a smiling angad.

Angad-I think im falling for her or could it be a crush,nah I know im falling for her but does she also(he remembers all the times with Kripa and smiles)well ill just haft to ask her.

He goes in the car and starts driving,Kripa trys not to stare at angad but she steals a few glances.

Kripa-(thinks)kyun main angad ke kareeb arahi hoon,kyu jab vo paas nahin hota to mughe dil mein ajeeb si akelapen mehsoos hoti haimkyun jab mein angad ke saat hoti hoon to aisa lagta hai ke mughe duniya ke sari khusiyan milgayi.kya isse hai kehte pyar kyonki agar yeh pyar hai to haan tumse pyar hai angad,I love you(smiles)

Angad-kripa

Kripa-ha

Angad-kripa vo actually mein tumse kuch kehna chahata hoon

Kripa-bolo

Angad-vo i

Kripa-u what angad

Angad-I lo

That's when Kripas cell rings.

Angad-leave it

Kripa-no it might be important(she picks the phone up)hi di,mere liye okay mein bas ponchrahi hoon

She puts the phone down

Angad-kya hua

Kripa-angad anum di ka phone tha,she said someones come to see me,ab chalo ghar chalte hai

Angad-lekin Kripa meri baat

Kripa-10.00 balcony pe vaha aram se baat karege

Angad-okay(thinks)ha vo tik rehega atleast reharse ke liye waqt to milega

They get home and Kripa is shocked to see sameer sitting on the sofa chatting to her sister.she gets angry but calms down and walks up to sameer.angad recognises sameer and goes up to him and gives him a friendly hug

Angad-wats up buddy

Kripa-angad tum sameer ko kaise jaante ho

Angad-simone ka bhai hai

Kripa-academy vali simone

Angad-ha lekin tum sameer ko kaise jaanti ho

Kripa-purana dost tha

Sameer-tha matlab Kripa

Kripa-sorry(grits her theeth)mera matlab hai

Sameer-kripa mughe tumse zaroori baat karni hai

Kripa-kaho

Sameer-yaha nahin

Anum-ill just go and get some snacks

Anum goes,Kripa hugs angad

Kripa-angad mein abhi ayyi

Angad gets happy but sameer burns in jealousy.

Preview-Angad proposes to Kripa but will Kripa say yes?

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