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Posted: 19 years ago
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wkd ff...plz carry on...get a-k 2getha quik lolz...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for ur comments i really appreciate them,next part in 20mins
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Part 10

Sameer and Kripa go to the garden

Sameer-kripa why did u hug angad

Kripa-because I did what is it to you

Sameer-what does he mean to you,kya rishta hai uska tumhare saat

Kripa-boyfriend,u do know what that means or do I need to tell you that aswell

Sameer-kripa you

Kripa-dekho sameer can you hurry my boyfriends waiting

Sameer-(grabs kripas arm)Kripa maine tumko theen saal pehle kaha tha aura b bhi kehraha hoon tum sirf meri ho

Kripa-(she pushes his arm away)aur maine bhi theen sal pehle kaha tha ke main tumharee nahi hoon.sameer do u not get it I hate you just stay away from me door raho mughse I hate u

Sameer-but I love you aur ab tum sirf meri paas rahogi

Kripa-what nonsense

Sameer-not nonsense darling kyonki agar tum mere saat nahin ayi to tumhare mom ko kya hoga

Kripa-ey agar tumne meri mom ko kuch bhi kiya ill kill you

Sameer-aur agar tum meri paas nahin ayi to mein tumhare mom ko khatam kardoonga

Kripa-just shut up

Sameer-tumhe yakeen nahin atta yeh deho

He shows her a mobile phone where it shows kripas mom tied up in a dark cell

Kripa-(crys)sameer tumne meri ma ko kaha rakha hai,tell me,I said TELL ME

Sameer-kripa kyun gussa horahi ho,ill give her back asoon as you agree to come with me

Kripa-fine lekin agar meri ma ko

Sameer-kuch nahin hoga,bas meri baat mano aur sab kuch tik hojayega aur haan ek aur baat tumhe angad ko chorna parega

Kripa-kya

Sameer-ha ya tumhare mom

Kripa-fine just give me till morning ill come with you

Sameer-tik hai anyways main chalta hoon bye sweetheart aur say sorry to your di,I cant stay as I have packing to do

Sameer goes from there while Kripa cries,in the evening angad is in his room talking on the phone to josh.

Angad-yaar josh mughse yeh sab nahin hoga I just cant

Josh-kya angad,pehli baar angad khannah has a problem asking a girl out

Angad-josh shes different from other girls,when im with her I feel so happy man its such a great feeling I mean do you know what its like to feel happy

Josh-nah and I don't think I want to know seeing what a freak its made you

Angad-what did you say repeat repeat

Josh-(scared)nothing nothing

Angad-crap its 10 I gotta go

Josh-wait

Angad-kya

Josh-good luck

Angad-thanks

Angad goes to the balcony he finds Kripa there already wearing a white trouser suit,she looked so simple but at the same time so beautiful.he goes up to Kripa who is lost in her thoughts.

Angad-kripa

Kripa-oh hi angad

Angad-hi

Kripa-so kya batana chahate the

Angad-kripa baat yeh hai ki

Kripa-bolo

Angad-kripa ive been thinking about you for a few days and

Kripa knows what Angads gonna say so she walks towards the other side of the balcony.angad goes up to her

Angad-kya hua Kripa aise kyun chalegee

Kripa-kuch nahin

Kripa was about to go when angad catches her hand and pushes her closer to him.

Angad-kuch to hai Kripa

He looks right in to kripas eyes deeply

Angad-akhir kya hai humare beech,mere kadam kyun hamesha tumhare aur badti hai,kyun tum har baar mere khayalo,sapno mein atti ho,kyun mughe tumhare siva kuch nahin sochsakta,yeh sawalo mughe din raat satati hai lekin finally mughe jawaab milgaya.i(deep brath)I love u Kripa

Kripa couldn't control herself,she quickly hugged angad.

Kripa-I love you too

They hugged for 5 mins when Kripa remembered sameer and her mom,she lets go of angad and walks backwards.

Kripa-nahin mein yeh nahin karsakti

Angad-kya hua Kripa

Kripa-nahin main tumse pyar nahin karsakti

Angad-kya

Kripa-majboori sorry angad,im really sorry

She was about to leave but angad grabs her arm

Angad-tell me

Kripa-angad

Angad-tell me kyun

Kripa-(she looks straight down)kyunki main tumse nahin balki sameer se pyar karti hoon.

She runs off from there leaving a heartbroken angad

Kripa then recives a phone call,she picks it up

Kripa-hello

Sameer-hello darling so tell me kya breakup hogaya

Kripa-sameer tum aise kaise karsakte ho,I cant believe I was once friends with you

Kripa cuts the phone and cries

lamha lamha toot gaye haiek apanese rooth gaye haimanzil par aane se pehleham raahon se chhoot gayelamha lamha toot gaye ek apanese rooth gaye jin haathon ki ham kismat theunn haathon se chhoot gayelamha lamha toot gaye - 2 judde hue haath tooti taqdeer aur kya karegi yeh lakeeron ki zanjeertera mera saath ab na hogi baattu bhi khafa main bhi khafa gam ki kaali raatsapanen sach hone se pehle ek ek karke toot gayelamha lamha toot gaye - 2

Angad gets in his car and also has tears in his eyes,he drives to the club

Preview-sameer and Kripa story

-a drunk angad and a happy simone wat can happen?

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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
awesome part!!!

i know whats gna happen with a drunk angad and a happy simone!!! 😭 😭 😭 a BAD outcome! 😭 😭 😭
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hey
that was a superb part...even i knoe wats gonna happen plz do cont soooon


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 11

At the club angad just drank and drank until he got drunk,simone was also present at the club,she noticed angad drunk and came up to him.

Simone-hi Angad

Angad-simone tum,hi(says to the waiter)ek aur

Simone-nahin angad aur nahin,look at yourself your drunk

Angad-nahin I want more none cares about me anyway so you shouldn't bother

Sione-angad chalo yaha se

Angad-simone main kaha na nahin,stop pretending to care about me

Simone-I do care for you I love you damn it

Angad starts laughing hysterically

Angad-tum mughse pyar karti ho,mughse oh no simone tumne yeh kya kardiya

Simone-kya

Angad-dekho simone love is nothing you shouldn't love people because they'll just hurt you,just hurt you

Saying this he fades out.whil simone takes angad to her house anum is chatting to Kripa.

Kripa-yeah di that's fine

Anum-r u sure you and angad will be alright well be back in a week

Kripa-yeah well be fine lekin di ap kyun goa jarahi ho

Anum-vo kya hai na sahil wanted to invest in some property over there but he couldn't due to some financial problems but laksh offered to help so me laksh and sahil are going regarding some business.

Kripa-oh okay

Anum-vaise Kripa tumne angad ko dekha

Kripa-nahin di

Anum-u sure

Kripa-yeah

Anum-pata nahin yeh ladka kaha gaya hai

anum goes while kripa sheds a few tears

kripa-im sorry angad

Kabhi Hasna Hai Kabhi Rona Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kabhi Patjhad Hai Kabhi Saawan Hai Yeh Aata Jaata Mausam Hai
Kabhi Hasna Hai Kabhi Rona Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kuch Jeene Ki Majboori Hai Kuch Is Duniya Ki Rasme Hai
Kuch Din Hai Khone Paane Ke Kuch Vaade Hai Kuch Kasme Hai
Ek Bechaini Si Hardam Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kabhi Patjhad Hai Kabhi Saawan Hai Yeh Aata Jaata Mausam Hai
Koyi Sota Hai Aanchal Ke Tale Koyi Dil Manta Ko Tarsata Hai
Kahin Mayusi Ki Dhoop Khili Kahin Pyaar Hi Pyaar Barsata Hai
Kabhi Dard Hai To Kahin Marham Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kabhi Hasna Hai Kabhi Rona Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Guzra Hua Lamho Ke Yaadein Har Waqt Hume Tadpati Hai
Ek Saya Ban Ke Aati Hai Ek Saya Ban Ke Jaati Hai
Ek Tanhai Ka Aalam Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kabhi Hasna Hai Kabhi Rona Hai Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Kabhi Patjhad Hai Kabhi Saawan Hai Yeh Aata Jaata Mausam Hai
Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai
Jeevan Sukh Dukh Ka Sangam Hai



Then we see laksh in his room

Laksh is looking at a photo which was taken two years back with anum and sahil,he gets the lighter and burns sahils part of the photo and laughs

Laksh-bas kuch dino ki baat hai phir anum aur sahil alag hojayege,sahil tumne bahut bari galti ki hai anum ko cheenkar lekin ab dekhna mein kya karta hoon,just wait and watch.

Now we see angad unconscious on simones bed he gets up and is still drunk

Angad sees simone

Angad-simone zara yaha ao

Simone listens and comes and sits next to him

Angad-pata hai simone I never want to see her again,from today angad khannah is back and ur very lucky simone because ur the first girl who spends a night with angad since his return.

He takes simone in to his arms and switches the lights off.the next morning angad wakes up,he sees simone sleeping,he remembers everthing that happen but he has no regret,he also wants the old angad to come back but whatever he does he cant because Kripa still is in his heart.he leaves simone a note and goes to the academy.anum is already gone with sahil and laksh,sameer has tooken Kripa to the airport.

Kripa-sameer tumne mughe yaha laya,hum kaha jaarahe

Smeer-ull find out wats wrong Kripa aj to tumhara mood off lagraha hai,kya hua angad ki yaad arahi hai

Josh has also come to the airport,he notices Kripa with sameer,he goes near the wall to find out wats happening.

Kripa-shut up sameer maine angad ko sirf isliye choda kyonki tumne mughe majboor kiya,tum mughe angad se alag karsakte ho lekin dil se kaise nikalooge,I mean it sameer ive done everything you said you better leave my mom.

Sameer-kripa I kidnapped your mom so you agree to come with me which you did so don't worry ill leave your mom afterall she is the reason your with me today and not that angad.

Josh who heard all this was shocked and rings angad.,angad picks up

Angad-hey josh

Josh-angad vo Kripa

Angad-pls josh maine kaha na I don't wanto know about her

Josh-but

Angad-look josh ill talk to you later bye

He hangs up,when josh turns he finds that Kripa and sameer have gone,he look around all the airport but doesn't find them.josh angrily goes to the car and drives to Angads house.

Preview-Angad finds out the truth but will he find Kripa
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kool part...get angad nd kripa bac 2getha sooon!!!!
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great part
mind-blowing
cant wait for the next part
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that was an awsome part...do cont soon
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Originally posted by: Rim_

kool part...get angad nd kripa bac 2getha sooon!!!!



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Originally posted by: soaps_01

Great Part!!!

Plz cont soon!



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Originally posted by: Rajeev fan

great part
mind-blowing
cant wait for the next part



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Originally posted by: muqualp

great part and cont soon!



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Originally posted by: me_iq

that was an awsome part...do cont soon



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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

amazing part shamiz didi!!



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