Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!)

😛Pyar ke doh deewane

Character intro

The khannah family (live in Mumbai):

Anum khannah-23yr old(played by Unum of if) after her husband's mom and dad shifted to NYC she lives with her husband and her devar in Mumbai. They only decided to stay because Angad did not want to shift. She used to be Anum Sharma.

Sahil khannah 24 yr old(played by Unum's boyfriend)-eldest son and is married to anum, he loves her a lot, he goes to office and handles the business.

Angad khannah-

A hot 19yr old, he attends music academy, he is a very friendly person at the same time he is a flirt, immature typical guy.

Sharma family(lives in nainatal)

Gayatri Sharma-she is a widow of surbhayan Sharma. She loves Kripa a lot as Kripa is her only child.

Kripa Sharma-

a sweet bubbly 18yr old girl, she loves her sister a lot, after she got married and left she really missed her. Kripa has just got an admission at music academy and is coming to stay with her sister in Mumbai.

Guys I'm posting the first part in 10 mins I hope you all liked the intro.

Part 1

We see a big mansion with a sign saying khannah mansion.the camera zooms inside the house and see a girl doing pooja,we now see that girls face its anum khannah,wife of sahil khannah.she gives the aarti to a guy sitting down watching cricket not really paying attention to anum.she goes to the tv and switches it off.

Guy-anum,yeh tumne kya kiya

We now see the guys face,its sahil khannah.

Anum-sahil you know I don't like people ignoring me and you also know I don't like watching cricket.plus my programs coming on in 10mins and I cant miss it.

Sahil-10mins right so let me watch cricket till then.

Anum-no

Sahil-fine I give up,vaise tumhara devar aj subha kaha hai.

Anum-soraha hai kyun

Sahil-well go on wake him up,he stays out half the night and sleeps all day.pagal

Anum-don't call him pagal hes your brother.

Sahil-anum tum na hamesha apne devar ke side leti ho.

Anum-shut up sahil,ill just go and wake him up.

She goes in a messy bedroom and we see a guy sleeping,she goes to him and pulls the covers off him.

Anum-angad uto

We now see a pair of brown eyes slowly open,he smiles to his bhabhi.we now see his face its Angad.

Angad-good morning bhabhi

Anum-good morning,now comeon get up now

Angad-5mins bhabhi

Anum-no Angad get up now because next time your brother will come to wake you up and you know what hes like.

Angad quickly gets up

Angad-im up im up

Anum-angad ek favour karoge

Angad-anything for u bhabhi

Anum-baat he ki meri choti behn Kripa got a admission at music academy so shes coming today by train so can you pick her up from the station.

Angad-vaise bhabhi apki behn kaise dekhti hai

Anum-angad my sister is not that type of girl so don't even try anything.

Angad-trying im not trying anything bhabhi.
Anum-yeah yeah

While Angad and anum chat abit more we see a girl watching cartoons,shes wearing her winnie the pooh pgyamas,a lady shouts her name,we see that ladys face its gayatri.the girl turns her face and we see its Kripa.her mom comes up to her and pulls her ear.

Kripa-kya muma

Gayatri-kripa your going in abit,go and get dressed

Kripa-5mins mom

Gayatri-shut up and go and get dressed.

Kripa goes and gets dressed in a red churidar with red bangles and puts light make up on.her mom comes and hugs her.

Gayatrti-beta apna dhyaan rakhna

Kripa-jee mama ap pareshan mat ho,mein anum di ki saat hoon

Gayatri-ha phir bhi khair yeh sab choro and give your mom a hug.

She hugs her mom and sets off to the station.angad also heads off to the station in his black shirt and blue faded jeans looking hot as usual.

Preview-Angad and Kripa meet

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angad-kripa meet!! 😉

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angad-kripa meet!!

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Part 2

Kripa gets off the train and looks around for mishti or a member of the family.her eyes fall on Angad,she recognises him from the wedding photos.she goes up to him and taps his shoulder,Angad looks at Kripa and gives her a really big smile.

Angad-(thinks) only someone as beautiful as her can be bhabhi's sister.

Kripa-(thinks) wow when I saw him in the photo I knew he was good-looking but close up he looks even better.

Kripa-tum Angad ho Na

Angad-yeah and u must be anum bhabhis sister.

Kripa-yep im Kripa(puts her hand out)

Angad-(joins hands)hi

They both let go of eachothers hands and went to the car,in the car Kripa kept texting someone.angad notices this.

Angad-kripa,who r u texting,(cheeky grin)boyfriend

Kripa-no stupid,I don't have a boyfriend,im just texting my friend,hes also in Mumbai.

Angad-oh okay

Kripa-vaise Angad tumhare bare mein bahut sunna hai di se.

Angad-oh,hopefully good things.

Kripa-of course,kannan,anjali,kashish

Angad-hey,yeh sab mere ex girlfriends hai,tum jaante ho inhe

Kripa-nahin,anum di tells me about your weekly routine.

Angad-yeh anum bhabhi Na

Kripa-I never understand u boys,u change girls like clothes

Angad-I don't understand girls,they always need one special person who they can love,god which idiot believes in love

Kripa-kyun you don't believe in love

Angad-no like I told you people who believe in love are idiots.

Kripa-(laughs)one day when you fall in love well see who'll be a idiot.

Angad-keep dreaming, me and love I don't think so

She receives a new text message, she reads it and turns back to Angad

Kripa-Angad, do you know where the Ritz caf is

Angad-yeah it's down the road

Kripa-can you take me there for 5mins.

Angad-sure

They enter in the caf and Kripa sees someone and runs to him and gives him a hug. Angad is left confused.angad cannot see his face as his back is turned towards him,he goes by Kripa and is shocked to see his mate prithvi.

prithvi bose-

a 18yr old music academy attender,friends with Kripa since secondary school,also friends with angad

Angad-prithvi tum

Prithvi-hey Angad(friendly hug)

Angad-prithvi tum Kripa ko kaise jaante ho.

Kripa-ill tell you,I know him since secondary school,but after college he moved from nainatal to Mumbai so I didn't get to see him but we kept in contact.

Angad-oh so you were texting prithvi before

Prithvi-yeah

They chat abit more forgetting all about the time,after half n hour Angads phone rings.he picks it up.

Angad-hello

Anum-(shouting)Angad where are u

Angad-bhabhi why r u shouting

Anum-angad ive been waiting for you,is kripa alright?

Angad-yeah bhabhi im with her now, were just coming home.

Anum-tik hai jaldi

Angad and Kripa head to the khannah mansion,anum sees Angad.

Anum-you've come,you know how long ive been waiting

Angad-sorry bhabhi

Anum-tik hai lekin Kripa kaha hai

Kripa comes from behind Angad

Kripa-right here

She hugs her sister.

Anum-anum ive missed you so much

Kripa-me to di,vaise di kab dehri ho

Anum-kya

Kripa-khush kabri

Anum-kaisi khush kabri

Kripa-di,don't u get it

Anum-no

Kripa-gosh di,im trying to say when am I getting a neice.

Anum-KRIPA!!

Kripa-okay sorry sorry,wheres jeejs

Anum-office gaya hai

Kripa-oh yeh baat hai,that's why you sent Angad,vaise acha driver hai

Angad-what,hello mein tera driver nahin hoon,wo to sirf mein anum bhabhi ke liye favour karratha

Kripa-its okay gussa kyun horahe ho,kal mughe Mumbai dekhna hai,so tumhari zaroorat paregi driver

She runs upstairs

Angad-bhabhi

Anum-jaane do Angad,Kripa bilkul tumhare tare bhi shaitaan hai

Angad-lekin vo mughe driver kyon bulari hai

Anum-mazak karri hai

Angad-ofcourse mughe pata hai ke vo mazak karri hai lekin mughe mazak pasand nahin.

Someone-sorry

Angad turns around to find Kripa who is innocently looking at Angad.just like this

Angad-kisliye

Kripa-you said you don't like me calling you driver isliye

Angad-mein tumhe maaf nahin karoonga

Kripa-kyun

Angad-tumhe saza milegee

He looks at her worried face and smiles.

Kripa-saza,kya saza,kaise saza

preview-what is kripas punishment?

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PLz cont soon

Part 3

Angad-Tumhari saza hai ki

Kripa-what

Angad-ke aj shaam hum Mumbai goomnejayege.

Kripa-saachi

Angad-ha saachi

Kripa-thanks Angad

Angad-ab chale khana khate hai

Kripa-ofcourse chalo

In the evening Kripa changes in to this:

Angad changes to this:

Kripa comes down and looks at Angad who also looks at her,Angad cannot get over how she can be so simple but at the same time so beautiful.

Kripa-wow Angad

Angad thinks she said wow because she thinks he looks hot.but instead of that Kripa says

Kripa-is that the new book

Angad notices his book

Angad-oh(saddened)ha,shazmin borrowed it

Kripa-shazmin,girlfriend hmm

Angad-no sirf meri achi dost hai

Kripa-okay Angad hum chale

Angad-ha tum gari mein jao mein abhi atta hoon

Kripa-okay(she goes to him and whispers in his ears.)vaise tum bahut ache lagre ho,mughe kuch kehne ke koi zaroorat nahin kyun kit um hamesha achelagte ho so stop frowning and smile.

She goes leaving a smiling Angad

Angad-(thinks to himself)yeh Kripa na bahut achi ladki hai,anum bhabhi ke behn hai obviously achi hogi.

Angad goes to the car and sits on the front seat.he gives a cheeky grin to Kripa.

Angad-vaise Kripa u look nice now

Kripa-what do you mean,I didn't look nice before

Angad-no I mean you looked nice before but you look even nice now.

Kripa-thanks

angad shows Kripa all the beautiful sites,they stop at the beach last.kripa and angad are sitting on the rocks.kripa is admiring the beach view while angad is admiring Kripa.

Kripa-its so beautiful

Angad-yes you are

Kripa looks back at him confused

Angad-I mean yes it is

Kripa looks at the star and a tear comes out her eyes.angad puts his hand on her shoulder.

Angad-kripa tum tik ho

Kripa-ha vo bas kuch purani yaadien bapaas agaye,kaash sameer ne mughe samajne ki koshish ki hoti

Angad-sameer,whose sameer

Kripa-none comeon(wipes her tears)

Angad-kripa ur hiding something from me,look I know I just met you today but you're my bhabhis sister and I consider you as a friend and trust me when you share things your heart becomes lighter,lekin agar tum phir bhi mughe patina nahin chahati I wont force you.

Kripa-angad aisi koi baat nahin hai,mein tumhe sab kuch bataoongi,lekin abhi nahin jab waqt sahi hai to phir batoogi

Angad-okay Kripa I respect your decision

Kripa-vaise angad vo kya hai(pointing to the other way)

Angad turns and Kripa gets sand and puts it down his shirt.

Angad-kripa mein tumhe chooronga nahin

Kripa-pehle pakdo

She runs off angad runs after her,Kripa trips and falls making angad fall on top of her.

Kripa-angad utto

Angad-no pehlo kaho sorry

Kripa-never(she sticks her tongue out)

Angad-fine mein hiloonga nahin

Kripa-angad

Angad-kripa

Kripa-fine sorry ab to uto

Angad-ha,yeh hui na baa tab tik hai

Angad gets up,Kripa goes to the car angrily

In the car

Angad-kripa

Kripa-(yells)ha ab kya

Angad-naaraz ho kya

Kripa-so

Angad-so tum mughse naraz ho

Kripa-nahin

Angad-phir gussa mein kyun ho

Kripa-mein gussa mein isliye hoon kyun ki mughe book lagi hai

Angad-itni se baat,okay batao khan eke liye kya chahiye

Kripa-icecream

Angad-kripa icecream khana nahin hai

Kripa-no mughe sirf icecream chahiye

Angad-kripa icecreams not good 4 u especially in this weather youll get a cold.

Kripa-(yells)angad r u getting icecream or not

Angad-god Kripa no need to shout,fine ill get u icecream

Kripa-thanks

He buys her icecream and watches her eat it,angad stares at her childisness and starts to laugh.

Angad-kripa tum na bilkul pagal ho

Kripa-(she stops eating and looks at angad who notices icecream on her face)kyun

Angad startys laughing even more now

Kripa(confused)angad tum bataoge ya Bandar ke tara hasoge

Angad-shakal dekhi hai apni

Kripa-ha aj subah dekhi thi,kyun

Angad-(he shows her the rear mirror)I must say Kripa you look very creamy

They both laugh

Angad-kripa if I asked you for help would you help

Kripa-help,what sort of help

Angad-erm theres this girl aleena

Kripa-and u want help to ask her out

Angad-no I need help dumping her

Kripa-dumping her

Angad-shes a sweet girl but shes got a hell of a temper,one thing I hate is that shes obsessed with make up,my money is half gone just on those artifical rubbish.

Kripa(pats his cheeks)ahh Angads scared of a girl

Angad-im not scared im frightened so what say madat karogee

Kripa-I could speak to her

Angad-really to hum abhi jaate hai

Kripa-angad if you haven't realised I got here today after a 3hour journey,then I went siteseeing with you,im really tired,ill talk to her tomorrow in academy.

Angad-sure

They get home,angad goes to his room and thinks about all the fun he had with Kripa,Kripa rings her mom and then goes to sleep.the next day Kripa wakes up and gets changed into this:

She goes to the breakfast table and sees anum and sahil eating breakfast.she sits down

Kripa-goodmorning

Sahil-morniong salli ji,u ready for academy

Kripa-yep,vaise jeejs apka stupid bhai angad kaha hai

Anum-hes sleeping

Kripa-wat ab tak soraha hai,excuse me ill just go and sort him out

She goes

Anum-poor angad

Sahil-this is going to be fun

Anum-shut up sahil

Sahil-okay okay sorry

Kripa sees angad sleeping peacefully,she gets angry and grabs the jug of the water and chucks it at him.angad quickly wakes up with a jolt,he angrily looks at Kripa.

Angad-r u mad,whyd the hell did you do that

Kripa-angad look at the time

Angad-what its only 8.30

Kripa-angad theres half n hour for academy

Angad- I don't want to go you go

He goes back in the blanket

Kripa-okay mat jao,looks like I wont be able to talk to aleena

Angad quickly wakes up

Angad-fine fine im up

Kripa-that's good,now hurry im waiting downstairs

Angad-okay

Preview-Kripa chats with aleena but it doesn't turn out how it was expected to turn out

-Angad Kripa put on an act